Full Name: Noddian Grelvar
Nickname(s): Nodd
Age: 45 (Keeps himself in condition of a late twenty year old)
Gender: Male
Home world: Corellia
Race: Human
Occupation: Space Pirate/Smuggler
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
General Description: He tends to be on the short stockier side. He stands at 5’11” with a well built carriage. His hair is short and is kept in a respectable business cut. He is clever and calculating type, looking into a situation before acting. He tends to be merciful to those whom he has defeated, but can hold a grudge like no other. He has knowledge of both the legitimate and underground business’ and thus knows how to conduct himself in both
Clothing: A formal black suit which allows reasonable mobility
Weapons: Holdout Blaster
Other Equipment: None
Transportation: YV-929 Armed Freighter
Inventory: 5800 credits (Combined amount with Primary)
Family: His wife and young son were killed in a coup of his organization
History: Noddian Grelvar was born a lowly store owner’s son on Corellia. He grew up in lower class poverty, and swore that he would not continue to suffer from it if he could help it. When he turned 18, he set in motion his rise to becoming a somewhat well known arms dealer and crime lord. He travelled to Coruscant with his knowledge of the streets and began work at the shipyards. For some years his life went thus, until he met his wife. Gredia Dergon came from a well to do family on Coruscant and thus was cut off from her family when she married someone of such low class as Noddian. Noddian soon found that he could not scratch out a decent living for himself and his wife with his shipyard salary. It was because of this that when a space pirate came to the shipyards, Noddian took him up on his offer to join his crew to make some extra money. It wasn’t long before Noddian had worked his way up in the crew. Once the former captain had died, it was Noddian who inherited the ship and its crew. Instead of continuing upon the path of a pirate, Noddian saw the potential in the more legitimate path of smuggling. He hired himself and his crew out as a smuggling group, and began to make a small fortune in arms smuggling. Noddian only transported spice and other drugs once, but it was after he saw the effects of his shipment, that he refused to ever sell such things again. This seemingly noble act along with his reputation as a Space Pirate/Smuggler brought many men with ships to serve under him. In the years that passed, his power grew until he moved his base of operations to Nar Shadda. He never quite grew to be a thorn in the side of the Hutts or the Black Sun, since he found it better not to step on any toes. However, there were still those who held grudges. Brogen Farglem, Noddian’s former first mate, had always been jealous of Noddian, and it was when Noddian’s son was born that he realized that there was no chance he could inherit the empire. Brogen therefore set into motion a coup to kill Noddian and his family. There was only one problem…Noddian lived.
It's good except for two things. First the describtion of his clothing. I know what you're talking about but you need to a be a little more describtive to make this a proper profile. Second is the money you gave yourself. Now I can accept that someone gives himself about a 1000 to start of with, but almost 6000 is too much. Other than that it's good.
Ok, changed the clothing. The only reason he has that much money is because you guys said in the secondary character thread that secondary characters share credits with your primary. I'm willing to change it, I just thought I was supposed to give him that much
Well you could be right, only I have a hard time locating the thread you're talking about, so if you could show me.