Full Name: Aaron Carr

Nickname(s): Aaron

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Homeworld: Naboo(Raised on Coruscant)

Race: Human

Occupation: Imperial

Eyes: Bright blue

Hair: Black and long

General Description: Aaron is rather open person that likes most people unless they do anything to harm him.He has . His eyes are kind but they can take huge change when he is confronted by people that mean him harm. He is rebellious in nature and has his hair long to show that to people that he meets.

Clothing: A long black coat, A Red coloured headband, Black pants and White t-shirt are what Aaron normally wears.

Weapons: N/A

Other Equipment:

Transportation: N/A

Inventory: 500 Credits(if accepted)

Family:
Father:Kantreus Carr[Deceased]
Mother:Loria Carr[Deaceased]
Brother:Arthern Carr[Deceased]

History: Growing up is never easy, We all know that from experience and it wasn't easier for Aaron Carr if it was anything it was harder. Imagine growing up when all the people around you have to much expectations too you since you are the son of a Veterean Fighter,warrior that died to defend his clan from people who sought to destroy the mandalorian clan or when your brother saves the lifes of many mandalorians by sacrificing himself. Those expectations were never easy but Aaron learned to live with them after a while but they were increasingly tiresome. His brother Arthern was 3 years older then Aaron and was often said to be good enough to become the mandalore. Arthern was elite as often was said about him and only a true son to his father. Aaron grew up only trying to exceed his brother that was his goal. They trained all their lives together and lived carelessly and happily until they heard the new that Kantreus Carr had died in order for the clan to survive. Aaron was then only 7 and didnt fully understand the meaning of death at that time. His brother looked always sad after this and silently and slowly started to die on the inside and then when Aaron was 15, Arthern had gone out for a mission but Aaron was to young to go with him. 1 year later a word passed out too Aaron that Arthern and his crew had died in the line of duty in order to secure the population of coruscant. It was then when Aaron started his rebellion against the world. He grabbed a shuttle and headed towards Tatooine in order to become a bounty hunter but after few months on Tatooine another shock struck, His mother had been assasinated. He immediatly returned to his homeplanet of Coruscant and was there at the burial. He spent 1 more year on the planet in training but then he left. He was now 18 years old and still rebellious. He headed for Nar Shadda to get into the smuggling bussiness. In Nar Shadda he joined a group a smugglers and after spending some time with them he left them and made his way for Bespin to seek out work. But that didnt work out well for him and and he only was there for 2 months before leaving again. He was now 19 year old and still looking for a job. for a year he kept on searching for a job until he heard about the empire recruitment on Kamino so he grabbed the next shuttle there and joined the empire.



RP Sample:

Aaron stood up from the ground in the fighting circle on Coruscant and brushed off some dust and then got back into fighting pose "brother you are as good as ever" Aaron said smiling. He than ran at his older brother still smiling, he was having a great time this was one of the things he liked the most. He raised his fist at his brothers chin but Arthern was too fast and dodged it easily. Aaron lost his feet and Arthern punched him in the face and for few seconds all was dark.

Aaron opened his eyes and quickly stood up and was just in time to counter his brothers kick. "Nice job Aaron, But you can do better!". Arthern jumped up and came down with a kick but Aaron was quick enought to stop it and grabbed the leg and tossed Arthern little away and as soon as Arthern was on his feet Aaron kicked at him but missed and Arthern seized the chance and pushed him out of the battle circle.

Looks good so far, but I just want to mention that the only flaw I notice is that your forget to add capital letters for planets and such. But it's really good so far... Just some advice when you finish it;)

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