Here it is everyone. My new character profile. I think it‘s a little bit better than my old one, if I do say so myself. (It’s a bit shorter, I know. Please let me know if it needs to be longer.)
Full Name: Drayl Kayda
Nickname(s): None
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Homeworld: Glee Anselm
Race: Nautolan
Occupation: Same as las time. :ph43r: In other words, Political trainee.
Eyes: Black
Hair: None
General Description: Drayl is not very remarkable when it comes to physical. He stands at 5'9, and he weighs in at 160 pounds. His skin is light blue. However, these things are not why Drayl is remembered by so many he meets. Drayl is a very thoughtful and understanding person, a trait which is only furthered by the Nautolan’s natural ability to read emotions.
Clothing: Drayl usually wears good quality clothes, although they can be a bit plain. He normally wears a pair of brown pants, with a black tunic, with dark brown leather tabbards over it. He also wears a pair of black shoes. While the more prominent Nautolans use higher quality materials on their tentacles, Drayl wears simple leather braces around them.
Weapons: None
Other Equipment: None
Transportation: None
Inventory: None
Family: Drayl's family was himself, and his parents Drothe and Anya Kayda. Drayl left his home and both of his parents a long time ago, but has done all he can to keep in touch with his parents after all that time.
History:Drayl Kayda was born on the Nautolan home planet of Glee Anselm, where he spent the entirety of his childhood under the care of both of his parents, and a next few years of his life afterwards. He was perfectly happy with the life that he had on Glee Anselm; although what Drayl really wanted to do was to leave this one planet that he had been confined to his entire life, and as much as he enjoyed his life there, he knew he could not be truly happy until he could see the vast galaxy out there with his own eyes. When Drayl was finally old enough to leave on his own, he said his goodbyes, and left to see the galaxy on his own. But Drayl did not know that the galaxy was not like it had been portrayed by all of the books he had read so long ago when he was younger, and the galaxy was different. Everywhere Drayl went, he could feel the pain and turmoil of the people that lived there, and this caused him great sadness. Drayl knew that he was supposed to help these people somehow, but how exactly would he do that? Drayl could see no way to help all of the people who were in pain, not when there were so many people out there who were in need of help. And Drayl saw how so many of the people above them, who were supposed to help them, did very little to do so, ignoring the fact that their own people were suffering every day. Some of them even made life harder for these innocent people. Finally, Drayl was able to realize: He would have helped those people if he could; he would make an effort to help these people, he wouldn‘t just stand by and let these people suffer..
RP Sample: Drayl sat on a bench, waiting patiently for something, or someone. Only a few minutes later, a nervous looking-man in a business suit with a heavily locked suitcase arrived and stopped in front of Drayl. He patted the suitcase, and looked around nervously. “All of the information I have gathered .” Drayl stood up. “There is no need to be so secretive my friend. You are doing nothing wrong. We are doing a good deed for all of the people here. That is nothing to be ashamed of.” The man in front of him seemed to relax a little at this, and Drayl smiled as he began to walk off, motioning for him to follow him. “Come on my friend. We have work to do.”
Okay we approve, so you can alter your character details on Edit Profile. Just so other members know, this is not a secondary character but a replacement for the one he had. Just remember if you had made more progress Aegis we would not have allowed this, so please don't make it happen again ;)
Also we have taken your posts back to just one, as this is a new character and you can't have the experience points from your previous involved in that.