Name: Zane Krell Dormin
Nickname(s): Zane

Gender: Male

Race: Human/Huminoid hybrid

Homeplanet: Corulag
Age: 18

Occupation: Rouge
Eyes: Blue

Hair: White

General Describtion:Zane is 18 he has short spiky white hair higher in the front, he has light blue eyes with a hint of hazel around the rims he has a small arkanian legacy on his mothers side. He is about 5.7 and in good physical shape.

Clothing: He wears a long black coat with three seperate endings and a hood. Under the coat he wears a red vest with a black light armored defensive shirt. He has black pants with small metal gaurds on his calves, knees, and shins, he wears a dark tan multi porpouse utility belt. On his feet he wears black leather boors with hard rubber soles.

Weapons: none

Transportation: none

Other Equipment: He has a leather utility belt. It has five pouches for equipment and supplies

Inventory: 500 credits in a pouch attached to his belt.

Family: Both of Zane's parents were jedi who were slaughterd in the "cleansing" of the jedi temple on Coruscant his father was Jurek Krell Dormin and his mother was Sarka Jerith who's great grand mother married an Arkanian on a trip to help her wounded brother regain his life even if it ment becoming a cyborg, that is the only other heritage zane has other than human.

History: Zanes father had a close friend on Corulag who owed him for helping him get out of alot of close calls so when Zanes father asked him to watch zane while he and Sarka were at the temple he could not say no. Zanes parents were gone most of his life up till thier death, but he could always hang out with Corlose's children he always felt more at home with his corulag family than his own parents. his parents of course tried to have as little contact with Zane as possible so as to not let anyone catch on to thier secret Zane always thought it was his fault they never seemed happy. though he was force sensitive he would never be aloud to be noticed his parents made shure of that. Corlose worked at the Sienar Advanced Research Divisionas a product scientist so when order 66 was geven and the empire began he got the news quickly fearing for Zane's saftey if the empire was to find out who Zane's parents were he sent him on a shuttle to Raltiir to meet up with Corlose's cousin until he could find his own pathand that is where Zanes saga begins


RPG Sample:

Zane finds his seat on the shuttle to ralltiir, he is nervious scared and above all else angry, he hates the empire for killing his parents, his parents for dying, and Corlose for not leting him stay and fight, but he knows he should not dwell on such feelings the.shuttle is filled and begins to take off now would be a good time to rest. Zane arives at the landing station and now must take a cab to Corlose's cousin sertuk's farm upon ariving he sees smoke billowing out of the homested Zane rushes in to find no une is there just burning furniture then he hears a cry it sounds like a little girl it could be Sertuk's daughterit is comming from a compart ment in the wall Zane opens it up to find it is Sertuk's daughter nomia Zane asks what hapend nomia wimpers that a gang of thugs known as the red wyrms took Sertuk and his wife dolina for not paying protection fees to thier leader the fang. filled with anger Zane knows what he must do track down the red wyrms and rescue his new family, but how.

This looks pretty good. What I would do though is decide on a career you would like to follow. The category we have for "Rogue" is actually just for people who are either following education in a career path but not achieved yet, or someone who hasn't decided. Plus once you choose an occupation to follow, we can then see who's responsibility you will mainly be under, mine or Kalin's.

Welcome to the Forum, both Kalin and I accept your profile. Go to My Controls and then Edit Profile, there you can add your character details which will help in the RPG, also add 500 Credits. We also invite you to join the chatbox which can be found at the bottom of each page. This allows you to chat with other members and also keep close contact with us easier if you need help.

Hope you will enjoy it here.

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