(If this is in the wrong place i am very sorry)

Full Name: Zen-Tak Low

Nickname(s): Zen

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Homeworld: (Talus orignially), Ithor

Race: Human

Occupation: Jedi

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Dark

General Description: Zen is a fairly tall young man with dark long hair, he is well built, fairly muscular but has a nasty scar across his face from the time of his parents death.

Clothing: Cream/Black Tunic with Tabards, Black trousers, Brown cloak, Dark Brown knee high boots.

Weapons: None

Other Equipment: Basic Tool Kit

Transportation: None

Inventory: Basic Tool Kit

Family: His birth parents where killed on Talus when he was two years old for aiding the rebel uprising. At the time he was staying with his Grandparents on Naboo, they gave him to his Ithorian 'parents' to hide him from the Empire, who where coming to take him away for an 'Imperial loyalist life'. His Grandparents where killed by the Imperials when it was found out they had hidden the child.
His foster parents are Folo Habat and Chia Habat, both Ithorian.


History: Zen never knew his birth parents, as a boy he was raised on Ithor by Folo and Chia, in the Ithorian capital. He studied in normal Ithorian education and later went on to become a naturist, he spent alot of time in forests watching animals and documenting them. When he became eightenn years of age his Ithorian parents thought it only fair to tell him how his parents and grandparents had died, one he found out Zen joined the Ithorian Navy as a pilot, he quickly became a top flyer as Ithorians are not egsactly known for fighting. He left the Ithorian military and is in search for the alliance hoping to get back at the Empire.

RP Sample:
IC: Zen-Tak Low awoke to the sound of shouting, he got dressed and looked at his case that held his clothes, "Urgh whats the noise".
He got him self dressed and headed down the dusty old concrete staircase of the poor hotel he had been sleeping at.
As he stepped to the bottom of the staircase he could see a fat Toydarian hovering infront of the main desk.
"You owe me money!" the Toydarian yelled, "You swindeled me for the last time!".
A large Human woman was sat behind the desk "Get lost you Bantha fodda, you lost fair and square!"Zen walked over to the pair still veyr tired, "What in the name of the force is going on? how much do you owe the Toydarian?"
"What business of yours is it?" The Toydarian snarled at Zen rasing its chubby brow.
"this Poodoo says i owe him 50 credits, but i do-" The woman was cut off by Zen.
"here chubby" Zen reached into his pocket and pulled out a credit chip, "Heres seventy five now leave her alone and let every one else get a good damb sleep" he grabbed another chip from his pocket, "And here is your 25 credits for the room"
The Toydarian snarled but left, the women said nothing but smiled slightly and Zen-Tak carried on walking, out of the front door and into the streets of Mos Eisly, Tatooines home to thugs, theifs and most space garbage arround. He looked up to see an Imperial Victory class star destroyer in orbit.
"Damb Imperials" he said to himself, "I need to get off this rock, theres nothing here". Suddenly he felt some one grab his arm.
"I hear you want to join the rebellion?" the voice whispered into his ear.
"If i do?"
"Then your talking to the right man". The man spun Zen round to reveal the face of a Chiss male, "the names Morrt, Juros Morrt, Leder of White squadran"....

[Tag: Morrt]

OOC: theres my preview hope its good :)

your history is a bit short, there should be a minimum of 300 words. Yours are only 118 + be careful for writing mistakes, try to use software such as microsoft words to clear those out.

I agree with Kalin, once you've amended the history a bit more, it should be good to go.

Full Name: Zen-Tak Low

Nickname(s): Zen

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Home world: (Talus originally), Ithor

Race: Human

Occupation: None, looking to join the Rebellion's fighter squads

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Dark

General Description: Zen is a fairly tall young man with dark long hair, he is well built, fairly muscular but has a nasty scar across his face from the time of his parents death.

Clothing: Regal Blue shirt, Black trousers, Sand colored Jacket, Dark Brown knee high boots.

Weapons: None

Other Equipment: Basic Tool Kit

Transportation: None

Inventory: Basic Tool Kit

Family: His birth parents where killed on Talus when he was two years old for aiding the rebel uprising. At the time he was staying with his Grandparents on Naboo, they gave him to his Ithorian 'parents' to hide him from the Empire, who where coming to take him away for an 'Imperial loyalist life'. His Grandparents where killed by the Imperials when it was found out they had hidden the child.
His foster parents are Folo Habat and Chia Habat, both Ithorian.


History: Zen never knew his birth parents, as a boy he was raised on Ithor by Folo and Chia, in the Ithorian capital. Between 5 and 16 years old he studied in normal Ithorian education and later went on to become a naturist, he spent allot of time in forests watching animals and documenting them. He went on to become a top naturist on Ithor at the age of 17. He was awarded by the Ithorian government for getting some close data on a predator that had been extraordinarily difficult to come by. When he became eighteen years of age his Ithorian parents thought it only fair to tell him how his parents and grandparents had died, one he found out Zen joined the Ithorian Navy as a pilot, He flew for Thorn squadron as second in command, he quickly became a top flier as Ithorians are not exactly known for fighting. he then rose high enough to be offered his own squadron but turned down the chance when he left the Ithorian military in search for the alliance hoping to get back at the Empire.
He spent time on Gamorr which was not a wise choice, he had been attacked countless items by short tempered Gamorians. He did some work for a Hutt called Gorok hoping to find a contact who knew a way to get hold of the Rebels. His search was in vain and at the age of 22 he left Gamorr. He spent another bit of time on coruscant, working for a smuggler known as Talon Karrde. He left Karrde's business when it became apparent Karrde wanted to remain neutral.
After another two years searching core planets for traces of the Rebellion he was lead to Tatooine where he is now searching for an apparrent Rebel Pilot recruit...

RP Sample:
IC: Zen-Tak Low awoke to the sound of shouting, he got dressed and looked at his case that held his clothes, "Urgh whats the noise".
He got him self dressed and headed down the dusty old concrete staircase of the poor hotel he had been sleeping at.
As he stepped to the bottom of the staircase he could see a fat Toydarian hovering in front of the main desk.
"You owe me money!" the Toydarian yelled, "You swindled me for the last time!".
A large Human woman was sat behind the desk "Get lost you Bantha fodda, you lost fair and square!"Zen walked over to the pair still very tired, "What in the name of the force is going on? how much do you owe the Toydarian?"
"What business of yours is it?" The Toydarian snarled at Zen raising its chubby brow.
"this Poodoo says i owe him 50 credits, but i do-" The woman was cut off by Zen.
"here chubby" Zen reached into his pocket and pulled out a credit chip, "Heres seventy five now leave her alone and let every one else get a good damn sleep" he grabbed another chip from his pocket, "And here is your 25 credits for the room"
The Toydarian snarled but left, the women said nothing but smiled slightly and Zen-Tak carried on walking, out of the front door and into the streets of Mos Eisly, Tatooines home to thugs, thief's and most space garbage around. He looked up to see an Imperial Victory class star destroyer in orbit.
"Damn Imperials" he said to himself, "I need to get off this rock, theres nothing here". Suddenly he felt some one grab his arm.
"I hear you want to join the rebellion?" the voice whispered into his ear.
"If i do?"
"Then your talking to the right man". The man spun Zen round to reveal the face of a Chiss male, "the names Morrt, Juros Morrt, Leader of White squadron"....

[Tag: Morrt]

OOC: theres my preview mark 2 hope its better than before

Much better, and I don't see much spelling mistakes just 2 or 3 but that's fine. So I approve.

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would it be possible for me to change my character history, most of it would be the same, its just my character is not much like the character history says he is.

sure go ahead