Full Name: Reylan Drex

Nickname(s): Rey, Drex

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Homeworld Tatooine

Race: Twilek

Occupation: None yet but intend to be a bounty hunter or any job.

Eyes: Blue

Hair: None

General Description: Tall and thin. Is a light skinned twi'lek and usually wears a tunic of some sort. He also wears anything he finds.

Clothing: Black cloak that he wears.

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Family: Parents died when he was ten, has a grandma and that is the only other family bloodline name.

History: Born on Tattoine, Reylan Drex, or better known as Rey Drex was meant to be born for one reason: danger. He loved the thrill of hunting and everything. He also loved to do anything that was activity-filled. He hated having to stay inside as a kid. His body is well adapted to outside living conditions. When he was seven, he was stranded outside for a few days. His living conditions changed so he knew he could be a great outside person.

Ever since then, he could live outside easily. His parents died when he was ten, so he lived with his grandma who he did not like since she yelled a lot. He moved out at fifteen and many people did not see him for a while until he moved to a well-known city. He has lived their since and has inspiring dreams to be a bounty hunter one day. Some say that his body can survive outside due to his species but others say he may be a bit different... possibly even a legend. His fate has not been decided but many say he is possible of great things and will do whatever to achieve that "title."

Days are lonely on the town sites for him. He does not live with anyone so he feels lonely often. Other days he does not mind. His skills with a blaster are incredible but are not always useful since he tries to use words over war. The only reason he learned these was his father taught him them at a young and tender age. He learned them after days of hard practice and lots of frustration. The city treats him nice and on occasion he visits his father's grave. He usually places a rose so others know he was there and out of plain respect for his father. His mother and father were killed in ship crash that took their lives instantly. Both were disfigured so he never seen their face again. He learned that each day is thing to treasure; not to take for granted. He has learned many of these great lessons from his father and those were from his grandma. She always spoke of them but he never listened really. His father’s words were precious to him so he treasured them with his life and everything he did. His life is average and most do not know his dark side that he can unleash on unsuspecting people. His life is just another one there in the galaxy…


RP Sample: The hunter scratched the back of his head in disbelief. “What do you mean? Am I too full of it?” He said. The man eyed his gun and the hunter’s, reassuring himself if he had a good chance. The hunter eyed his slowly wondering if he should draw it. The man stood tall as if he felt good about countering a hunter’s question.
“Well no not exactly but I do have to say why all this bloodshed?” He said. The hunter heard enough. He drew his blaster and pulled the trigger. The feeling felt amazing. He had not pulled his trigger in a while. The chemical adrenaline rushed all through him and the joy came back. The man fell, his chest caved in by the blaster shot. The hunter put the gun in the holster. A young boy walked past the green graffiti-ridden dumpster and watched the hunter walk away. He looked scared, his eyes full of fear. The hunter knew preying eyes watched him. He turned his head to try and spot whatever watched him. But the boy was not seen. The hunter walked away with his pride intact. The boy spotted the dead body on the ground. He winced at the sight and ran over to the body. A drop of a tear ran down his cheek and hit the body, gently wetting the red shirt. “Father?” The boy asked himself and that moment the sun began to rise…

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Few things though. Most important, your history is too short. It has to be double the size at least according to the rules. Your spelling is okay, but watch star wars terms. Sometimes I see that you mispell them. Words like "Tatooine" and such. I would also add since you're a Twi'lek your skin colour. But for the rest it's good, so if you expand your history, I'm sure we'll both approve your character submission.

I see you've added more to your history, but it's not quite enough, as you see in the rules, we expect a bare minimum of 400 words. Use Microsoft word, to check any spelling errors, and with this you can also count your words. Once this is corrected, we will approve your application

Okay we approve, but watch you spelling concerning Star Wars terms. Tatooine still goes uncorrected. But for now. Welcome.