Full Name: Elan Kendral
Nickname(s): Elan
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Homeworld: Coruscant
Race: Kiffar
Occupation: none (Rebel Soldier)
Eyes: Green
Hair: Brown
General Description:
Bearing the marks of his father across his face Elan has long, wild hair. He stands at about 6 foot, covered in scars from his rough up bringing his face still radiates compassion and understanding.
Clothing:
Elan’s clothes are ragged and worn a symbol of his poor status. His clothes are made out of brown wool, a gift from one of the people which he has helped. He wears thick sturdy boots.
Weapons:
none
Other Equipment:
A small pouch containing all of his belongings
Transportation:
Inventory:
His only personal belonging is his family medallion.
Family:
His family has been long lost to him. His only memories of them are the faint recollections he gets from them when he holds his medallion close to him.
History:
Elan remembers very little of his childhood. He was transported to Coruscant at a very young age with his mother who died shortly after. A kindly woman, Sanra took him in to her small apartment in west district and Elan grew up under her caring eyes. Sanra knowing the city that Elan had found himself taught him the basic skills from which he would need to survive. A way of street fighting that would allow him to defend himself.
At the age of 15 Sanra passed away leaving Elan to fend for himself. Forced to live on the streets he fell victim to a mob of attackers. As they tried to steal his single possession from him Elan managed to fend them off. Similar confrontations became common place for Elan. Through a slow and gradual process he became able defend himself against attackers, a skill that he used to help those who were less able than himself.
He quickly became well liked and known in the west district. He felt an instant affinity for those that were innocent and protected them from those that would do them harm. He did so because he felt the need to help people and was often rewarded with food and supplies that he used to survive in the harsh environment. Despite his role as the protector he felt the need to do greater good. A feeling only abated when he held his medallion close to him and felt feelings of love and affection from his family.
One evening when Elan had managed to find a shelter for himself he saw a spectacular event that changed his life forever. A group of thugs had surrounded a well dressed lady who had been walking quickly through the streets. As Elan got up to try and help the lady in distress a Jedi walked onto the scene. Dressed in traditional Jedi robes the stranger walked quickly and calmly to the scene. Without raising a single word he stopped the attack from happening. Elan fancied he could feel a strange vibration emanating from the Jedi and the thugs stopped and walked quickly away, some taking the opportunity to drop their weapons to the ground as they did so. Elan stood in awe and wonder, in a life filled with violence, even for the good of people, what the Jedi had performed was something short of a miracle. From that moment forward Elan had dreams of becoming a great man like the Jedi he had seen. Capable of bringing and end to suffering that he saw around him.
He had heard of a republic recruitment campaign happening in another part of the city, Making sure to secure his medallion in his pouch he set off to find it and fulfil his newly awakened dreams.
RP Sample:
Elan walked quickly and confidently thorough the throng of people. A republic soldier stood with a holopad at the recruitment spot. Elan could see several people being let into the small entrance who he thought must be the new recruits. “I’d like to sign up sir” Elan said confidently to the guard. The man emanated a sense of ‘good’ it bolstered Elan’s confidence.
“Are you sure lad” the man replied “do you have any training at all”. He gestured with his holopad. “It takes real commitment you know”. “I know sir” Elan replied quickly, he measured his words carefully making sure that he managed to get his thoughts through clearly. “I’m determined sir. I want to help people, no matter what the cost is to my self. He paused. “I haven’t got any training sir, will that be a problem?”
Elan gave an inward sigh of relief as the guard gave a broad smile, a smile which Elan answered with one of his own. “I think you’ll do well if you keep that attitude” the soldier replied. “Thank you sir you won’t regret it” Elan said quickly thumbing in his name on the pad. As he did so flashes of emotion filtered through him. Apprehension, expectation, fear all contrasted against his own feelings of joy. He was going to make something of himself, he would live up to Sanra’s teachings.
Well I don't see spelling mistakes so that's very good, but I do see some mistakes when it comes to star wars terms such as "Coruscant". Be mindful when you spell these terms, cause they are important in the game and could create confusion if it's spelled wrong. But if you keep your posts at this quality I certainly approve.
This is a pretty good application, once the mistakes are corrected then it will be approved in no time.
In order to go down the line to Rebel Soldier, you first must gain the trust of Bail Organa, so I would first study perhaps, find ways to get close enough to him for you to become part of the Rebel Group
Edit: Sorry found answer somewher else