Ok, here I am (again...)
Full name: Resei Mantok.
Nickname(s): Reese
Cover identity: Revan Ebony.
Age: 26, due to popular demand :P
Gender: Male.
Home world: Actually Coruscant, but prefers to say it's Tatooine.
Race: Kiffar.
Speaks: Tatooinian, Galactic Basic Standard with Coruscant and Tatooinian accent, depending on who he's speaking to...
Occupation: Sith traning or something like that
Eyes: Brown.
Hair: Dark brown.
General description: 1,75 metres, athletic, a little more than medium strong.
His hair is now a little longer than before, a bit more tangled and wild.
His eyes are cold as death itself.
If he is not directly cute/hot, he is still mysteriously enough for the lady to get interested. A little pointy ears, and white, healthy toots.
Don't often smile.
Looks a little rebellious.
He is in addition arrogant, and a real troublemaker!
Or, actually, a troublemagnet! :P
Clothing: Something simple. Black pants, white shirt, and a loose, blue west over it. Mostly he wear his armour above all of this.
Right now he's wearing a black robe as well.
Weapons: EE-3 Carbine Rifle, + the extra equipment which is in the armor, a holdout blaster and a blue lightsaber from his days as a Jedi Hunter.
Other equipment: Galaxy map holocron, Bank card.
transportation: Sith Starfighter, left on Mandalore lol
Inventory: Clothes, Bounty Hunter Armor reinforced with Zakkeg hide, fine silk clothes: white tunic, littleblue pants and littleblue west, black robe.
Family: A dead Mother, brother(?), and a dead father (Named Resei Mantok I).
He was borne on Coruscant in 35 BBY.
His older brother Conn was borne in 40 BBY, and was always his best friend during childhood.
The family lived in peace and had thanks to his father a decent amount of money coming in every month.
But times changed.
In 28 BBY, when resei was 7, his father died in a working accident.
The remaining family soon felt the ruthless grip of powerty, and his mother was forced to take work as a prostitute in the less finer streets in the capital.
In these years his brother was his only support, and an invaluable friend.
Life was not kind to the poor little family, until in the year 26 BBY when his uncle died, and left them a little money and a farm on Tatooine.
Then they left everything they had on coruscant, to start a whole new life on a whole new planet.
Since then they have lived and worked on the small moisture farm a couple of hours on a speeder away from Mos Eisley.
Life got much better then than in the crowded capital of coruscant, and he feel it is more right to call Tatooine his home planet, as it is the only place he has really felt is a home.
In 19 BBY, his brother left to attempt to join the rebels, but no one knows if he is still alive or dead...
Resei felt good at the farm, but decided to leave for new experiences. The neighbours had thought him to shoot, and he did that fairly great.
So he decided to go to mandalore and teach the ways of a Bounty hunter.
(The years are my way to count when things happened in his life, and after that calendar it is now 18 BBY. if that doesn't fit with your plans, just tell me to change this one to the correct version).
RP-sample:
When he woke up in the morning, he first didn't feel any difference.
He got dressed, still not noticing anything uncommon.
But then, as he turned towards the door, he felt something was not as supposed.
He concentrated his feelings, trying to figure out what was bothering his mind this early a morning.
Then, as a sudden stroke of lightning, he understood it.
In the very moment he started to turn around, and he felt the pain.
It was worse than anything he had ever felt, even when he had fallen down from the balcony at coruscant at the age of four.
It was like his head was set on fire, all his nerves got lamed, and in the last moment before he blacked out, he saw the stone hard face of his mentor...
"Always be prepared!" the mentor said.
It had gone one standard hour since he had awoken, and now they were shooting.
As usual, his mentor tried to unnerve him, to see how he could handle pressure.
"I am disappointed of you, boy! I really consider sending you back home to whatever hole you crept out of!"
The mentors voice once again sneaked inside his mind, but he didn't care.
He had heard worse on coruscant.
Things like ”whoreson” were the mildest things they had called him. Compared to the boys and girls of coruscant, his mentor was a newbie in the ways of spotting.
The target suddenly appeared in his sight, and in a split second he had turned, aimed and shot. Bull’s eye. His mentor couldn't complain about this one...
He was right.
The only bad thing the mentor could point at with his shoot was that it was 1/4 second slower than the camp record.
But instead of pointing at that, the mentor simply ignored it, pretending not to have seen it.
The next shot, resei thought, should have crushed his skull.
But he said nothing.
After all, he was used to worse...
I see a few spelling mistakes, but it's much better than the previous one I saw. Few things though...watch for Capital letters for names and when you start sentences.
Second it's strange that some events, you mentioned, occured like 28 years BBY. This RPG game doesn't really have a timeline. We did indeed twist a few things, but if we placed a date on the storyline of the RPG, you would say that it's surely after the Battle of Yavin. So it doesn't seem realistic that your character was born before 28 years BBY, as he is just 17, so I would think it over to change those dates to a much earlier date like to 10 or 5 years BBY.
I don't mind what you claim your homeworld is. I just want to inform you that if you are a Kiffar, your homeworld would most likely be Kiffu or Kiffex, although if I remember correctly Kiffex is mainly used to hold prisoners.
Other than that it's very good and I approve just remind what I said here.
Okay well done lewy. We have now made you an official member. You have also been given 500 Credits which is always to be on your signature..... Make sure you ALWAYS update the amount of money that you have as we will be keeping a close eye on all earnings.
Now you must choose a planet to begin on, either Coruscant or Tatooine by refering to your history. Check out both planets before you commit to one as it is best that you stay on the planet you choose for a decent amount of time so that you can learn and save up money
thank you for letting me in :)
and about the yeares, it was only so that we could see how old I.. eh, he was when things happened.
And can't Kiffar's be borne on other planets of a female Kiffar??
like though I live in Bergen, I was borne in Oslo...
just wondering...
Sure, like I said...It's your choice