Deceased Character

I think it's very well written except for a few minor mistakes such as names of planets like Tatooine and the race of Wookiees which has two "e's in the name of their race. Be mindful of these kind of mistakes as these names are very important in our RPG. If you have doubt how to spell the name of any star wars race, planet or other words, try to look them up in Wookieepedia or in the databank. These are good sources for information too. I changed a few details like your pocket money...everybody gets 500 credits to start and I removed your weapons. Nobody is allowed to start with any weapons. But I certainly approve this submission.

I approve as well

So you are now a member of the rpg and can post throughout the galaxy. Select a planet to start on, best with one of the homeworlds you mentioned.

Then focus on work/ study or both.

You also have 500 Credits now..... Which will always be kept updated on your signature....... remember to update it when your balance changes

I will move your profile to the characters forum once you have read this :)

congrats with your character! i would recommend that reading other peoples biography should not be allowed so that the character can tell their story or something (did not take the time to read the history sorry :P).

what happened to her? :huh:

Personal issues at home, so she won't be online anymore, shame cause she was a great writer. Hope everything works out for her though....