This is just a little bit of my story!

SERGEANT JOHNSON
And
The Empire of Delppar

The year is 2642 Earth is over populated and has spread out through the galaxy. The diameter of the HMFC is spread over a 100 light year radius. Divided into 4 sectors allowing ships to get where they are needed quickly and efficiently. Sector 1: alpha, sector 2: beta, sector 3: gamma and the fortified sector of the human home world: delta. The reason for such defense is because of the well known Delppar, has raged war upon the human race because they believe the human race is developing too rapidly in power and technology.

“GO, GO, GO, GO!” yelled Sergeant Johnson as he and his twenty five marines jumped off the Slazer drop ship. Their mission was to neutralize the enemy at this location and require Spectre hover wogs. “I have a ban feeling about this Sarg.,” said the marine nervous and scared. “Quit the belly aching Marine, remember you’re a leather neck,” replied Johnson. Truthfully Johnson had a ban feeling about this too. As Johnson remembered the enemy soldier who had told him about this location, he thought ‘we are idiots’. They Marines moved on into a structure full of Delppar Collosts, the Collosts are a dragon fly like alien, with green ooze flowing out of their mouths, they have a gas mask like retainer to catch the ooze. Meanwhile the elite soldiers of the Delppar, the Brutes, were smoothly advancing through the structure towards the marines and the on coming firefight.

“Fire at these bastards,” commanded Johnson, “give no mercy”. The marines opened fire almost immediately after Johnson’s order. ‘We are going to make it out of here,’ thought Johnson, “easily".

Meanwhile back on Earth President of the HMFC was under way with the plans of the elite soldier program to invade the Delppar home world. With the assistance of sixty thousand marines, including fifty six Panzer divisions, which include four hundred Scorpion tanks, eight hundred War Hogs, fifteen F19 jets and twenty Slazer drop ships.

“Ok, we know its location and we have a plan to land without any losses, should we go along with it?” asked the President, “too long have these bastards pushed us around,” replied the Council with ease, “it’s a go!”

Just after Johnson had killed the last Collost he saw the Brutes moving into a fast charge, running at him in their berserk side of their mind, one of the Brutes charged Johnson at full speed, Johnson grabbed a sticky grenade from his grenade hatch, activated it and through it at the raging Brute! The grenade stuck to the Brute, Johnson lunged out of the way just in time as the sticky grenade exploded blowing the Brute to smithereens.



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“HORAAA!” yelled the marines meanly as they secured victory. “That’s the way us Marines like to handle things,” said Johnson enthusiastically as he shot at the dead Brute
he had just killed. “Let’s move it Marines,” commanded Johnson. As they were walking down the cliff face they saw the arrangement of Spectres waiting for them, “this is Johnson requesting the x1-12 cruiser to come and pick us up and the Spectres,” requested Johnson on the HD radio, “roger,” replied Commander Felicity as she brought down her cruiser and allowed the marines to drive up the ramp with the thirteen thousand and ninety seven Spectres they had required.

The elite troop cruisers had just taken off with the marine cruisers from the space station Alpha docks, all up the ships numbered thirty six thousand, four hundred and sixty seven. “Delppar is going down,” said Elite Soldier 117 as he engaged the hyper speed system, opened a warp in space and vanished.

“HORAAA!”

Nice... really cool, just one comment... There could be more detail.
Good job!

Ok thanks for the feedback Morkskittar. :)