I had a great idea and starting drawing up an anime comic.

I can't draw and I only use MS Paint, but I tried to put some humor in it.

It was supposed to be based to the WH40K universe until it diverted into chaos due to my horrid drawing :lol:

Just follow the text bubbles from top to bottom, they're linked with lines and use squares and circles to tell who is talking, I'm no pro and don't know how to make them right :D


The link to ' Exciting Action Go!'. Its unfinished, only the first 7 frames.

http://www.livejournal.com/users/decimator/6031.html#cutid1

The last two frames are pretty funny but I don't really get the rest of it.

ummm I think your ideas and plot kinda died, but the last two frames were alright.

LOL. Nice little trooper there. :D

I get the entire thing but because of badly written English, the jokes are lost and unfunny. Re write the English and it could be funny. as it stands, it er, kinda isn't my thing