This is my first fan-fic, so please be warned it's probably completely crap!. Oh and caro/guy shippers, I'm really sorry okay. I do love you lot.

Basically this is what may have happened if Mac hadn’t had to go and be told he was dying. So the train station scene etc ends up completely different.

Disclaimer: Very unfortunately I don’t own the characters of this story, not even Dr Macartney. Although I would rather like to own Mac, because he is so very beautiful, and if Talkback Thames wish to sell him to me I would happily buy him. Or if not Mac I could be persuaded to buy Sue White, the legend that she is.

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Caroline ran her hands down her skirt again in an attempt to smooth out the non-existent creases as she scanned the station for a mop of fraise blond hair. He was going to be late if he didn’t hurry up!
Then strangely enough, there was a burst of steam, strange because there were no steam trains in the station.
“Caroline!”
[I]Mac? Oh God he's here
She turned to see him emerging from the inexplicable steam, wearing a very smart suit. Caroline knew she was holding her breath, but she didn’t seem to be able to stop.
Oh god he has got to be the most gorgeous man on the planet!

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Mac was panicking. He could not be late, he could not be late. He also felt incredibly uncomfortable in his suit. Not in the sense that it was ill fitting, but in the sense that he was far too used to wearing casual shirts and jeans or cords. Suits were generally not his thing.
Caroline is more than worth it.
He breathed a sigh of relief, he’d spotted the station and he wasn’t going to be late. Thank bloody god!
After guiding his bike into the nearest parking space, he ran off to platform 4. He just hoped she’d turned up.

What the hell? Mac thought as he was attacked by a random burst of steam. Now where exactly are the steam trains? Well he was hardly going to see her through this.
“Caroline?” He called, finding his way through the mist.
Finally he spotted her, and gasped. She looked beautiful! And she definitely took note of “wear something special”. It was then that he knew he was making the right decision.
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aw...

this looks to be a good fic!

damn you brilliant ficcers who join after lyndons start.

but you love us more. :D

aww this is lovely :)

:rolleyes: I do, I do love caromaccers much more. There are the sensible ones who realise that Mac and Caroline are meant for eachother. hee hee.

well obviously.

they ARE MEANT to BE.

just lookk at them up there in enzerthino's sig. PERFECT. :wub:

I love that pic, it makes me go all fuzzy :wub:


I'm writing the next bit, should be up in a bit.

awww I LOVE THIS!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:

Part 2 (More Station soppiness)

Caroline found it even harder to breathe normally as he made his way towards her, with that perfect smile plastered over his face.
Oh Jesus. Damn my silly lungs.
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Mac could feel his heartbeat quickening with every step that took him closer to her. What had he done to deserve such a gorgeous woman?
“Dr Todd, aren’t you a little overdressed for a trip to a train station?” Mac asked in mock bewilderment.
“I could say the same thing Dr Macartney.”
He pretended to think for a second, “Well I was supposed to be meeting a very special person at….” He checked his watch, “Well now actually, so I thought I’d better make a bit of effort.” He gestured to the suit, “Is it okay? Not too much?”
Caroline laughed, “Oh no definitely not to much. And shouldn’t you be getting off if you’re meant to be meeting this special person now?”
“Oh, Well.” He looked around him, “I can’t find anyone half as special as you right now, let alone more, so I think I’ll stay here thanks.”
Oh God, did I just say that? What if she knocks me back? Oh f*ck.

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“Oh, well…..I can’t find anyone half as special as you right now, let alone more, so I think I’ll stay here thanks.”

Caroline stood there in shocked silence. Mac just said I’m special! She thought.
Eventually she managed to string a sentence together.
“Well Dr Macartney, in that case I would be very happy for you to stay right here.” She smiled.
Mac’s face fell slightly. “What, right here? Are you sure you wouldn’t rather get on the train?”
“Well….” Caroline looked thoughtful, “I suppose I could be persuaded.”
Caroline thought her heart had completely given up beating as Mac’s lips came dangerously close to hers.
Bloody took you long enough boy!
Mac reluctantly pulled away, “Come on missy, we have all weekend for that……But right now, right now we have a train to catch.” He took her hand and lead her to the train.

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And thank you Elledoll much apprieciated. I will eventually do some scenes for the other characters but I was getting withdrawal symptons from the lack of caromac in my life!
:excited

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they are too cute for words.

:cloud so lovely

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;) yay! i'm happy now!

this is so great tinker bell!

i've been refreshing the page for the last hour, waiting for ytou to post. :D

:blush Why thank you, I'll try and write some more soon, but I'm supposed to go and tidy my room. Damn mother she doesn't understand that I have a phobia of tidiness. :angry:

Anyway thank you for the lovely comments xX

awww so sweet
tis v gd

but just one thing...y is there a question mark in Happily Ever After?
does that mean they re not going to hav a happy ending after all??? :(

OMG!

This is going to be fantastic.

*Squee* :wub:

I'm loving it sooo much

I think i'm going to cry over the cuteness of this, THIS IS WHAT SHUD HAVE HAPPENED!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:

Awwwww

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

:wub: :heart :wub: :heart :wub:

This so complete and totally amazing, cute, amazing, wonderful, cute and I love love love it! Jus so much cuteness I cant quote it all!

And sexy Mac in suit :wub:

Is now sitting here dreamily (I don't think that's a proper word) picturing Mac in a suit :wub:

This is so sweet and it's definately what should have happened in the real world of GW :angry:

Looks forward to reading more soon.

Aw, the special bit was so cutte!!!!


This is fabb!!!

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:ph43r: :ph43r: careful............. :P

love this fic!!!! urgh the talent of some people makes me want to rip my fanfic to shreds and never write another one ever!! its fanfics like these (and all the other caromac ones) that make me very confused on who i want to end up with caroline.
the last episode in the first series is doing that too....

Oh dear! Do I see u wobbeling about which ship u support NGWF? What can I say to convince you to join us!! :)

:yeeay v v v good.....althought im missing carguynneess

Part 3 - on the cliff It's not that good but I wanted to include the other characters in it somehow.

Up on the cliff Alan was trying to lighten the mood by singing.
“A is for Arseholes, B is for Bastards, C is for Cun-“
The mobile home gave an ominous creak. All three froze.
“This is just weird, like dé ja vous.” Martin whimpered.
“What?” Alan and Joanna chorused.
“Well it’s the same place as last time isn’t it. I was in the back, Mac was where you’re mu-Joanna, and Guy was where Dr Statham is sitting.”
Joanna rolled her eyes, “What’s your point midget man?”
Martin sighed, he didn’t know what his point was. He didn’t know why he stowed away. Why did he keep putting himself in life threatening situations? It was then he had a disturbing thought.
If it’s the same as last time and the van goes over the cliff, then that means mum’ll end up in a coma, Just like Mac. Oh God I don’t know if I could cope with that again.
The Mobile home gave another creak, Alan started his song once again.
“A is for Appendectomy, B is for Barium…..”

aw I love this fic, please carry on

0000!!!! more

what's wrong with joanna ending up in a coma?

can we have more soon?

Absolutely nothing at all, but then this is Martin and Joanna is his mum. More coming in a bit....I think so Sue White is in order. :hidden

Part 4 - it's crap - I'm sorry. :unsure:

Sue sat back in her chair, idly stroking Simba’s head, wondering if she really had been sacked. She hated her job that was true. But she needed it; she was a single new mother. And how was she going to stalk Dr Macartney if she wasn’t working in the hospital and able to page him whenever she liked?
She thought about her mother, about whether she would be disappointed. Then she tried to remember Joanna’s reason for sacking her. What was it again?
“Yeah, you’re fat!” Oh yeah, that was it. Was that a valid reason for sacking someone? She pulled Simba onto her lap and began whispering softly to him.

20 minutes later Sue had gathered her things, and put Simba on a lead. She saw Boyce walking in her direction and ran up to him.
“Oi, Porcelain Lady Boy! What exactly is it you do here?”
Boyce gave the mad Scot the once over, noting the red eyes and lion cub, “Anything I want, I always have the ladies falling at my feet.” He grinned mischievously.
“Not another Secretan! Listen for £20 will you pretend you’re doing work in my office and somehow wreck revenge on Joanna for me?” Sue fumbled in her pocket for her purse.
“Joanna, oh you haven’t heard? Make it 30 and you’ve got a deal.”
The pair shook hands and a £30 richer Boyce marched off to inspect his new quarters.

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Having found two unoccupied seats, Caroline and Mac sat in comfortable silence. People in the carriage smiled as they watched the happy couple, the man’s hand covering the woman’s, both with a look of absolute content.
Caroline nudged Mac, “Where is we’re going exactly? You never said.”
Mac laughed, “Ahh heaven of course.”
After a few moments of confusion Caroline smiled, “You mean Devon.”
They both laughed, “Oh yeah, sorry I always get those two confused.”
Caroline stroked his cheek affectionately. How could one man be so perfect?

Awwwwwwwww, this is so cute!!! I know I'm a CaroGuy but still. :wub: Mind you, the fact you put Mac in a suit is helping me come round to accepting the alternative train station scene. ;)

I love it all, including the stuff on the cliff, which is still very suspenseful but hilarious too, as Alan and Joanna never fail to be. I can't wait to find out how they get out of it and how scathed/unscathed they get out of it.

XTinker_Bellx, you're an amazing ficcer! Please keep going, won't you?

love the flliccie tinker

Aahh, it's so cute. They're the perfect couple. :wub:

Part 4 It's a little bit short, I appologise. I had to write something about Guy and what he's up to.

The bar was quiet that evening, perfect for someone who wished to drown their sorrows. Already a little worse for wear, Guy yelled at the bartender for another drink.
F***ing ginger poof! How is it that he always gets the girl? What does he have that I don’t?
Morals. His brain replied. Morals and ginger hair.
“Damn.”

Guy wasn’t the only one drowning their sorrows. Alone on the other side of the bar Sue White sat, her white wine untouched, tears dribbling down her blotchy face.
Today hadn’t been her day. First her King presents her with a restraining order; second she had to go through the pain of childbirth; then was the sacking. And that’s without mentioning that her baby got taken away by the RSPCA and finding out that the Lion’s Mane and the Scatterbrained Floozy had taken the weekend off. Together.
Damn that Donkey boy! He was so close to getting her to marry him, so damn close. Wait, talking of Donkey boy, isn’t that him over there? Hmm could prove to be interesting.

Guy scanned the pub, yeah it was pretty much dead. Except who was that? Was that…….Sue White? Sue, in here? Oh Shit she’s coming over here. Bollocking shitbags!

Sorry bout the language....... :ph43r:

haha made me laugh!!!

more please just a little please i do love you!!

I love this!

Part 6

Seeing as you asked so very nicely, and becuase I love you :P I'm going to dedicate this part to Jess.
Sorry if it's a bit short but my mind keeps going blank :angry: .
xXx


“I still don’t see why you had to blindfold me; I mean is it truly necessary?” Caroline complained.
Mac giggled, “Oh yeah, it’s highly, highly necessary.”
Mac led her for a short while longer and finally stopped. Gently he removed the blindfold and waited for her reaction.
Caroline gasped, “Oh Mac, it’s beautiful.” She turned to him, “Is this where we’re staying?”
He nodded smiling softly, “It’s uh actually mine, my granddad left it to me when he died.”
Caroline seemed incapable of speech and didn’t notice Mac disappearing to unlock the door. But she did notice when he reappeared lifting her up and proceeding to carry her over the threshold.
Good practice for the future. He thought causing the butterflies in his stomach to flap a little harder.

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There was only two people left in the pub, both of which were extremely drunk.
“D-do yoooooooouuu, want too come to my plaash?” Guy slurred.
Sue fell off her stool, and almost fell over again when she tried to pick herself up because she was laughing so hard. “Shure thing Donkey booooy.”
So two very drunk people left the pub, two very drunk people that were going to wake up with a little more than a hangover in the morning.

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Caroline still couldn’t talk five minutes after Mac had put her down. Mac, her Mac had taken her away to his cottage in Devon. His cottage on the cliffs......overlooking the sea. She felt like the luckiest girl alive.
Finally she was able to speak, “Mac this is beautiful.”
“Uh huh,” He moved closer to her, “Bit like you really.”
Oh God the man can kiss! She thought for the second time that day.

Awww i love this fic! Almost makes me want them to get together - almost but not quite i am a CarGuy shipper through and through but this is still really cute and well written. :wub:

aww :wub:

haha want to see what guy and sue get up to

awww I loveeeeeee this sooo much :hug :wub:

yay! thank you for detecating in to me.....if i sai love you lots and lots do we get more!!

I love this fic so much. :heart

I just go into fits of *squees* whenever i read it.
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oh dear...
sue and guy are not going to be pleased in the morning...
:unsure:

Part 7 Lol Jess yeah I think that would probably work. This is dedicated to Mia because well do I need a reason? Okay becuase she's great and finds my fanfic squee-worthy!


The emergency services arrived on the Welsh cliffs, in a whirl of sirens and flashing lights.
The radio in the police car crackled, “Umm Officer, wasn’t there supposed to be a camper van here? Over.”
The two Officers exchanged puzzled looks, “There sure is, we’re going to uh check. Over.”
“Ah,” The Chief replied.

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Caroline’s house was but 5 minutes away from the pub, but Guy and Sue took far longer in their drunken state. Guy fell into yet another bush.
“Pfft, oopsy.” He slurred as Sue snorted with laughter. She hauled him up onto his feet.
“Come ooon Secret-tan”
“Suuuee, Doo you fink we’re a bit pisshed?” Guy giggled slurring more than ever. Sue replied with yet more laughter.
After more stumbling and falling into various object/plants, they finally found themselves on Caroline’s doorstep.
Guy waited until the front door was shut before pouncing on his prey.

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“Shit,” Cursed the police Officer peering over the cliff side, “Not this again.”

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This is bliss, Caroline thought as she lay in Mac’s arms listening to his deep breathing. He looks so adorable when he’s asleep. She had only seen him asleep once, and that was in the on-call room. She had watched him a few nights after her party, trying to figure out what exactly it was that she felt for him.
Now she had no shadow of a doubt, he was her one. He always had been, it just took her a while to realise it.
She thought back to there first meeting. They were outside theatre, she was with Sue. She had seen them running towards them and her breath had caught in her throat. She remembered how had looked up from what he was doing as Sue introduced her, she remembered how his eyes met hers and how her heart stopped beating momentarily. But then he was rude to her, she hadn’t liked that. But thinking back on it now, it was funny. Had it been love at first sight? She wasn’t sure.
She heard Mac’s breathing change slightly and turned her head to look at him.
“Still awake?” He croaked sleepily, smiling softly. She nodded. “Well we’ll soon fix that.” His smile became more mischievous as he leant in to kiss her.

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Martin opened his eyes slowly. Where am I? And what the hell is that noise? He listened again. It sounded like vehicles, large vehicles. And voices, many voices. He tried to move his head but found that he couldn’t move at all. He started to panic, why can’t I move? Why am I here? Where is here? And why is there so much noise?

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oooooh sue n guy haha is there to b more on them ??? *raises eye brows franticly....the smily that does that still scares me**

loving the flic ... love you ...mmmm does that get us more xx