Title: Drabbles
Description: for anyone...
PigRescuer - June 14, 2006 11:53 AM (GMT)
OK, i don't know about anyone else, but i like just writing random drabbles about nothing. I thought I'd start this thread for those poeple who enjoy it to.
For those who don't know, a drabble is a short fic of about 100 words (give or take) it can be fluffy, sad, happy, intense or (as some people want me to write) smut or slash smut.
taht's basicaly it. if anyone has anything, please post cos then best drabble could be a lyndon.
i have written sumat but cant post till i get home cos it's on my home computer. it's a bananary kiss. :bananawhip
PigRescuer - June 15, 2006 04:55 PM (GMT)
obviously nobody else has any drabbles. :D
this is some of Caroline's musings. 101 words.
BANANA KISS
:bananawhip
Bite. Chew.
It’s a banana. Why is eating a banana so hypnotic?
Bite. Chew,
Maybe it’s not the banana. Maybe it’s who’s eating it.
Bite. Chew.
He’s not dying. He just announced it. Then sat back and ate a banana.
Bite. Chew.
She’s not marrying Guy. She can’t. Not while he’s here. Eating bananas.
Bite Chew.
He’s her yes. He always her yes. He’s her yes with bananas.
Swallow.
He’s coming here. What should she do? She laughs, to appear alluring. She looks at her magazine. Sh*t. It’s about cancer. She looks up. He’s close. He’s leaning in.
Oh, the bananas…
xjessx - June 15, 2006 05:05 PM (GMT)
bite. chew
i like
bite. chew
funny
bite. chew
write another
bite. chew
i would but lacking
swallow
inspiration
xpingux - June 15, 2006 05:06 PM (GMT)
PigRescuer - June 15, 2006 05:29 PM (GMT)
is it just me or does it seem like he's not swallowing at all?
i was gonna have that but it would be a lot longer.
you keep eating your banana, jess...
xjessx - June 15, 2006 05:40 PM (GMT)
mum went shopping so have loads
xpingux - June 15, 2006 05:42 PM (GMT)
PigRescuer - June 15, 2006 05:56 PM (GMT)
did you realise you just posted the same thing xpingux?
xpingux - June 15, 2006 06:02 PM (GMT)
IMO - June 15, 2006 08:40 PM (GMT)
:rolleyes: at xpingux
Ohhh I might have some drabbles for you once inspiration hits me in the head. :eehee
Mac'sBestGirl - June 15, 2006 09:47 PM (GMT)
i like it pigrescuer!! i will write one too soon!!
I like Jess's comment too- very clever!!!
:)
PigRescuer - June 16, 2006 09:34 AM (GMT)
yay!
i'm glad other people are encouraged to write drabbles
i find them sop much easier than ficcs cos nothing needs to be linked.
and now we have a new category for the Lyndons. :D
ophelia - June 16, 2006 11:36 AM (GMT)
you rule. you actually do. :worship2
i became annoying uninspired, but i will fix this. and write one. *nod*
PigRescuer - June 16, 2006 12:24 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (ophelia @ Jun 16 2006, 12:36 PM) |
you rule. you actually do. :worship2
i became annoying uninspired, but i will fix this. and write one. *nod* |
that really made me smile ophelia. :D
please write one!
SecretanFan - June 16, 2006 08:10 PM (GMT)
101 words too! I've never done this before and it's not the same format as yours, so...I hope it works! :D This is Guy's thoughts before the train station scene. The beginning of an alternate ending maybe?
It’s quite smoky here isn’t it? Jesus, I can barely see. Oh wait, now I can. What the hell? She’s here alone? F*ck. I wasn’t expecting that. I thought Mac would have arrived by now. Oh God, I’m going to have to talk to her now, and it’s getting so much harder to do that – every time I see her I just want to tell her how much I love her. But she doesn’t want to hear it I guess. I’ll talk to her then. We’ll wait for Mac and I’ll say goodbye to them like we planned. No more confessions.
PigRescuer - June 16, 2006 08:12 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (SecretanFan @ Jun 16 2006, 09:10 PM) |
| [b]It’s quite smoky here isn’t it? |
:D i could see him thinking that! yay another drabbler!
PLEASE remember to nominate for the Lyndons. Only 33 days left.
xjessx - June 17, 2006 12:52 PM (GMT)
oh see i need m0re of guy thoughts now
Mac'sBestGirl - June 17, 2006 04:19 PM (GMT)
My drabble- sorry if its rubbish.... i wrote it in the park! its a 110 words... is that okay?
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Honeymoon
Caroline lay in bed looking up at the ceiling. The previous day a whirlwind of memories,
White dress and wedding bells…
Billowing white fabric as she turned on the dancefloor…
I do…
Dancing, drinking, laughing, kissing…
I do…
Her amazing, handsome groom …
I do.
Caroline couldn’t suppress a giggle; it rose out of her like bubbles from the champagne. She didn’t think she’d ever felt this happy, and excited. Her future stretched out ahead of her; she could see her family, the faces of her future children.
Movement next to her, she turned and smiled into the loving eyes of her… husband… he smiled sleepily… “Good morning… Mrs. Macartney”
xjessx - June 17, 2006 04:37 PM (GMT)
they all sat in local chinese and caroline had finished her food leaving only rice, she was enjoying the evening its was nice to have mac and guy there, along with all of her collage mates. the only problem she had was that a guy called sam was stroking her leg she moved his hand but put it back and began to whisper in her ear 'your leg are to soft'
'yeah well that moisturiser for you, now move your hand before i break it'
'wow you've not changed much'
'no i have actually, but i still dont fancy you' caroline got up and walked over to the bar and brought another pint of stella, she sat opposite mac and guy, took a sip of her beer and got up again and staggered to the loo as she opened the toilet door she followed it and ended up on the floor spilling her drink, once she was finished, she began to explain to a girl what had happened and that she had not pissed on the floor. she decide to shut up and go sit down
'would you like another drink' asked dave, she shook her can, half empty
'yeah why not, i'll have what your having' after drink quite a lot they decided t move on
they all ended up standing near a bridge giggling with guy, she shummbled forward and they ended up kissing, for about five seconds before they were interupted
'were you to kissing?'
'no' mac answered as he saw the embarrssment on her face
they all ended up standing in the car part near the river, and caroline was running about with a twig and wiping random people most of which she knew, guy kept putting his arm around caroline, and when no one was looking they decided to run off they ended up hiding in some bushes hugging and then they were kissing passionatley and stop suddenly when they saw to girl go past who started laughing at them, caroline whispered to guy 's**t that fab and lana'
'what are you to doing?' shouted lana
'erm nothing we were kind of intereupted' answered guy
the opportunity arised again when no on e was looking they decided to run away again they stood behind a prickly bush kissing guy was rubbing his hand up and down the side of her leg and holding her close with the other, they looked through the bushes to see people running around looking for them
'shhhhh' guy whispered into her ear as they tryed to hide, the bush began to russel n guy began to scream slightly as the bush scratched him
'there over there'
'shit' caroline both replied and climbed out of the bush
'wow you found us good for your turn to hide'
'ohh we know you werent playing hide and seek'
guy went home so the rest of them decided to go on to a club, caroline stoof there for half an hour while with her friends giiggling
mac came and stood next to her and put his arm around her waist
'do you want another drink'
'no, im good'
'cool, i hear about guy'
'yeah everyone has' she giggled 'do you know what the time is' mac lifted his watch to her face 'im gona miss the bus'
'i'll walk you'
'awww thanks'
mac and caroline walked to the bus stop he sat and waited they sat there giggling and hugging and then kissing, caroline began to think ohhh good kisser, right ten minutes till the bus, ohh my god he is such a good kisser.
they broke apart to see her bus drive away 'ohh s**t, that was the last one'
they decided to walk back to the pub and get a taxi home later.
*more than a 100 in there* *based on my last night*
Mac'sBestGirl - June 17, 2006 05:23 PM (GMT)
I thought it had to be around 100 words? i cut mine down to get nearer 100.
xjessx - June 17, 2006 05:44 PM (GMT)
lol that is the short version of last night i tried
PigRescuer - June 17, 2006 07:56 PM (GMT)
not esxactly a drabble is it jess? :D
Mac'sBestGirl - June 17, 2006 10:44 PM (GMT)
what did u thibnk of mine PR?
PigRescuer - June 17, 2006 10:45 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Mac'sBestGirl @ Jun 17 2006, 05:19 PM) |
| “Good morning… Mrs. Macartney” |
*squee*
it was lovely!
:wub:
PigRescuer - June 18, 2006 03:48 PM (GMT)
just took osme time out form (not) doing course work to do this for debbie. hope you enjoy! (i'd proabaly do exactly what caroline does here)
A LITTLE FENCING 119 words
‘On guard!’
Mac poked Guy in the back. Guy, sighing irritably, dropped his butter knife and turned around to see Mac standing there with a sabre in his hand.
‘What the f*** do you want ginger nuts?’
Mac tossed Guy another sword and waved his sword again.
‘On Guard!’
‘For f***s sake.’ Guy rolled his eyes and jabbed at Mac. Mac dodged easily, disarmed Guy and caught the sword. He pushed up his helmet, grinning and panting.
‘You really are crap, d’you know that?’ His fraise-blonde hair was all tousled and he was sweating slightly from running round the hospital in search of Guy. Caroline wandered in, saw Mac with his swords and his chest heaving, and promptly fainted.
ElleDoll - June 18, 2006 03:50 PM (GMT)
two hot guys fencing.....nice, very nice...love this PR!!!
*debbie* - June 18, 2006 03:51 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (PigRescuer @ Jun 18 2006, 03:48 PM) |
just took osme time out form (not) doing course work to do this for debbie. hope you enjoy! (i'd proabaly do exactly what caroline does here)
A LITTLE FENCING 119 words
‘On guard!’
Mac poked Guy in the back. Guy, sighing irritably, dropped his butter knife and turned around to see Mac standing there with a sabre in his hand.
‘What the f*** do you want ginger nuts?’
Mac tossed Guy another sword and waved his sword again.
‘On Guard!’
‘For f***s sake.’ Guy rolled his eyes and jabbed at Mac. Mac dodged easily, disarmed Guy and caught the sword. He pushed up his helmet, grinning and panting.
‘You really are crap, d’you know that?’ His fraise-blonde hair was all tousled and he was sweating slightly from running round the hospital in search of Guy. Caroline wandered in, saw Mac with his swords and his chest heaving, and promptly faints. |
YAY!!!!
:woohoo
:hug
SecretanFan - June 18, 2006 03:51 PM (GMT)
:lol: I can see that being one of Mac's dreams when he's in his coma! :D
I shall have to write another one, my first wasn't too great.
PigRescuer - June 18, 2006 03:54 PM (GMT)
no yours was funny. just what guy would think.
xjessx - June 18, 2006 06:31 PM (GMT)
hahaha pr your was more than 1oo to. i just got over excited writing mine thats all :lol:
PigRescuer - June 18, 2006 06:34 PM (GMT)
at least it was close. closer than 631!
xjessx - June 18, 2006 06:59 PM (GMT)
wow it was taht much and to think i left a lot of the details out
xjessx - June 18, 2006 08:33 PM (GMT)
hahaha just hit me i had my very own carolineesck night ha and they kinda remind me of guy and mac haha
*debbie* - June 19, 2006 10:26 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (PigRescuer @ Jun 18 2006, 03:48 PM) |
| "His fraise-blonde hair was all tousled and he was sweating slightly from running round the hospital in search of Guy. Caroline wandered in, saw Mac with his swords and his chest heaving, and promptly fainted." |
i would faint!
:wub:
but when i woke up i would run and snog him!
Mac'sBestGirl - June 19, 2006 11:50 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (*debbie* @ Jun 19 2006, 10:26 AM) |
| QUOTE (PigRescuer @ Jun 18 2006, 03:48 PM) | | "His fraise-blonde hair was all tousled and he was sweating slightly from running round the hospital in search of Guy. Caroline wandered in, saw Mac with his swords and his chest heaving, and promptly fainted." |
i would faint! :wub: but when i woke up i would run and snog him!
|
I nearly fainted jus reading it!! hmmm :wub:
*debbie* - June 19, 2006 12:19 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Mac'sBestGirl @ Jun 19 2006, 11:50 AM) |
| QUOTE (*debbie* @ Jun 19 2006, 10:26 AM) | | QUOTE (PigRescuer @ Jun 18 2006, 03:48 PM) | | "His fraise-blonde hair was all tousled and he was sweating slightly from running round the hospital in search of Guy. Caroline wandered in, saw Mac with his swords and his chest heaving, and promptly fainted." |
i would faint! :wub: but when i woke up i would run and snog him!
|
I nearly fainted jus reading it!! hmmm :wub:
|
i know!
hes so...fit!
even if people say i look like him...
IM A GIRL!
im a feminine mac, only with dishwater blonde hair. aparently...
i think i look NOTHING like him.
IMO - June 21, 2006 11:17 AM (GMT)
SOMEWHERE IN MARTIN'S HEAD
(walks into doctor's staff room). Oh good no one's here. Now (sitting down and getting out the Argos catalogue) it's either the Phillips 3500 volt ultra glide with stainless steel plates, or the Rowenta with extra steam to get out the tough kinks. Ohhhhhh no sh*t it's Guy. "Martin what are you looking at, haha hair straighteners" Oh noooo here it comes. I'll never hear the end of this..... "I wouldn't get that one it leaves you with a rather lack lustra sheen, go with the Babybliss". What....... "oh thanks Guy". No did I really get away with that, wow.
100 exactly B)
kittyofdoom - June 21, 2006 11:19 AM (GMT)
Like it IMO :) very silly but fun.
IMO - June 21, 2006 11:25 AM (GMT)
CAROLINE SHOPS
She parks her car and sits writing out a list.
I NEED
2 pairs of trousers and tops
Spaced DVD
a bra
multipack of tanga's
socks
batteries
bleach
Mills and Boon? (but only if no-one's looking)
DON'T
Buy anything maroon
anymore flowery tops
anything with strips
or any sequined things or trousers with embroidary
DO
keep checking the Dulux colour wheel to make sure new things match
Caroline puts her pen away and nods confidently to herself, OK first shop is......... Monsoon. She strides confidently off across the carpark, if she's quick she can be back home in under an hour.
102
xjessx - June 21, 2006 11:49 AM (GMT)
lol i alwaysed imagined that caroline would buy her clothes from monsoon