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Title: Mac And Caroline
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newestgreenwingfan01 - July 6, 2007 07:31 AM (GMT)
Right back to the first series: this is a Caromac fic. Enjoy

First bit just to see if anyone likes it

Carolines P.O.V
Walking into the hospital on my very first day, i realise i look like death! Granted that might help me not have to take care of any patients as they might be scared of Death itself. I could not have to take care of anyone all day... Wonder if i can convince an employee i actually am Death so i can dash to a shower area and get refreshed

A scary-looking blonde woman with an expression that clearly states shell happily kill more than once if she can get away with it, approaches me and all thoughts of convincing her to let me shower fly out of my head.

Without so much as a hi or a good morning or even just a smile, she looks me up and down with a sneer and turns on her heel, marching towards the lift, indicating for me to follow.

Which i do wondering if its too late to run and hide and pretend i never arrived.

*debbie* - July 6, 2007 09:50 AM (GMT)
:lol:
brillient!
am loving it, please continue...
:wub:

amy - July 6, 2007 11:35 AM (GMT)
aw yay i love it carry on :):)

xpingux - July 6, 2007 03:41 PM (GMT)
woot woot new fic :D
love it!
more please!

IMO - July 6, 2007 04:47 PM (GMT)
Ahhh brilliant right back to the start :wub:

littlered - July 9, 2007 08:14 AM (GMT)
:excited Thank you for doing this!

newestgreenwingfan01 - July 17, 2007 07:06 PM (GMT)
Macs Voiceover

Oh yeah im the KING! I performed brilliantly in surgery, got praised by my head surgeon whos devilishly difficult to get a smile out of and I proved that Guy Valerie Secretan is a complete prat by watching him prove his "im better than you" tirade is quite frankly a load of bull by his skills of eating tea and coffee and breaking hospital property

He is still insisting hes the better man but as he looking round shiftily to try and hide the Gyneacology Ward sign he knocked down, he doesnt seem convincing.

Shame hes a giant prat but as hes my best friend I do put up with it.

Oh Angelas approaching. Lets shove Guy into a cupboard so I can quiz her about new hospital worker

IMO - July 17, 2007 08:29 PM (GMT)
:lol: That boasting is more Guylike not Mac :D

Chapman - July 17, 2007 08:32 PM (GMT)
thats EXACTLY what i was thinking!

*debbie* - July 19, 2007 10:10 AM (GMT)
omg! mac thinks like guy!!!
good that he doesn't act like it...
please continue!
:wub:

Little_Simba - July 19, 2007 02:53 PM (GMT)
New fic!!! :high :excited :excited And not a slash one, right? *eyes NGWF warily* lol ( :hug )

Love it so far, thrir thoughts are always interesting to read, especially, I believe, when they're thoughts of scenes we all know from the programme.

True, that boasting style was more Guylike than Mac but only outwardly. I bet Mac feels like that deep down sometimes. He is a man, after all. :lol:

amy - July 26, 2007 07:59 PM (GMT)
awww haha more like guy indeed
more soon please??

newestgreenwingfan01 - July 27, 2007 10:56 PM (GMT)
Macs Voiceover
So far my interrogation of Angela revealed..... f*ck all! She is a very private, un-gossip-spreading type of lady when she realises the people dying for information would gladly sleep with Guy to get any information out of her.

I wouldnt happily sleep with Guy for information, Im not that desperate for knowledge. Guy can stay trying to get anyone to sleep with him, Im not lining up shouting PICK ME, PICK ME!

Not while i have any say in the matter at any rate.


Although Angelas secrecy was annoying, her terrorising Martin proved entertaining.

*debbie* - July 28, 2007 11:03 AM (GMT)
YAY! MORE!
ah, lol, i'm loving mac, hes so... un-macish in his thoughts!

Little_Simba - July 29, 2007 05:06 PM (GMT)
Poor old Martin! Haha! I'm lovin' this. Like I said, reading characters' thoughts is always really interesting.

Good to see you busy with so much ficcing, Sally! :notworthy :excited :notworthy

tishtash - August 3, 2007 09:19 PM (GMT)
Haha i love that mac secretly is like guy

newestgreenwingfan01 - August 6, 2007 07:17 PM (GMT)
Carolines Voiceover
Is it too late to apply to a different hospital?

I hope not.

That evil hag who greeted me was bad enough but now an insane Scot woman is baring her teeth at me in what is apparently a smile and which Im trying to return as she takes a picture of me for my staff card. Fortunately the photo session ends quickly and I follow her.

We come to a sudden stop as the Scot sees a man she knows.

Hmm, quite an attractive one really if you like the ginger-haired, sarcastically funny but doesnt seem to have a first name type.

Maybe i can stick this day out for a little longer and then say goodbye to the occupants.

Although the surgeon Mac is giving me one reason to stay. Least I can ogle an attractive man while cutting people open.

XTinker_Bellx - August 6, 2007 07:21 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (newestgreenwingfan01 @ Aug 6 2007, 07:17 PM)

Hmm, quite an attractive one really if you like the ginger-haired, sarcastically funny but doesnt seem to have a first name type.




Such a Caroline thing to say!!

I love it Sally!! :wub:

QUOTE
Although the surgeon Mac is giving me one reason to stay. Least I can ogle an attractive man while cutting people open.


made me laugh :D :D

Little_Simba - August 7, 2007 12:46 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (newestgreenwingfan01 @ Aug 6 2007, 07:17 PM)
Hmm, quite an attractive one really if you like the ginger-haired, sarcastically funny but doesnt seem to have a first name type.

:lol: :lol: Great line!

Poor Caroline, though. As we know, her trouble is just beginning.

IMO - August 11, 2007 06:14 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
That evil hag who greeted me was bad enough but now an insane Scot woman is baring her teeth at me

love Caroline's thoughts. Can't quite get my head around Mac's inner thoughts, but I'm sure I'll get used to it.

:)

newestgreenwingfan01 - January 5, 2008 07:48 PM (GMT)
Mac Voiceover

Oh dear. Once again we have the person who doesnt think im funny when i say im no relation to Ringo Starr and who looks at me blankly.

Dammit im funny!

Sues cackling at my joke though. In fact shes grabbing her stomach and grinning in a scary baring teeth at me way.


Please God, dont let a crazy Scottish lady fancy me.... Particularly one who doesnt even say pull my hair like normal person and is under the strange impression that theres a live squirrel where hair on a normal person is.

Hm, Guys trying to flirt with Caroline. Knew it, the poor womans been here five seconds and already hes trying to get her clothes off...

Wait hold the phone. Did she say she had a lesbian dream?

Chapman - January 6, 2008 10:30 AM (GMT)
haha this is great, mac thoughts are almost guys words.
and the wait a minute bit! he he looking fun
keep it up

IMO - January 6, 2008 11:55 AM (GMT)
Yay a fic from newestgreenwingfan01 :thumbsup

I have an idea for my First Episode drabble, but I've still got to write it and am meant to be doing my assignment - decisions, decisions :eep

swissluvagirl - January 6, 2008 12:00 PM (GMT)
:notworthy this is awesome!
QUOTE
Wait hold the phone. Did she say she had a lesbian dream?

Chandler?...

More please:D

Little_Simba - January 7, 2008 03:56 PM (GMT)
NGWF, you're back!!!!!!! :woohoo :cheer2 :raiseroof Missed you loads! I hope you stick around again. Particularly delighted to see a fic of yours back in action. Keep it up!

newestgreenwingfan01 - January 9, 2008 08:25 PM (GMT)
Carolines Voiceover

While rummaging in my car wondering if I could do a Scrubs and have a kip in the on-call room for tonight instead of going to a hotel, the dark-haired aenaesthitist approached and we really hit it off. Hes very charming - too charming actually - but he makes me laugh.

He offered to let me stay in his flat as hes out all night.

Hes quite a sweet guy actually. I wish all guys were like him - you know genuinely concerned not just trying to sleep with me just cos im a new girl or woman actually.

XTill_Masterx - January 9, 2008 10:04 PM (GMT)
Poor niave Caroline.

Keep it coming Sally :D

Little_Simba - January 10, 2008 05:23 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (newestgreenwingfan01 @ Jan 9 2008, 08:25 PM)
Hes quite a sweet guy actually. I wish all guys were like him - you know genuinely concerned not just trying to sleep with me just cos im a new girl or woman actually.

HAHAHA!! Poor old Caro. I love reading her thoughts.

:worship2

newestgreenwingfan01 - January 11, 2008 04:01 PM (GMT)
Carolines Voiceover

Well ive proven myself to be the worlds biggest idiot.

Guy was lying about the spare room, Ive just blocked his toilet in ways Im determinedly not thinking about and hes gone swanning off to stay somewhere else, giving me his room.

Hmm, hes got a lot of photos of him and Mac round his room. They laugh a lot in photos.


Awwww no! Mac! Hes definitely gonna find out about this and hed hate me forever!!


Why didnt i stay at the hotel?!

IMO - January 13, 2008 10:12 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
just cos im a new girl or woman actually
haha I love this bit, poor Caroline having to remind herself that she is a woman :lol:

newestgreenwingfan01 - January 20, 2008 10:11 AM (GMT)
Macs Voiceover

I cant believe it.

I honestly cant.

Guy and Caroline? She slept with him already? After a day working here?

No she cant have done, she didnt seem the type.

Why am i so concerned even if she HAS slept with Guy?!

Its not like i fancy her or anything

I mean shes nice, cute, funny, smart and attractive but shes also a bit unsure of herself in an endearing way

Okay not convincing myself i dont fancy her. Best act like i dont outwardly.

Its not like shes gonna fancy me anyway after me being so hositle to her cos I was jealous.

Little_Simba - February 13, 2008 06:16 PM (GMT)
At least Mac can eventually be honest with himself. You can tell he's struggling but he knows his inner self v. well when he has to face up to it. Aw, see just how bothered he is about Guy and Caroline. I love this, NGWF. :worship2




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