Now
He was allowed to dream of her sometimes.
They both could.
They both did.
Both with their own memories, treasured delicately.
Dreaming about her wasn't werid.
Sharing her bed just to be near was werid.
Werid was rolling over and snuggling into another man's chest, when they had expected it to be her.

Then
"No" He shouted again, his voice crackling
"Guy" She said. Touching his chest, trying to calm him down.
"What? No! What?" He sniffled "Shut up! Shut up!" Guy shouted louder, his voice fuller than before.
He turned.
Paused.
Walked out.
"Mac" She said hoping for some comfort, but he was crying.
Mac was crying. Real tears spreading across his pale cheeks.
With all the effort left in him he shook his head, throwing his hair across his face.

oh oh oh WHATS HAPPENED??? eeeee....post more please. :P

Ooohooo sounds like a goodun...please add some more, I am intrigued.

ooh yay you posted it :) i know what's going on hehe :D

can't wait for more jessie that was a fab start

New fic! yay for you. I feel ll left out and want to know whats going on too!!

Now
Every morning was their routine.
Every morning they tried to fill a gap.
Every morning Mac makes extremly stronge coffee, the way she liked it.
Every morning Guy makes pancakes, just the way she had taught him.

Then
"Is drowning them in lemon a part of it?" Guy said, while she squeezed the lemon over the fresh pancakes.
"Yes it is" She smiled up at him "Sugar!"
"You're sweet enough!" Mac said poking the soft skin above her hip.
They both stared at her as she dusted the kitchen table with tiny crystals of sugar.
The way she bit her lip, when she consentrated. How she brushed hair out of her eye's in slow motion, had them transfixed.

what are they togetehr to get over caroline? thats so sad!

Eep this is sad! Is Caroline dead? :o and I love the 'then' parts especially and the 'now' parts are so sad but also beautiful. Please add more soon!

this is fab you have to gets a posting i can't wait to find out whats going on...is she really.......*whispers* dead? :unsure:

ooooh intriging the whole past and present thing is ace

I love this fic already - more!

Now
Mac was the one that sliped the silver hanger into the arm holes of the blue cotton shirt.
He would pass it to Guy, who would hand it in the large wardrobe.
They liked their routines.
It was there way of keeping things normal.

Guy knocked a hanger and a lilac cardigan dropped to the bottom of the wardrobe. He picked it up, and sniffed the gentle scent of Caroline, bringing tears to his eyes.
He smoothed the soft fabric down. His hands caught on an area that was stiff.
He pulled out a piece of card and sat onher bed.
Mac sat down next to him, holding him as he cried into his shoulder.
Mac stared at the white card in his hand.

Then
The sun was burning orange, like the unopened roses in the pot to the left of her.
She had hundreds of little rectangle cards, each one numbered with the same message.
1. I Love You X
2. I Love You X
3. I Love You X
4. I Love You X
Once she had written on each card, she went about her buissness hiding them in places, that she knew they would eventually find.

aww that is soo sweet i love that idea of the cards jess wel done hunny

dude you are gonna make me CRY!!!! :cry

so, is caroline dead or summat?

really confused me when i started to read this but i think i get it now.

The little messages are TOO CUTE! :cry

So caro/mac, caro/guy, mac/guy and caro/mac/guy all in one fic? The combinedness of it all!

aww, this is really sad. I haven't read a fic about Caroline dying before (I assume that's what's happened), it's awesome in a sad way...

I do like a bit of Mac/Caro/Guy cos then I don't feel sorry for any of them and the idea about the cards is so sweet. But where is Caroline??

awwww those notes seem so cute and thoughful. im guessing caroline is pretty much dead it would just be heartless if she turned out not to be and shed just left mac and guy to wallow in their lost love

:sob oh this is so sad

but very good more please :D

aww!! :cry Jess this is really sad! :(

Wow, Jessie, this is so beautifully done - I love the premise and the style is so original!

Well done lovely xxxxxx

Ooooo intriguing - is Caroline dead though :unsure: Or is it all a dream :unsure:

Ohhh Thank you everyone for your lovely comments lol i never normally get a response like this to a flick so thank you it means a lot that you are bothering to read! I'll post more tomorrow!!

Sorry for crappness im trying to fill it out a little before the end

Now
At the time a dog was appropiate.
It made Caroline happy and she spoilt the thing rotten.
"Daffodil" Mac called, slapping his hands against his thighs "Come on, Girl" he said enthusiastically.
The black Labrador lept through the back door. She dropped the soggy tennis ball by his feet.
Enthralled by him, she stared up, panting, wagging her tail back and forth.

Then
"This one, she's the one" Caroline beamed, scratching behind the small puppy's ear.
"Look at those little eyes" Guy cooed
"Take it easy Secretan" Mac laughed "She too young for you" he added.
"Shut up, im not interested in animals, besides your the same species' He scolled "God, could you imagine the ugly puppies they would have?"
"Stop it Guy" She said while trying to keep a smile appearing on her face.
"Which one was she again?" Guy said looking down at the five puppy's running around.

aww bless :( :(
more soon please Jess! :)

Aw I don't want you to end it - they're like little slices of Green Wing everytime :)

I have puppy envy!

aww aww puppies and gw too cute!

Hehe, I liek the idea that htey lost which puppy it was.
Seems sad though, I'm intrigued,more!