"So can I get the bike?" Tori smiled at her mother hopefully. Before it was easy getting stuff from her. Ever since Guy walked into the picture stuff was different.

She had got used to only making two cups of tea, setting the table for two. She was her mum's only one, she never had to share her before.

"You know usually kids your age just want a pony, not moterbikes."
"Well after riding on dads last week I know I want one"
"You what?"
"I wore a helmet!"
"I told him no!" And so the argument began, back and forth. Wether her dad was a suitible parent, and how his reclessness was going to kill them both one day.
"He's a fucking doctor he can't be that bad"

Caroline sighed. She couldn't win any more. She understood that Tori needed her dad, but why couldn't she accept Guy as well. It was all getting so complicated. Why couldn't things be back the way they were.

*thats all i got so far, twas the end of a history exam and I was vair bored. More l8r*

Yes why is it so complicated. Caroline just go to Mac :o

TEXT MESSAGE FROM MAC TO TORI

[FONT=Optima]HEY SWEET HEART. MUM SAYS YOUR COMING OVER AT 6. PIZZA AND MOVIE ARE READY, STALL YOUR MUM I WILL PICK YOU UP ON BIKE. THAT WILL SHOW HER TO DIVORCE ME. YOU MUST TEACH ME HOW TO TXT.xxDADDY
[FONT=Arial] Tori sighed. This was always the way now. Mum and Dad trying to piss eachother off, tricking eachother. This was what came of having doctors for parents.

Guy was taking her to the local pool in his car now. He was so embarrassing. Radio turned up full blast, head banging away, Freddie Mercuary yelling so loud it was making the car vibrate. The two of them swimming together was supposed to be their way of bonding but to Tori, her idea of bonding was not her trying to swim whilst watching a flailing overwate anithatist at the other side of the pool , trying to challenge her to pick his goggles from the bottem of the pool. It's not like Guy wasn't making the effot, but him and Tori just didn’t click. He was so smarmy and true to what her father had warned her, could never let go or loose a competion gracefully.

They arrived at the pool, and after 10 minutes of silence, Guy was glad to get out into the open.
"Right lets go swimming!"
"Don't act like your exited about this either."
“Yeah well at least I’m man enough to suck it up and swallow it.”
“God your sick you know that?”
“N.. I actually didn’t mean that.”
“What ever Guy. Now lets get this over with. I just wanna get home so I can see my dad, and this,” She made over exaggerated air quotes with her hands putting on a cheesy american accent“’family fun bonding time’ is stopping me, so don’t expect me to be happy about this.”

Guy’s face fell. For once in his life he was being honest and at least trying to be nice about the situation, and the girl was just throwing it back in his face! Well he’d show her. He was 10 times, no 100 times better than Mac could ever be at being a dad. He would give Tori the time of her life. Well as much that could be expected in a public swimming pool with no slide or jets.


Caroline sat at home waiting angsiosly. Maybe the bonding thing wasn’t such a good idea. Tori already resented her so much already… She lent over to pick up the photo album. It was her and Tori’s favourite one, it had her Mac and Tori in every photo, all smiling, happy, in funny poses. Thumming through it Caroline felt the hot prickle of tears coming… she wished it would work out sometime. God knows they all needed some happiness now and again. The phone jolted her from her thoughts.

“Hello” she sniffed.”Who’s calling please”
“Oh Caroline hi. It’s Mac”
“I know!”
“Oh course you did. Listen I was just wondering weather Tori can come over a bit earlier, only I’ve got something a cool planned and I need her to make this very cool thing work.”
“No sorry”
“What do you mean no.”
“She out with… her boyfriend” Caroline couldn’t tell him the Guy and Tori were bonding. Mac hated the fact that Tori got to see Guy at all after the way he had broken up their relationship.
“She didn’t tell me”
“Well she doesn’t have to tell you everything. 6 it is and don’t you dare put her on that bloody bike.”
“Oh shame. You used to like that. Remember when you screamed like a loony all the way to work”
“Hmmm… just no bike ok. I don’t want my only daughter killed”
“Oh I see, and you think I would purposely put her in that danger. Right that sounds just like me, setting something great up only to ruin it. Oh no! That’s right, that was you. She better be there at 5 or I’ll my layer will be in touch.” The line went dead.
“Oh fucking bollocking shit bags!” She picked up the phone and called Guy’s number.

Aw divorced Mac and Caro is sad :( but it's great writing!

No this is all wrong. It's just wrong. And Mac being nasty. It's just wrong :sob

"Fucking hell that was amazing!"

Scrapping the swimming pool idea was defintily a good move. After Guy had a 'heated debate' wiht the receptionist about the price of their tickets,("£5 fucking pounds to have 2 hours in a glorified piss filled bath!") he had decided to introduce Tori to a real sport. Ginger nuts may be able to wow her with metal and leather, but Guy could show her how to play a real game of guyball

*sorry IT teach has just walked in. Wrote this bit in science and my teach saw and looked confused...*

"That classical heist, was pretty fucking hard! "Guy rubbed his jaw. He had underestimated Tori. This was no beginners luck, she was a natural at Guyball. Maybe he should enter her in world competions , she would win hands down. His sports dad hopes and dreams were interrupted by the buzzing as his phone.

*R.S calls will write more in like an hour*

ohhhhhhh!
this is going to be interesting...

*sits and waits for more*

*I lied. This is way more than a hour...quite a lot more really … ah well. Here’s the next bit. *

"Guy were the hell have you been! Mac is furious you're not home!"
"What! I thought she was supposed to come home at 6 so he could take her away"
"This isn't the time, and don't let Tori here you say that..."
"Listen just give us a bit of time alright"
"No it's not fucking alright. Mac is here, in the kitchen now..."
"Right I'm there. Come on fatty lets get home, your fucking puff of a dad has summoned you."
"Guy don't call her that, you heard what I said."
"Yeah yeah..." He hung up, and smirked at Tori, and lifted his shot glass of Vodka. She did the same, and laughed hysterically.

Alcohol was a new taste for Tori and she liked it. She had always been the good girl at parties, always remembering her mum’s stern words and her dad’s warning about how it fucks up your liver, which makes his job harder. Apart from feeling slightly sick, she felt pretty damn hot. She could do anything, she could be anyone. Guy wouldn’t care. He was pretty cool actually. After showing him how she could play that game he taught her, which required a lot of skill, she could have robbed a bank and Guy wouldn't have cared.

After a further fifteen minutes of mindless laughing, the two rose from their bar stools. Guy strode confindently towards the door, not quite sure how he was going to get home. Behind him came a loud ‘crash’. He whipped around to see, a half laughing, half crying Tori on the floor. Guy ran towards her, and as he got closer, he saw the familiar sight blood escaping from a gash in her head!
“f*ck…”

Guy :o What are you doing to Caroline and Mac's daughter!?!?!

:o
Bad Guy for leading Tori astray and getting her drunk. :angry:
And now shes hurt herself...uhoh. I see angry Mac chapter approaching.

But Mac and Caroline.....divorced! Noo! :(

Post more soon. This is a good fic, and I want to know what happens when Mac finds out what has happened to his daughter.

"Ok, we have been here for an hour. Where the hell is Guy with my daughter."
"Our daughter." Why did he always say my daughter? Was she a failier as a mother, that she had let a 15 year old go off, with a possibly dangerous man.
"There probably fine, they where only going swimming for Christ's sake, and even if he's drowned, Tori would have the sence to get help, even if she does hate his guts."
"I wouldn't." Mac's pager buzzed... "Emergency. I have to go, but I'm coming over right after sugurey, and she better be back."
"Fine." He stormed out from the room.

Caroline sighed and got the photo album again, her tears blinding her vison. Then from outside the window she heard shouting. Thinking it was her very annoying neibours, who played classical music and 4 am (who did that!) she ignored them, hoping the noise would just die out, but her curiosity got the better of her, and she ran to the window.

Inching back the curtain, she saw the familar sight of leathers, mixed with a mop of curly black hair...

I don't know if this is a typo and it's meant to be pouf. But a puff of a dad :lol: :lol: :lol:

Please leave it as puff it's hilarious.

And this is not the Mac and Caroline we know and love :angry:

Oh dont let Guy be in trouble, it not his fault he want tori to like him!!!

Yeah, I'm with Jess...he's just trying to bond! Really badly...

Of course it was on purpose :ph43r: , and what would be the fun if everybody was written as we know them :ph43r: :ph43r:

Ok here's more
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"I... DON'T... CARE... IF... YOU... WERE...BONDING"

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PE CALLS...

*appoligies for the last very short bit, teachers can be so bloody inconsiderate when you are trying to write and they come in to do the register... anyhoo here’s some more*

“I…DON’T… CARE… IF…YOUR… WERE …FUCKING… BONDING” Mac yelled, only pausing to punctuate his words with punches to Guy’s jaw.

Still completely out of his head, Guy tried to yell cries of clever and sarcastic protests, but all that would come out were incoherent moans and grunts. He knew he deserved every thwack the ginger hippy was dishing out, but it didn’t make the experience any less painful or embarrassing. Out of the corner of his eye he could see Tori standing close by. Half laughing half crying by the side of her dad’s bike, scarcely able to support her self. He wanted to help her, tell her it was ok, but that would only worsen the pain in his jaw he was sure.

That’s were Tori’s true love lay, and no amount of vodka or guyball was ever going to change that. But Secratan’s always tried, and they always got what they wanted, no matter who they had to push past to get there. Sucking up all the strength he could manage with his jaw feeling like a chipped glass, he lifter his arm up and hit Mac square in the mouth with such a powerful force he fell to the floor shouting in pain.

With the effects of the vodka setting in fast, thoughts of reason were far slipping away from Tori. She couldn’t think strait, and any clear thoughts she had lost all meaning, the signals from her brain to body broken. Seeing her dad lying on the floor triggered something powerful from within Tori, as before she knew what she was doing, she had launched herself at Guy, hitting and scratching him.

“Get off my dad! Get off my Daddy!!! You destroy everything! I hate you! I hate you and your stupid twat hair, and the way you reckon your better than everyone else, and you know what Guy, YOUR NOT!!”

Just then the front door open with an slam, and out walked a furious Caroline. How dare Tori talk like that to a man who she had planned to become her step father. Then again this wasn’t the Tori she knew. Caroline had known her to become angry before, but never to this extent.

“Just when I thought my parent’s were happy,” Tori continued, “ when they were talking just like they used to, you,” she jabbed a finger at Guy “had to come in a split them up! We were fine before you came, but know my life is ruined. I can accept that you don’t have any real feelings, BUT DON’T TAKE IT OUT ON ME!!” she started to sob and scream. “ I have two addresses, I have two phone numbers, I have to pretent I like having two separate birthday meals, cause my parents can’t bear to be in the same fucking room as eachother for two fucking hours!!! Do you have any idea what that means? Really?”

With wet eyes and no expression on her face, Caroline sighed and said “Mac, take Tori inside, I need to talk to Guy

Argh poor...everyone. Please let Mac and Caro get back together! It doesn't seem right with them divorced and Guy did go and get their daughter very drunk...

"He got you drunk?!"
"O... only a bit."
"Only a bit! You got the angryist I've ever seen you, which by the way we have to talk about. Do you even rember me talking to you about vodka!"
"No...! Now just let me sleep."
"Fine, but first you are gonna tell me what drink he gave you."

*Am being shouted at for being on this 'bloody timewasting' forum (mums words not mine. In short I must go. Will write more at school tomorrow

TIME WAISTING.... TIME WAISTING :o

actually my mum says the same 2 me....

is gr8 by the way! the fic not the time waisting, even though it isn't because it rocks and its good if it rocks because rocking is hard core (i'm known to babble on a lot)

:o THATS RIGHT YOU TELL IM TORI!!!! gah hate guy! HATE GUY! hate mean maC!!

love tori :D
make it happy!

:sob Oh thank you people for your reveiws! I heart you all. BTW anyone any ideas for trying to convince parents that the things you spent time and love writing about are not a compleate waste of time. MY MUM IS THREATENING TO BAN ME FROM THIS SITE!
Here is more! HELPME!!!! :sob :thud :faintz
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"What type of man are you!!"
"Well don't know why your asking me, youv'e seen it!"

After many hard slaps, and Guy wimpering once again, Caroline had him quiet.

"Listen as angry as I am for you getting her drunk, I do understand. You feel you have to compeat with Mac, but you have to understand that Tori loves him. And it hurts me but I know she loves him more than me, and sometimes I can't even get her to come home..."

*sorry peoples, maybe I should learn not to write fan fics in school. Will finish off later.*

can u not just pretend ur doing hwk? That's wt i do...
well actually i've told my mum that this is a sight 4 young writers hu r thinking of becoming journalists :D but my mums threatening 2 read my script!
*runs and hids all the smut*

Have tried homework thing and It works! Now for more fanfiction. There is another good point to this, it provides easy thinking for english lit creative writing!

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"Who cares! We manage fine on our own. Remeber I was here way before her!"
"You know Tori was right, you don't get it do you?! Ok you were here before her, but she has loved me unconditionally , and not left me for a younger, sexier nurse from obstetrics!"
"Hey..." he rubbed her shoulders. This day was getting worce and worce. All he was trying to do was be the good guy.(A/N pun not intended)Then as usual Mac took the girl and this time it mattered.

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"Right we'll talk about this later when your less... pissed out of your brain"
"Your.. so mean... I... hate you..." Before she could even finish she felt her eyes closing. He didn't understand. All Guy and her needed was something to bond over, and it wasn't swimming or medicine.

Mac lifted Tori up and took her upstairs. How the hell did he get in this mess. The three of them used to be happy. Why did it all go so wrong. He knew the answer. It was something with stupidly curly hair and huge teeth, and now his one presious thing in life was going to be taken away from him, by the poodle haird twat. Fan-bloody-tastic.

The morning after the night before was not one Tori ever wanted to repeat. She swore she would never ever drink again. The whole thing was just too painful.

As she padded her way downstairs, she thought she could smell the strange combination of pancakes and stale drink wafting upstairs. Going over to investigate, she was greeted with an oddly smiling Guy, accompanied by her father passing him plates. She took a double take, thinking this could be the after affects of alchohol, but no!

“Hey kid” Mac remarked cheerily. How could he be so bloody happy. “Head ache?”
“Meh..” She grunted.


*Part two of this bit is coming but must watch BB*