Title: Bittersweet Moon
Description: Alternative Ending for Guy/Sue lovers!
Sue's*Bitch - January 7, 2007 02:02 AM (GMT)
Technically not an alternative ending - could have happened, and I like to believe it would have with an extra half an hour and no floating nonsense!
Unashamedly Guy/Sue.
The wedding was over and Caroline had vanished upstairs to do things with the good Dr Macartney that Sue had one dreamt about. Everybody had decided to be mature and had gone to their rooms early and so Sue was left alone, in the bar, and bored.
Every time the barman walked passed he gave her glares attempting to guilt her into leaving and being respectable like all the others, but she was not to be moved. Besides she was drunk enough that he’d have to carry her anyway, better to let her fall asleep in the bar and make her own way upstairs in the morning; but he’d probably get grief he didn’t need from the management. Just when the barman was planning to carry her upstairs; somebody else ambled into the bar.
“Gimme a pint of ale. Wait no – sodding righteous drink! – Whiskey! That’s meant to be good up here. And fucking lots of it!”
Guy dumped himself into the seat next to where Sue was attempting to prop herself up and began to stare at her up and down. He seemed to be considering whether he wanted to bother speaking to her but when the barman practically slammed down his glass and bottle Sue immediately sat up and grabbed the glass. Guy didn’t speak as he poured the amber liquid into the glass and he watched, fascinated, as Sue drank the contents before they had settled. She handed him back the glass and her head fell back onto the table and her waiting arms.
Guy sat in silence as he drank through two generous sized measures of whiskey, never taking his eyes off Sue, who seemed to be asleep on the bar. She wasn’t. She lifted her head and reached behind the bar, while the barman wasn’t looking, recovered another glass and poured herself an equally generous amount.
“What happened to the bloke you came with?”
“He was sick.”
“In a castle full of Doctors? What with?”
“Wanker-itus.”
“Oh.”
“You’ve had it, how long does it take to pass?”
“Well I don’t…Oi! f*ck you, you ugly bitch, just for that you’re paying for the whiskey!”
“No I’m not.”
“Yes you are.”
“No I’m not.”
“Yes you are.”
glo316 - January 7, 2007 02:43 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Sue's*Bitch @ Jan 7 2007, 02:02 AM) |
“He was sick.”
“In a castle full of Doctors? What with?”
“Wanker-itus.”
“Oh.”
“You’ve had it, how long does it take to pass?”
“Well I don’t…Oi! f*ck you, you ugly bitch, just for that you’re paying for the whiskey!” |
i love that part!!!...just like them to bicker like that - Wicked!!!
SecretanFan - January 7, 2007 11:28 AM (GMT)
Haha, this is awesome! :D I'm very excited. :yeeay
xpingux - January 7, 2007 01:32 PM (GMT)
bingle - January 7, 2007 01:48 PM (GMT)
Spot on with the Guy/Sue banter there!
IMO - January 7, 2007 07:09 PM (GMT)
Oh my Sue and Guy in the bar drowning their sorrows - anything could happen.
Waits for further developments. :)
Sue's*Bitch - January 7, 2007 07:11 PM (GMT)
“Had a shag yet tonight Dr Sexretan!?”
Sue giggled profusely at this and Guy came to the conclusion that she had drank more than it first appeared. He wondered vaguely how far he could push his luck.
“No – the best mans meant to cop off with the bridesmaids and I haven’t tried my luck with them yet.”
“Oh, are you going for the full family set? You want to shag the wee elf as well?”
His luck, he deduced, might well last him the night if she was in a coy mood. Might as well go for broke.
Before Sue could laugh at her own joke once again Guy leant in, grabbed her by the shoulders and pulled her towards him for a kiss. He succeeded in the kiss but Sue fell off her stool in the process and bashed into him, knocking him to the ground, with her on top. Luckily the barman hadn’t noticed.
Guy and Sue didn’t care anyway, so engrossed were they in the other. Forgetting that she was in a bar, and not really caring anyway, Sue began to move her hands down Guy’s chest and stomach, stopping just short of his groin; Guy groaned at her actions and moved his hands to her chest, stroking and pinching her through the faux wedding dress she was still wearing. Sue shrieked into his mouth and when they were just beginning to build up some friction, Guy stopped them both and sat up. He didn’t miss a beat as he put an arm around her waist and pulled her up, grabbed the bottle of whiskey and turned. When they got to the door however, Guy practically dragging Sue along, he stopped and turned back.
“Actually give me a bottle of champagne.”
littlered - January 7, 2007 07:49 PM (GMT)
:yeeay Guy/Sue! I love this already!
Will there be smut? *looks pleading*
*debbie* - January 7, 2007 08:01 PM (GMT)
CupboardLady - January 7, 2007 11:42 PM (GMT)
I second that! Yay- Sue/Guy :D
Sue's*Bitch - January 8, 2007 12:22 AM (GMT)
Another little bit for tonight and I'm working on the smut but I should warn you I tend to get a little :blush when writing smut.
****
Sue was reasonably aware that she was quite drunk but the moment she didn’t care and she didn’t give much thought to how thoroughly pissed off she would be in the morning. Then again, she reasoned with herself, as the stumbled over yet another step, she had always wanted another go at Guy, and had actually been a little disappointed at the thought of him marrying before she got said second chance.
“Fucking ow!” Guy had stumbled over another step and had pulled Sue down on top of him once again. Normally she would have shouted, but as it was, she giggled again.
“We have to stop meeting like this Dr Secretan.” She collapsed on his chest to prevent him getting up and began nibbling on his ear in a very distracting manner, causing Guy to attempt a growl, but end in a whimper. When she began to move her mouth lower Guy shocked her again and, with strength that she never knew he had, he lifted her into his arms balanced the bottle on her stomach and began running up the stairs.
SecretanFan - January 8, 2007 02:20 PM (GMT)
Ooooh strong Guy... :wub: Gah. This fic is awesome! :worship2
bingle - January 8, 2007 05:30 PM (GMT)
I love the idea of Sue wanting a second go at Guy!
And 'full family set' had me giggling so much I couldn't breathe!!
:lol:
*debbie* - January 8, 2007 05:46 PM (GMT)
ohhhhhhh
strong guy...
:wub:
SecretanFan - January 9, 2007 05:35 PM (GMT)
CupboardLady - January 9, 2007 06:09 PM (GMT)
:dribble .. Guy :D
Smut :D
Sue :D
:worship2
swissluvagirl - January 9, 2007 06:36 PM (GMT)
GUy sue is the new Caromac! I LUV IT
xjessx - January 9, 2007 06:43 PM (GMT)
heheee!! I like!! I like alot!!! Sue and Guy are just so sweet!! Will we be seeing smut!! will we! please!
Sue's*Bitch - January 9, 2007 11:25 PM (GMT)
Because you're all so lovely you get smut. :rolleyes:
But don't say I didn't warn you! lol
**************
He managed to reach his room with exceptional speed and without dropping Sue he had kicked open the door and slammed it behind him. Taking her own cues Sue placed herself unsteadily back on the floor and, throwing the bottle onto the sofa as Guy removed his jacket they both moved in time to meet together in the centre of the room.
Within moments there was not a slip of air between them as they ravished each other’s mouths with all the fervour of previous lovers. Gone were the tentative first kisses of new lovers that both of them had long since forgotten, instead a roaring passion that threatened to overwhelm them any moment.
Guy took the lead and surprised Sue by tugging at the back of her dress and finding the right spot immediately to remove it. Not having a moment to query the speed Sue was suddenly aware that she was stood in the room in only her shoes, stockings and a pearly white thong; never having being a particularly self-conscious person the only thing that bothered her about this situation was that Guy was still fully clothed.
She was taken off guard again though, when she attempted to reach for his shirt buttons Guy firmly took hold of her hands and moved them around his neck and he lifted her gently and lay her on the bed, the movement of his hands in a startling contrast to the heat and strength of his tongue in her mouth. Without warning he shoved her gently onto her back and remaining on his feet he quickly got rid of his shoes and socks, all the while devouring her with his eyes. Sue in turn had lifted her head off the bed and was practically panting with want, she threw her head back onto the pillows causing, to Guy’s delight, her breasts to protrude. He had decided upon his next course of action.
:blush
:wub:
CupboardLady - January 10, 2007 03:10 AM (GMT)
eeep!! :D (that was a happy eep!) Yay smut! More smut now please! ;)
xpingux - January 10, 2007 08:38 AM (GMT)
xjessx - January 10, 2007 04:25 PM (GMT)
Hehee more more!!! I love it!! more, more hotness more!!
SecretanFan - January 10, 2007 05:45 PM (GMT)
Wow! Very hot and completely awesome! :worship2
Sue's*Bitch - January 14, 2007 06:41 PM (GMT)
Extra smut. :rude
********
As Sue kicked off her shoes, scattering them across the room, Guy removed his neck-tie and began to crawl on the bed, purposefully between her legs, forcing her to open them wider to accommodate him. Once again taking her wrists in his hands he leaned in and kissed her long and hard, distracting her enough to be able to tie her hands above her head.
“Oooh, that’s a new treck”.
“Please, call me Dr Sex-retan”.
On the syllables of his name he thrust his crotch towards the heat between her legs, causing enough friction for her to moan loudly and Guy remembered that he had had complaints from the neighbours the last time they were together. This thought caused him to grin and dive at her breasts without warning.
He began to stroke her back and forth, moving his head to take a nipple in his mouth and alternatively licking then blowing, teasing her to the point of pain then clamping him lips firmly down, dragging a short yelp from her. Deciding that she seemed to like this he filed it away in his mind for next time without even realising it. He moved to the next breast and began again, using one hand to continue pinching and the other to stroke her strained arms. He knew she’d hate being made to be so vulnerable in the morning but right now he decided to take advantage of a willing and accommodating Sue White.
Lazily he moved back up her body, laying butterfly kisses along her collarbone as he did so, reaching her mouth for a searing kiss and reaching up to untie her hands. He had the feeling retribution would soon be hers when he felt her smirk against his mouth.
macismygod - January 14, 2007 06:45 PM (GMT)
lol wow that was extremely smutty and hot lol
aww Sue and Guy!!!!!
lm248 - January 14, 2007 08:50 PM (GMT)
:knockout
wow. that was so hot...I...I can't really think of anything coherent to say.
No, wait, I can...
write more!!
littlered - January 14, 2007 09:08 PM (GMT)
:D Ooh, smutty smutty smut smut. I love it. :notworthy
xjessx - January 15, 2007 11:06 PM (GMT)
Yay!! i love it!! sue and guy our soooo hot!!
Sue's*Bitch - January 28, 2007 10:23 PM (GMT)
New part, sorry for the delay, hope it hasn't broken the moment!
***********
Before he could react she had reached for his shirt and like lightening torn it from chest. That he had expected. He had also expected to be rolled over or to have something bitten in the very least, but Sue did neither of these things, in fact she did something Guy thought was decidedly un-Sue like. She put her arms around his shoulders and pulled herself up to meet him in an oddly sweet kiss, her legs wrapping around his waist smoothly and her breast pushing into his chest so lightly that he could just about feel the rock-hard nipples.
That was enough. With a small growl he shot down her body, kissing his way quickly and roughly, making her giggle and purr in turn. He stopped at the top of her legs and wondered how, in the few years since they had last been together, he could possibly have forgotten about the joy that was Sue White’s legs. Especially when they were clad in a shade of stocking that so complimented her skin tone. Or just when they were clad in stockings to begin with. He knew he was going to enjoy this.
With an agonisingly slow movement Guy dragged his thumb across the top of the stocking, making goosebumps spread across the tops of her thigh and causing Sue to shudder, moan and wonder vaguely if she would be required to do anything tonight. He gently hooked his finger around the top of the stocking and began to drag it tantalisingly down her leg, kissing softly the smooth skin he exposed on his way down.
He discarded the second stocking in the same way and as he began kissing his way up the inside of her newly exposed thigh Sue arched her back gracefully into the air – knowing what was going to come next.
xjessx - January 29, 2007 03:57 PM (GMT)
Ekkk!!! God im really starting to love sue and guy!! there hot!!