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Title: Too Good To Be True
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swissluvagirl - January 6, 2007 02:54 PM (GMT)
“I’m so glad your mine Dr Todd.”
“Well really it’s Dr Macarney now”
“So should I call you Mac then, or so as we don’t confuse Martin, should I just stick with Caroline?”
“For the sake of Martin I think Caroline would be best” She smiled as he stroked her hair.
“I’ve always liked your hair, and your nose..”
“You like my nose?” Laughing she let out a snort. Married life was treating the new couple very well. The next morning the two were set to fly to Barbados, their new house was up and running and they had just bought themselves a brand new car. But there was one drawback to their fairytale. Dr Guy Secratan had also found love in the form of Sue White, and moved in next door….
“Come here you…” Mac grinned and pulled Caroline up ontop of him. He had waited two years for this moment and wasn’t going to let it be ruined.

xpingux - January 6, 2007 02:57 PM (GMT)
aww! :)

oooh GuySue! :woohoo

xX-Silver-and-Cold-Xx - January 6, 2007 03:07 PM (GMT)
lol Guysue :excited great please keep going :P

newestgreenwingfan01 - January 6, 2007 03:22 PM (GMT)
awww i love this!! write more soon!

Sue's*Bitch - January 6, 2007 03:53 PM (GMT)
:excited yay! Guy/Sue love!
I'm really ill today and this story just made me feel a whole lot better - please continue!


swissluvagirl - January 7, 2007 04:26 PM (GMT)
"I love you" Guy wispered in Sues ear. The days of dreaming of Caroline were over. He and Sue had found a connection that had odly been stated by the ever famous Bollenger. The two had found a case at and after a scrable on the floor to grab the last bottle, they had found themselves passionatly kissing.

*sorry it is so short but my **** mother is makiing me come off the computer will post more asap*

teamsecretan - January 7, 2007 04:29 PM (GMT)
GUYSUE! But I hope it all turns out happily!

macismygod - January 7, 2007 04:31 PM (GMT)
what a perfect couple! :wub:

beautifulday - January 7, 2007 04:31 PM (GMT)
aw this is soo gr8!

IMO - January 7, 2007 06:56 PM (GMT)
Great idea having Guy live next door to them. My perfect GW spin off would be The Macartneys with Guy living next door to them - but to throw Sue in as well :rolleyes:

littlered - January 7, 2007 07:38 PM (GMT)
:wub: It's lovely already. Although, two years? Surely it only comes to about six months.

swissluvagirl - January 8, 2007 11:37 AM (GMT)
Am vair sorry about the time scale mix up... will change it to 6months. Tanks for the reveiws. GUY SUE IS THE NEW CARO MAC. Will update asap. God am so jealous not going to the signing


swissluvagirl - January 9, 2007 01:43 PM (GMT)
"There goes the only old maid in the hospital" Guy sneered to Martin.
"I am not an old maid..." Though he didn't look too shure. "Anyway, your the one who's got a scary scottish woman to go out with you. And I bet she likes my winky better than yours"


*Ohhh am sorry German calls.... must go. will update when i get home *

SecretanFan - January 9, 2007 01:53 PM (GMT)
Haha I love Guy/Sue. :D This is ace.

swissluvagirl - January 9, 2007 07:46 PM (GMT)
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah fine just feeling a little... queasy."
"Well do me a favour... don't fall down on the table ok. We already got one body, and we don't need another"
"Fine...anyway I was thinking about Barbados and... well does the bathroom in the plane accomidate two?"
"Well I don't know... surley we will have to test it."
"We wouldn't want it to be an inconvience for the flight staff. Now I was thinking about last night and... oh and if it isn't our new neighbour"
"Hey sexy" He leans to kiss Caroline but Mac pushes his face away with his whole hand.
"Hands off"
"No honeymoon, no real marrige, you still have time to get out!" Guy wispered to Caroline. She blushed and stepped away and turned her back and waved.

"She was waving at me" Guy said triumphatly
"f*ck off... I'm the one who got her in the sack"
"I'm gonna tell her you said that"
"And I am gonna brave your new girlfriends office and tell her you were flirting with" he puts on a scottish accent "Dr Trodd"
"NOO!"

swissluvagirl - January 10, 2007 11:45 AM (GMT)
"You mean to tell me that a coffee enema leads to good health... I don't belive you. "
"It's true... I think you should do a demonstrain" Boyce smiled. Doctor Stathem was back for good, and sure enough the banter had begun.
"N...n... noone will be seeing my winkydink"
"I have..."
"YOU HAVE NOT. Now stand over there"
"I cant"
"Why not. You have legs corret"
"Yes... but I am drawn to you."

*this is what comes from writing at school. science calls*

lm248 - January 10, 2007 12:01 PM (GMT)
hehe! thanks for updating. i loved the bit with Mac and Guy fighting over Caroline. Ooh, is she going to be pregnant? Think you should also keep us updated on the 2 in a toilet flight thing...that could make some hot smut :D

swissluvagirl - January 10, 2007 01:32 PM (GMT)
smut will be coming...

swissluvagirl - January 11, 2007 01:41 PM (GMT)
"Whoa what you doing there!"
"Whaatt..."
"Cholecystectomy is sposed to be supposed to be a pretty simple Procedure and your hacking into this poor man like your lunch"
"Are you critsising me?"
"Well yes but..." Sinniffles came from under Carolines mask "Are you... crying?"
Caroline through down her scalpol and ran from the room. Guys head popped up from under the table.
"I wouldn't have made her cry"

Emmy_33 - January 11, 2007 08:19 PM (GMT)
Aw why is she crying!? Carry on! I love it!

xjessx - January 11, 2007 08:42 PM (GMT)
AWWWW!!!!

did mac make her cry

lm248 - January 11, 2007 08:59 PM (GMT)
awww, poor caroline :cry
she's so pregnant isn't she?? :D

beautifulday - January 12, 2007 06:43 PM (GMT)
awwwwwww
bad mac :angry: he made his wife cry

lm248 - January 14, 2007 12:05 PM (GMT)
moooooooooooooooore...

please? :)

xpingux - January 14, 2007 01:07 PM (GMT)
awww :(

more!! :D

swissluvagirl - January 16, 2007 06:19 PM (GMT)
*credit to Lm248 for some ideas! Thankoo!*

"Oh what the f*ck is that" Guy and Mac sat down beside Caroline. 2 days had passed since the incident in surgery, and things had not been going so well for Caroline. She had been sick as a dog, and Guy wasn't helping. He had been calling her every minute of the night, checking to see if she was ok.
"Tartar sauce, ketchup and ice cubes... though they didn't have any coal, we have to stop on the way home Mac" at this point she was now staring into space. Mac and Guy gave each other a 'what the hell is she on' look.
"Right..." Then he said to Mac under his breath "If you don't tell her I will"
“Umm Caroline, there’s something I need to tell you”
“No please don’t go and marry Angela in Canada, I mean I know she has nicer boobs, hair and teeth than me,”
“Well that’s a bit true…” Guy chimed in
“But look, my boobs are growing by the day so something must be right. Oh no you’ve got a thing for small blonde Americans haven’t you… I suppose I could die my hair…”
“Caroline stop.” Her mouth closed and she started to cry. “Caroline… I think, and this is just a hunch, that you may be pregnant.”
“Stop being so crewel. Guy put you up to this… for a bet or something.” Wailed Caroline.” You boys are so mean… paying each other to hurt someone. I never thought I would say this but I feel sorry for Joanna. Must be a nightmare to have you as a son.” She turned on Mac “And you! Well the honeymoons off! I hate you both” She ran off crying. Again.
“Glad I’m not you” (A/N at this point I pictured SM/Guy doing those really cute big eyes he does, then picking up one of the gross ice cubes and walking off)

beautifulday - January 16, 2007 06:49 PM (GMT)
ok this is gr8 an all

but i'm a leetle confused isnt angela supposed to be dead or is she not in the fic :unsure:

Emmy_33 - January 16, 2007 06:50 PM (GMT)
Hehe aww yey a baby Caromac...surely!

madelinenancy - January 16, 2007 06:53 PM (GMT)
NO YOU CANT CALL THE HONEYMOON OFF!!!

bebbys are luvly caro!

xpingux - January 16, 2007 07:19 PM (GMT)
:lol:
aww caroline bless haha

lm248 - January 16, 2007 07:25 PM (GMT)
woohoo :yeeay I got a mention. Hehe, love this part, I can so see caroline acting like that! :D

swissluvagirl - January 16, 2007 08:24 PM (GMT)
Oh I am sorry forgot to metion I made Angela alive again. I don't like her dead. Who knows she may make a return....DUNDUNDAAAA

swissluvagirl - January 17, 2007 01:45 PM (GMT)
Caroline sat sniveling in the doctor's mess, replaying Mac's words over and over again.

“Caroline… I think, and this is just a hunch, that you may be pregnant.”

Baby's ruined everything, they stopped peoples lives. Yes they were cute, and sure they bonded you for life with that 'special some one' blablabla... but they were just another thing in the way of life.

"All right Caroline?"
"Ohh Boyce"
"You look like you need a pick me up."
"No really I'm fine it's just" and before she had a chance to finish, Boycie had lifted Caroline from her seat and spun her round."WOOHOOOOOOOO AHHHHHHHH BOYYCCCEE! "
"See I knew it would make you feel good. I did it to Stathem earlier and he... didn't come out to well. In fact he's chucking up in the bogs now. Hehe!"
"Well I think I may have to join him!" She ran from the room and dashed to the ladies.

Emmy_33 - January 17, 2007 05:02 PM (GMT)
Aw poor Caro :( but yey for a baby!

*debbie* - January 17, 2007 05:10 PM (GMT)
oh god.
:blink:

DONT MAKE HER DO A HOLLY!

i swear, if you do, my revenge will include thes 3 letters. sabre-up-ass!
:ph43r:

swissluvagirl - January 17, 2007 05:39 PM (GMT)
I WONT I WONT *hides behind chair*




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