ok here's a new fic I hope you enjoy it:

Ever since the party, Caroline had the thought of that kiss implanted in her mind. She never really got over it, she shared a few more of these delightful kisses over the neat year but she had never let anything come of it. The relationship between them had never been that strong. But Caroline treasured those sacred moments; there was something about those kisses, that passion, that shock of intense energy that just prayed on her mind constantly as she wondered if anything could ever happen between them…

All of this time she had been chasing the wrong person. All those thoughts of Mac, all that wanting and waiting for him, waiting for the one, it had all been a big patch of denial. They had been there all along, always waiting, wanting. This was Caroline’s chance and she decided to jump at her only shot;
“You only get one chance in life I guess, if they really are THAT mad, they may even say yes.”
And with that thought she set off to work, just like she always did. When she arrived, Caroline was far more tense then usual. She knew that this day would have to come eventually but the sheer thought scared her greatly. She sincerely hoped that her plans would not go to pot. All she longed for was Love and passion; all her dreams concerning her concept of love were resting on this day…

During her free time, she began to pace up and down the corridor, her nervousness was causing her to trump around in such an exaggerated way that she got funny looks as people walked by. The smell of formaldehyde calmed her down. Eventually she managed to pluck up her strength and made her way through the hospital to find “the one.”

ooo sounds good is it guy???????????????/ or martin?????????

ohhhhh i like!! very prettyful written!!!
Is it guy! is she going to propose to him?? say yes!!

:D like it already!!!! write more soon please :notworthy

five bucks it's sue. i'm very suspicious now of stuff.

*in a statham like way* you crazy bitch!

BTW Lottie I'm loving your torchwood banner it's amazing :D

thankee. first time i made a banner, but i cannot take credit for the 'i'm in ur...' bits, their by someone on the torchwood LJ. i like them cos their true....

it is a great banner although when I read the one about inuendos i automatically went in your endo's :rofl mao

ok i have a bit more written but i'll porbs post it tomorrow, it's really short so I may try and write a bit more first before I post it :)

Ohhhh but i want to know!!!!! I want it now! pleeeeeeease pleeeeeeeease!

:angry: tell me now!!!!! come on, give the answer to Jem, give it to Jem...

*snaps out of Sue White persona*

It's excellent so far! I want to know what's going to happen now though!!

It's great :notworthy , however i'm not going to make a guess at who it is just incase i'm wrong *hangs head at Guy like competitiveness*

*wishes it was Mac*

I agree with PL, it's Sue.

It's not going to be Mac is it :cry

I'm with PL and PR on this one - it's going to be Sue <_<

*hopes its Statham*

Well, working it out logically, it can only be one of 3 people...

I don't think it's Statham, because he was indulging in a bit of 'mexican bandit' kidnapping role-play with Joanna at the time of the party...

I don't think it's Martin, because although she kissed him at the party, there were no other kisses after that...

It might be Guy or Mac, because obviously she kissed them at the party and then lots of times afterwards... :wub:

But I have to say, I'm jumping on the Sue bandwagon, as she's the only other character that Caroline kissed after the party as well as at it!

More soon please!!!! :D

:lol: i'd love it to be sue!

i don't think its martin because that was hardly a passionate kiss at the party. she fell on him and their lips happened to make contact lol!

i think its guuuuuuy

:lol: i love how everyone has got their own conspiriacy theory about my fic

This bit is a bit short I'm sorry I'll write a bit more later but I hope you enjoy it
This is dedicated to the wonderful Lottie - she knows me too weel and saw through my writing methods - plus she rules :)

“Yesssss!” Wailed Sue.
Caroline Todd strode in, anxious and still pacing around as she entered Sue White’s office.
“WHAT!” Sue shouted.
Caroline looked shocked, dazed and confused. She longed to tell her how she felt but Sue’s striking voice took her by surprise. Caroline decided to act on impulse, words failed her. She leant over the desk and kissed Sue’s tender lips firmly on the mouth, a soft and tender kiss that blew Sue’s mind away.

Emotions were running high. As they pulled away Sue looked deeply into Caroline’s eyes. She could see that this wasn’t a joke, in her eyes lay love and desire. Sue realised that she had always felt the same way about Caroline. All those moments, all those moths of hating her, treating her unfairly, it was all because she wanted her so badly that it all became far too unbearable for her to handle in any other way.

:lol: love it!

Hey, we all spotted it!

:P

I didn't just spot it... I gave a reasoned argument for it! It was practically an essay on the subject!!

Ah, the argument was good, but your maths was not.

Statham, Martin, Sue, Mac and Guy, you listed.

yes but PR you don't count because you KNEW it was sue from the moment I posted so :P

and sorry bingle yes well done to you too but lottie was the first to comment.....

lol brill, i'm just glad it's not Mac though, looks evil :phwoar :ooherr

i have only one thing to say....






BOO YAH!!!!!

*starts singing*

dah, dah-dah, dah.
dah, dah, dah, dah,

Can't touch this


dah, dah-dah, dah.
dah, dah, dah, dah,

Can't touch this....

Stop.

charlotte time.

*stops singing and takes a bow*

awwww yeah. B) B)

It can only be one of 3 people - Mac, Guy or Sue

I said it couldn't be Statham or Martin

Ergo, my pig-rescuing chum, my maths is just peachy!!!

apologies... am in a very strange mood today...

Oh i like the last bit! ekkk! find myself loving carsue...mmm they dont really have a ship do they! Carsue sueoline! mm!

Post more, i love it!

I want more!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to glare at this screen until you post more....

*glares*


*realises she still has essay to do for 5 hrs time*


*reluctantly stops glaring*


Let that be a lesson 2 u if you leave me wanting more again.... ;)

seriously tho- sounds gr8 so far! :D

But so did Charlotte!

no she didn't???

i'll try and write some more soon guys

yes, she got it on her first post.

So did I.

<_<

yes but i'm saying you knew before i poasted that the fic was caro/sue and lottie didn't

Did I?

How did I know that?

ummmm i read it to you and verity when we were in seaford :blink: :blink:

Did you? :blink:

yes we had just been to the clifs where the ambulance and mobile home scenes were shot and we were walking back down back to verity's house when i read the intro to you and told you all about it :blink:

:lol: shows how much she was listening

I don't remember this!

How can you not? I know your memory is .. odd, but still! Um, it was while we were walking down from the carpark at the top of the cliffs, just before we saw the mobile home drive past us on its way to the cliff (making us very excited). And we both laughed quite a lot. Is it coming back?

No. :(

sorry I'm really rubbish at updating my fics lately arn't i??

sorry here is the next bit
dedicated to verity for putting up with me for 4 whole days

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Later that night there was a knock at Caroline’s door. As she opened it there stood Sue with a beautiful bunch of freesias under her arm.
“Hello?” Said Caroline looking a bit dazed and confused,
“I’ve been thinking,” Sue replied as she handed Caroline the bunch of flowers that she had for her.
“Oh you have?”
“Yes and well, I realised that Mac tore us apart when all along we were meant to be together…” Sue trailed off in her own usual way…
Caroline sat down and tried to take this all in. Sue sat next to her and they managed to talk for hours.
“It’s always been about you hasn’t it? Let’s be honest” Caroline told her,
“Has it now?” she responded in a high pitched Scottish squeal.
“Of course it has – it’s always about you.” A slight joking ness but the uttermost sincerity could be heard in Caroline’s voice.
Finally they ran out of things to say to each other - Sue became lost is Caroline’s beautiful deep brown eyes, full of lust and want.

Slowly they leaned in towards each other with immense passion and tenderness, everything disappeared, all they could see, hear and feel was each other. They became transfixed on the love that they shared as Caroline began to take off Sue’s shirt. She breathed deeply, a sigh of delight and hope.

Their tongues explored each other; their lips grazed against their skin making them feel like the only people in the world…

“f*ck ME!!” A yell came from the doorway, it was Guy. He had seen it all. He had seen enough to know the truth and the shock left him staring, mouth open for a very long time. Caroline pulled away quicker then she thought possible as a sense of horror came across her. The shock of it all, the embarrassment, she had no clue as to what she was supposed to say to him or how to react. She just sat there – frozen.