I'm sorry this isn't the best of fics I agree but this song is like perfect for the 3 of them so I have started to write this:

The song is called Denouement and it's by Baumer, I only heard the song when I was on youtube watching house videos you can listen to the song on thier myspace: here

ok well I hope you like it :) oh and it's episode 8 i guess.....

Tell her now while she’s still here
Tell her while you still feel brave,
Don’t even think about it
Don’t try to figure it out.
Your heart’s a liar
But you should listen anyway
Tell her you love her
Your love can’t be afraid

Mac sat there thinking to himself. He heard about Guy’s and Martin’s proposals: why can’t I do something like that, why am I so scared about showing my love for Caroline? He pondered over these thoughts, he knew that he had to say to her that he loved her, and it had to be soon, for all he knew she had said yes to Guy and he wouldn’t be given a second thought. He didn’t wan that at all. He sat there about to go and find her, then changing his mind. He kept inching himself away from his seat, meaning to move but something inside of him just froze, he was paralysed, and so he just sat there, thinking, thinking, thinking…

Guy on the other hand couldn’t keep his feelings to himself. He was hopelessly in love with Caroline and he didn’t know what to do about it. He had never been in love before and somewhere down the line, somehow, Caroline Todd had changed his life. He had finally managed to pluck up the courage and to his delight she had said “maybe”. Maybe, he thought, maybe, that could mean yes, if I just continue to show her, it could become a yes…

After Holly had returned Mac had realised how many times he had lost Caroline when he shouldn’t have done. He knew that if he didn’t say those 3 simple words today, then he would never be able to say them and that would mean that he would loose Caroline forever. How could Guy, GUY! Of all people tell her how he feels about Caroline but I can’t – How?

aww i love this flic already it is so sweet!!

:D great start!! lovin it

aww
say it mac
say it!

:wub:

This is cute.

Great choice of a song, too!

ok here is part 2 of 3:

It doesn’t have to be perfect like a movie scene
Love is almost always accidental
It doesn’t have to be perfect like a movie scene
Love is almost always accidental

For Guy it was bliss, Caroline was in his eyes perfection. He always had something for her, he just hadn’t realised it – until now. He did everything he could for her, he lived and breathed for her, his balls ached because of her. He finally knew what love was, what this feeling was like, and he liked it, in fact – he loved it. He loved to love Caroline it made him all warm and fuzzy inside. He couldn’t believe that she had finally said yes to his proposal. It didn’t feel quite real, he felt so much joy from just knowing that she wanted to be with him, he couldn’t quite contain it – it was like ecstasy, he just couldn’t believe his luck. It was all too perfect.

Everything that Mac and Caroline had gone through, it was all so messy. Mac knew that and now he was told that he was dying. His love for Caroline was hidden because he had been afraid and now he was dying! How could love go so wrong? He thought, I thought love was meant to be perfect – like in all those films, it’s meant to be happy, so why is it so hard and painful?

Guy had never meant to fall in love with Caroline, it just happened. At first it was just another one of his silly little games, I must get the new doctor into bed with me before anyone else does that was the way his mind worked, the way he lived life, but somewhere, somehow, between the time when they had kissed at her party and the day out when she talked about his “onion layers” he began to realise she actually understands me, she actually wants to know me no one has ever cared about me like that before. At first he thought Onion layers – whatever, I’m just a guy – a 100% hot blooded male but slowly and surely his thoughts managed to change. He still felt bad, although Caroline had said yes to him doubts were still in his mind: what about Mac I thought that he loved her and that she loved him? I know I didn’t mean to fall for her but I have, has she actually fallen for me? Can it be this perfect that she has? Guy just had to get on that train with her and see where the journey would take him

I love this fic Guyoline; it works really well with the lyrics and you really seem to have captured the characters.

awwww!

more more more

aww i love that he is having doutbs but guy should worry she loves him ..i hope..i think

ok well here is part 3 of 3 for this song, but if you guys like it |I may continue it with another song :)

And if you know she’s gone
You have to leave today
You have to find a way, to find her
But just don’t be afraid
Of what you think she’ll say
You have to find a way to find her….

So Caroline and Guy left, they got on the train to Devon and spent a romantic weekend away. Mac had just learnt about his “illness” but he didn’t care. He realised now more then ever that this meant that he had to get Caroline back. He knew that he missed her at the station but he wasn’t about to give up. He knew that he had to find her. What if she actually chose Guy over me? What if I have blown my chance – I’ll die alone and without my one true love. I guess they will be happy… NO! I need to fight for her, I love her as much (if not more) then Guy does any day, I’ve just got to make her see that and it will all be ok.

Whilst Guy and Caroline were on the train, she felt like she needed to tell Mac what happened. She dialled his number and left a message on his voicemail saying: “I’m sorry Mac, you weren’t there at the station, I have to ask why? You always seem to let me down… anyway, I decided to marry Guy, I’m tired of waiting for you Mac, it’s just too difficult and I’m sorry. We are off to Devon, I know you love it there but so do I, I hope everything is ok. I still love you, it’s just, well, I have to be with Guy, you hurt me too much, anyway, bye now” and with that she hung up the phone.

Mac listened to the message and knew what he had to do, He travelled down to Devon, but Devon is a big place, this is silly, how am I supposed to find two people in such a huge county like this? But then his brain began to think, of where they would go and he went there on instinct. I have to find her, I have to find her he kept saying to himself, I have to find her, she needs to know that I love her, I need to find I way to her before I die… For once Mac didn’t care about what she would say, just as long as he found her and told her that he loved her that was all that mattered…

hooray! he love s her!

please right some more.

oohh this is so tense!!! i would be worrying about how it will turn out bt im afraid ur usernames gettin me a bit worried....

well I'm not too sure myself, at the mo it's open to idea 0 I have a song in mind so if I use that one you'll just have to wait and see what happens you may be happy - you may not that's a risk you take hahah! :P

:sob
WHY, WHHY is it that EVERY time i invest myself EMOTIONALLY I-I-I ALWAYS seem to get HURT???




sniff.


the life of a young puppy is in your hands, guyoline. now just you remember that.

:lol:

you can't stop there ros. you have to carry on.

and you WILL carry on.

aww i'm sorry Madaline I'll try to make sure you don't get (too) hurt but TBH i have NO idea where this fic is going to swing anyway so umm yeah you will just have to find out :)

ok well I have written a bit more for you lovely people. This one is called How to save a life by the fray, it's a great song and I'm hoping this will work

I'm gonna dedicate this to madalinenancy for her fab caroline todd diary and just remember it's far from over - anything can happen within the song :P oh and sorry for it's shortness

Step one you say we need to talk
He walks you say sit down it’s just a talk
He smiles politely back at you
You stare politely right on through
Some sort of window to your right
As he goes left and you stay right
Between the lines of fear and blame
And you begin to wonder why you came.

Mac had known where they would go, so he went straight there and found them, just as they were about to check in.
“Caroline” he said, looking rather breathless. “We need to talk”
“Mac! What are you doing here?”
“I need to talk to you”
“Ok” she said, “Sorry Guy about this I’ll be back in a few minutes I promise”

The pair of them walked outside and sat by the seafront on a bench that was awfully similar to the one at the hospital.
“Caroline” he said
“What?”
“I love you, I can’t live without you, I need you.”
“hmmmmm” she didn’t know what she was supposed to say, she had just said yes to guy, the man who doesn’t let her down, the man who can’t stop saying how much she loves her Oh great now he decides to tell me that he loves me what am I supposed to do with this now? I’m supposed to be with guy.
“I’m sorry, I have to, err, leave” she said as she ran back inside to gather her thoughts. Mac sat there for a while before turning in the other direction to walk along the sand.

:o I was thinking about writing a songfic to this! I've been listening to it over and over for the last few weeks, and it seems like the perfect song for a Caromac scene - I was thinking of it with Mac telling Caroline about the illness. Great fics Guyoline, as usual - I love your writing.

ooo i need to download this song of something.

ba da ba ba ba - I'm Loving It!


i like caromac fics you know...

thanks guys I'm glad your liking it :)

SBL I send the song to you hun :P

ok I'll try and write up some more tomorrow - oh crap i haven't done my maths...

ah who cres fanfic writing is better for me :)

lol! thats why i decided to end mine. i kept staying up late to write it.

i should really go to bed.

love you

xxxxxxxx

yeah I need to sleep too - got no sleep last night due to headache due to screaming really loud due to finding out about green wing signing
and also the excitement in general aghhh the excitement is killing me

ok i will try and write more tomorrow - and for my other fic too although now I have got to the plot i don't atcually know what to now hmmmmm???

songs fics are slightly easier to write as the song kinda gives you a guideline

anyway I'm rambleing now night all

ohhh i love this!! of course i dont want it to end caromac but im getting used to the possibility that the real thing will end that way!!

haha anyhoo at least she is loyal to guy at the moment!!

ok well here is some more sorry it's not much, I may write a bit more before i go to sleep i'm not sure but anyway :)

Where did I go wrong, I lost a friend
Somewhere along in the bitterness
And I would have stayed up with you all night
Had I known how to save a life

Oh great now he’s never going to talk to me again is he? What I am supposed to do now? Caroline thought to herself. I hope that in time he understands, he was too late, he was always too late, every time and I know that not all of it was his fault but still, he should have tried a little harder, I needed to him to try a little harder. But I’m with Guy now and he makes me happy, I guess that’s all that matters.

Mac felt hurt, he was all out of ideas and now he was all out of hope too. He didn’t know what to do. He had lost the woman that he loved to his best friend and he didn’t even have enough time to try and find someone new, he just wanted “his” Caroline to be there through his last days but he knew now that that was not going to be possible. He spent all night thinking it over, he didn’t sleep and when he did his dreams were filled with her, her lips, her soft touch, her funny walk, the way she always manages to make a fool out of herself. He couldn’t sleep but to think of her. He had lost the one person, the one thing that he needed to survive this hell that was approaching; all that was left now was pain and bitterness.

:cry awww poor mac!!!

i love him!!!

love it

thankies hunny :) oh gosh how great was today? I went to film studies and we were talking about the plot to the quick and the dead yadda yadda yadda, but then to describe the climax/end of the film he said it was a denemount and i was soo happy as i remembered this song and then thisd fic - so of course many GW thoughts came into my head :lol: but it was soo cool as I was the only one in the class to know what the word ment :) oh the joys of songs and fic writing - it's benifical :P

yaay! for caroline but poor mac!!

ok i have the next bit - i'm enjoying writng this i have another 2 songs lined up after this - it's truning into a right big story isn't it? :P

anyway here you go:

Let him know that you know best,
After all you do know best
Try to slip past his defence
Without granting innocence
Lay down a list of what is wrong
The things you’ve told him all along
And pray to God he hears you
And pray to God he hears you!

Caroline felt so awful about the whole situation, she didn’t know what to do or say to make the whole problem go away. I need to talk to Mac, I have to, just to clear things up, just to know what is going on! I have to do what’s best, for everyone and I can’t keep changing my mind, it’s not fair on Mac, it’s definitely not fair on Guy and it’s not fair on myself either. I have to tell him what’s best for us.

Caroline picked up the phone and spoke to Mac. Guy was in bed; she didn’t want to wake him so she crept downstairs to the lobby of the hotel and rang his mobile. “Hello Mac, look I need to set things straight, I need you to understand.”
“I’m listening” he replied quietly down the phone line.
“Well, I told Guy I loved him and that I would marry him and I intend to stick to that, I can’t go against my promise, and he’s so happy, and it feels so good to know that he’s happy because of me, and he makes me happy, he takes really good care of me – he’s changed I know he has! And of course I still love you, I don’t think I’ll ever stop loving you but it’s for the best” Caroline rattled on down the phone to him, not taking a breath as she just wanted to get it all out in one big go. Oh please say you understand, please I need him to understand me!
“Ok Caroline, I must be off now” Mac replied desperately trying to stop her from saying anything more, even hearing her voice tore him apart. “Speak to you soon”
“Oh ok b…” Mac had hung up before she had finished saying goodbye I really hope he understands, he has to understand!

aw MAC!!!

i'll have him!!



:blink: did i just say that?

you know what? i've been dreaming about mac a hell of a lot more as well...

this forum has made me love Mac soo much it's strange ......

i've always loved mac.

i just decided to supress it because it broke my heart when the whole thing with holly happened lol!

haha i used to be a mac fan but then Guy was always sneeking uup on me and i ended up loving him a damn site more!! ermm i dont think ive ever hated guy!!


I hope m,ac understands!!!!!!!!!

:lol: yeah it was the same with me!

i loved mac but then guy just kept growing and growing on me! then i think it was in episode 6 that i fell in love with him and wanted him and caro to be together

lol i secretly hated mac for about a month after series 2 ep 2 where he is nasty about caro and she hears!! i dont know why..maybe i love caroline too

i love caroline so that ep did make me very angry at mac - i think that is my 5% lesbian bit coming out of me :lol:

umm I'll post more up in a sec...

ok well here is the next bit:

Where did I go wrong? I lost a friend
Somewhere along in the bitterness
And I would have stayed up with you all night
Had I known how to save a life

Caroline returned to their room, Guy lay in their bed, wide awake, waiting for her. He knew something was wrong, something was going on but he didn’t know what. “Caro, please tell me what’s going on I’m confused why are you acting so strangely right now?”
“It’s Mac,” She said with a sad, gloomy look on her face, she didn’t quite know what to say, so she figured that she’ll just tell him the whole thing: “He said he loves me and wants to be with me. But I told him he was too late, I’m with you now and I’m not going to hurt you like that if I can help it.”
“Oh what! That ginger freak thinks he can just take you back when he likes that’s out of order, I’m glad you said no, it would have broken my heart if you had said yes to him!”
“Which is why I didn’t, I’m with you, remember?”
“Yeah, we don’t need him, we can be happy together, without Mac in our lives…”

Mac lay in his room wide awake; all he could think of was Caroline. He always thought of Caroline. Nothing else would save him but her, he had to find a way back into her heart, he had to tell her what was going on, she needed to know that he was dying, or else he would die heartbroken and he didn’t know if he could cope with that, he was going to win her over if that was the last thing he did…

Please let him win her over...but please please please dont let it be the last thing he does :(

Caroline only said not to Mac because she didn't wanna hurt Guy... not because she loves him more.

something tells me this is gonna turn all caromac-y

great though!

I really like this. It's sort of v. sad but q. happy in a tiny way. The lyrics go really well with the story you're developing and it's fab, basically. B) Great to find you continued with another song after you'd finshed the first. I can't wait for more and to find out what happens. *cough* CarGuy *cough*

Me too! It was when he ws snuggling up with her in the duvet that I first fell for him. :wub: I love these fics Guyoline, they're excellent.