If there's a prize for rotten judgment,
I guess I've already won that.
No man is worth the aggravation -
That's ancient history, been there, done that!

Caroline stood at the lonely train station, the cold air prickling her skin. The same thoughts circling in her 'Is he going to come, ohh i wish he would hurry up'
Behind her steam gathered on the platform. 'Caroline' she turned around staring into the mist waiting for his smile 'Mac' she shouted back as Guy slowly made his way through the mist 'You! I thought it was Mac?' she said with disappointment.
'No, no, it's definitly me. I wanted to see what i could have had if i had been more ginger. Sad isn't it.' Guy said as his throat constricted
'Yeah, a bit'
'Yeah. Where's Mac?'
'Well he's let me down again hasn't he. Life's just a game. Bastard'
'Well, I’m sure he has reasons. He’s actually not a bastard. He’s erm…he’s a really good bloke.' Guy said honesty to Carolines astonishment.

How many times do you have to get knocked down before you realise somethings not right? Once? Twice? Three times? When?

I LOVE THIS SONG!!!!!!!! which means im already setting up tent in this fic!!!!

haha the fact you know what song it is already is well wow!

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Who'd'ya think you're kiddin',
He's the Earth and heaven to you.
Try to keep it hidden,
Honey, we can see right through you.
Girl, you can't conceal it,
we know how ya' feel and who you're thinking of.

There's along pause while Caroline think, before she realise what she wants 'Yes.'
'What?' Hope rises in Guy in the hope he knows what she's talking about.
'Yes. Yes to what you were asking me earlier.' Caroline smiled as she held her lip between her teeth in anticipation.
Maybe its not best to let my guard down so soon she properly means the lesbian thing 'Really? You had a little snog and some touching with another girl at school?”
'No, no, no. Yes to the getting married thing.' She says look at the ground trying not to do something foolish and ruin the moment
'Oh, oh. Well, it’s hardly prepubescent lesbianism fumbling is it?' Guy feel his heart explode in his chest who would have know that he would fall in love, because he didn't expect it, he knew he liked her he just wasnt sure what it was at first, that drew him to her.
'No, sorry.'
'That’s OK. Are you sure?' Guy smiles brightly just letting a small amount of his happiness slip out.
'Yeah. Well, I shared a bed with Marianne Selby when we were fifteen, and she rolled over and she erm…no I rolled over and touched her boob, but erm…she was in a pair of pyjamas so that really doesn’t count.'
'No, I meant the marriage thing.'
'Oh, oh. Erm…well then, yes I’m sure. There’s always been something between us, we both know that.' She finally admitted to herself
'Oh my God. Oh my God! Did you ever tell Mac?'
'No, it’s very easy to lie when you know you're trusted implicitly, so easy and so very degrading.' She sank back to reality she had just been reject and now she was all of a sudden over welmed with a feeling of pure joy.
'No I meant the lesbian thing.' Guy added cheekly
'Oh, no.'
Caroline stood smiling, as she moved closer to him, she could feel her heart beating hard in her chest, butterfly in her stomach, as she moved her head forward towards his lips. His lips.

I guess about four things and then it hits you! Why are you waiting for what keeps going wrong? There always another road!

:blush i love this song so much that i played that scene over and over again :lol: :notworthy i love this fic!!!!!

No chance, no way, I won't say it, no, no.
You swoon, you sigh, why deny it, uh, oh!
It's too cliche, I wont say I'm in love!
I thought my heart had learned its lesson...
It feels so good when you start out!
My head is screaming "Get a grip, girl!
Unless you're dying to cry your eyes out!" Oh...

Guy moved away as she went to kiss him “What? What?” She cried in shock, had she done something wrong, had he changed his mind?
“Sorry, sorry. It’s…normally I do the lunging, so…”
“Oh.” Guy smiles as he leans toward her and goes to kiss Caroline, but this timeshe moves away. “Sorry.”
“See what I mean.” He smiled at how odd they were acting he loved ehr so much but their was something stopping them from kissing, nerves, excitement, he wasn't sure? All he knew was he wanted her so bad, her lips on his, to feel her in his arms.
“Yeah, yeah.”
“Why don’t we…”
Guy turned his back away from her.
“Yeah, you go…” She could feel the tension bubbling in her, they were going to...
They turn around looking deep into each others eyes and swiftly moved towards each other as they kissed for the first time as a real couple, she was here, now his fiance, as there lips grazed they could feel they fitted, some how they just fitted together. The train master blows his whistle. Echoing down the platform to where they stood. Caroline smiled bitting her lip and took his hand, holding it tightly.

This is brilliant! Perfect song choice - it's great reading about a scene I love! :D

:D love it, just love it!!!!

aw i love this xjessx!! its really cool to see what they were thinking in what could be the greatest scene of all time :wub: lol!



um... i don't actually recognise the song :blush what is it?

It's OK, SBL, I don't know it either. :blush

This is lovely, xjessx. This is such a fabulous scene so reading this is great and I love reading their thoughts through it. I particularly like how you got that Guy really did know what her "yes" was in answer to but told himself it couldn't be.

*gives xjessx a round of applause*

haha the song is 'i wont say [im in love]' by belinda carlisle fropm the movie hercules hehe

LOL i should've gotten that from the title shouldn't i?

haha!! no worries!!
one of my fav song at the moment!

yay this fic makes me happy :D
whenever i see the fic on the updates page i start singing the hercules song to myself and then i read it and it's always amazin!

i have decided i am gonna root for both mac and guy in the caroline stakes- that way i wont be depressed come christmas!!!
so now i can read carguy fics and luv them. like this one!!

What happens if a) MAc dies B) they end up gay c) Caroline ends up with Martin (or other)?

Also - ARE YOU CRAZY MADELINENANCY!??!

you can't jump ship! The ships getting smaller and smaller as it is.

:cry

YOu can still read carguy's whatever you support, yuo know

*waves a cookie to entice mn over*

:cookie

:bananawhip :bananawhip :bananawhip :bananawhip :bananawhip

I am shocked but :cheer2 for Madeline.

Hey PR shes got a good point at least come xmas she wont be as disappointed when its carguy *prays*

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!AB BRILL!!
HAVE AS MANY COOKIES AS YOU WANT

:cookie :cookie :cookie :cookie

lol i had to add to the scene but theres another verse of the song so i had to put what i want to happen of course!

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You keep on denying who you are and how you're feeling.
Baby, we're not buying, Hon, we saw ya' hit the ceiling!
Face it like a grown up - When 'ya gonna own up
That ya' got, got, got it bad!
No chance. no way, I won't say it no, no.
Give up give in, check the grin - you're in love!
This scene won't play, I won't say I'm in love...

“Oh yeah!” Guy smiled brightly as they began to half run along the platform
“Quick! Quick!” Caroline shouted in excitement, this was her fairy tale moment and she wasnt going to let it be taken away like everything, because well she, now had everything to lose and was unwilling to lose any fight she came upon.
“Yeah, I hope they have a buffet, I’m starving!” He ran with a bounce in his step he couldnt wait to get away from here although he wasnt sure he knew where they would go, he wanted to go to his favorite place in the world and he could only think of one place, that was special to him....
He stopped running and pulled his arms around her.
'Guy!' Caroline felt that same disappointment in her, she looked up, in to his eyes, that were shinning in the evening sun and his eyes smiled as he kissed her.
The train was leaving the platform 'Guy the train'
'Were going somewhere else somewhere special' Caroline smiled and bite her lip in anticipation as he lent forward and kissed her gently, soon the kiss was dominated by powerful emotions even guy could feel his knees go weak. As they parted he took her hand once again 'Lets go' he said as they walked down the steps on to the sunny carpark

:yeeay awwww i love this fic so much!!!!!!

Where's he taking her? Should it be obvious? :unsure:

That was a lovely, lovely instalment, Jess. Really enjoyed reading that.

:yeeay yey i like this fic, its so sweet but i just hope mac doesnt come and spoil it

I AGREE WITH MONKEY WE TRUST! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
:thumbsup

last bit!! hope it meet expectations! lol it is so hard to write with people in the next room
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You're doin' flips, read our lips, You're in love!
You're way off base! I won't say it!
Get off my case! I won't say it!
Girl, don't be proud, it's O.K. you're in love.
Oh... At least out loud... I won't say I'm in love!

'I thought we were going somewhere special' Caroline smiled as Guy carried her to the door.
'It my special place' He smiled as she opened the door, as the door moved open the muscles in there stomach tensed.
Caroline hell the door open as he walked through, and gently shut the door.
He placed a hand on her shoulder and turned her round to face him, and pushed her hard against the door, taking her by suprise, leaning his body into hers, Caroline slid her arms around his neck as their mouths, kissing passionatly. As Guy slowly moved away, both smiling 'wow' they said togerther
Caroline moved torward and pulled at his tie, removing it and disgarding it.
Guy took her hand as he lead her up the stairs, as they reached the landing Caroline pulled his jacket away from his shoulders, and pulled the buttons of his shirt undone and pushed him against the wall, where there lips meet again, gently grazing each other.
Caroline slowly turned her back as Guy slid the zip of her dress down, he watched as it slid to the ground, running his hand up her back and down around her waist, she giggled lightly as he kissed her neck.
As she slowly backed to her room, watching Guy eyes study her body, she lent against her door for support as he walked towards her, lifting her into his arms and pinning her to the door, he supported her with one arm as he kissed and tickled her back as he gently unhooked the strap of her bra, he gently dropped her to the floor and pushed the door open, Caroline stubbled into the room as she fumbled with Guy's belt, and the button on his trousers.
She sighed and closed her eyes as he kissed her and pushed her on to the bed.
'Are you sure' he whispered quitly into her ear, she pulled his closer and smiled 'always yes'.
She wrapped her legs around him and breathed in sharply as he held her close looking deep into each others eyes. His mouth was soft against hers, but hot, hungry with desire, and Caroline returned that intense desire back to him.
'i love you' she smiled slowing Guy down
'really?' he smiled
'really. i love you so much'
Guy found him self blushing against his hot sweaty skin 'i love you more' he said his eyes sparkled with love and desire as his mouth sought out hers again.
Caroline body shook as he intensified with every movement, as he breathed heavily into her neck he gently bit down into her shoulder as she arched her back, she couldnt hold back any longer as her orgasm rippled through her body causing her to groan loudly.
Guy laid holding her body close to him, she loved me was all he could think and that he couldnt wait for her to be his wife, 'i love you' he said as if to remind her
'i love you too' she smiled gently preesing her lips to his as she shuffled her warm body closer to him.

The End

wow that was HOT :thud

BRILLIANT writing xjessx! absolutely brilliant!!

oh to be Caroline...

but really, it was amazing!

i don't want it to be over.

u better start working on something new!!!

:drool :drool :drool :drool That was amazing!!

:notworthy :jawdrop that was simply in a word: sexual - I love it i want more more more!! :P

:o :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy oh my god that was hot and amazing and just gah :wub: :thud

"Wow," as Caroline and Guy said in this. ;) Oh, yes, I liked that. I liked that a lot!!! Brilliantly written and described and so very hot. God, I wanted to jump through the screen and take Caroline's place while reading that. *going off, thinking about being pinned up against a door with Guy's body pushed up against mine* :drool

god!! im glad you like it!!
lol everything is yet to be started..as bloody college is taking over my life!!
lol well its my first day and my second lesson..i wish i was dead we have to do a presentation and i choose the hardest subject ever ..humanitarian aid lol why didnt i go with green wing lol it was the first thing that came to my head..im panicking already and shall hide here for a while!1 :P

Wow. Wow. Wow. *tries to find something sensible to say* .... Wow. That was fantastic. Hooray for smut! I loved that installment very much, although I think I may faint now.

im starting another one on here cos well i felt like it!!
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Someone saved my life tonight

When I think of those east end lights, muggy nights
The curtains drawn in the little room downstairs
Prima donna lord you really should have been there
Sitting like a princess perched in her electric chair
And its one more beer and I dont hear you anymore
Weve all gone crazy lately
My friends out there rolling round the basement floor

Mac arched his back and streched across the sofa, before moving to his feet and making his way to the fridge, the bottles gingled as he open the door, he closed his eyes tightly as the light brightened his face, he pushed his hair behind his ear before pick up a bottle of cool beer, he quickly banged it against the counter to remove the cap and wrapped his lip around the rim of the bottle as the foam slipped down the sides and slumped back in to the sofa. he thought to himself as he sat in his empty flat, the telly lights bouncing off his skin as he skipped though the stations, wallowing in self pity what a way to go he checked to see if Caroline had replied to his message, he sat filling angry with himself as if it was his fault he was ill even if there wasnt actually anyway of preventing it, he was more angry that caroline wasnt calling or texting him back, he did wanted to know if she hated him and where she was!
He pulled himself up from the sofa and turned the taps on in the bathroom.
Without testing the water he pulled his t-shirt over his shoulder, unbuckled his belt and button and slid his trouser down to his ankles, kicking them of his feet and turning the taps off, he removes his boxers and stood in the bath allowing the water to warm his feet before sitting and slidding down so the water tickled under his chin and closed his eyes, allowing the warm silky water to soak away his thoughts, he sat up and hugged his knees, droplets of water dripping from the ends of his hair and making their way down his toned back, he sighed heavily as he lit a candel and picked up his book and surrending his body to the steaming water, he smiled as he looked over at the candel, he knew it wasnt very manly, but it seemed to have a hypnotic power over him, it helped him to relax and he liked the wy it made the water reflect on to the walls, he opened his book and began to read in his peaceful sanctuary the candle light glowing softly against his wet skin.

ooh yay another one - i likey jess i likey

And someone saved my life tonight sugar bear
You almost had your hooks in me didnt you dear
You nearly had me roped and tied
Altar-bound, hypnotized
Sweet freedom whispered in my ear
Youre a butterfly
And butterflies are free to fly
Fly away, high away, bye bye

Mac turned his head as he heard his door bell ring, knocking him out of his book and in to the reality he was facing, he slipped out of the tub and turned the light on, the bell rang again so he quickly wrapped a towel around his waiste and blew the candle out.
He open the door and peered out, 'hello' he called.
Caroline stopped half way down the stairs and turned around and quickly ran to the door 'erm hi, ermm i dont get this message, and well i didnt have credit left anyway so i guessed as you wernt at the station, you would be here so i walked'
'from the station'
'Yeah well i got off after the first stop, Guy got in a fight with this old man and well guy had the tickets so i decided to walk, who ever said excerise was good for you lied, cos i have blisters!'
'you were with guy?' he shuffled back and directed her in
'Well, he sort of turned up, something about seeing what he could have had, then he said the a rather odd thing even by.. anyway he said you wernt a bastard that you were a good guy, i think his ill' she smiled, mac swallowed hard as she took a seat on sofa, mac sat on the coffee table in front of her and slipped her feet out of shoes, Caroline smiled
'I need to erm tell you something but your not allowed to cry or go all crazy on me!' he said trying to smiled
'Holly's back' Caroline looked around the room
'No!'
'Sue, or did you just find someone better!'
'No! i, well i went to see my doctor and well its not good, bad really' Mac looked up in to her eyes, and saw she was looking back at him but her eyes were empty 'Im not going to be able to give you what you need cos well i wont be here'
'Your moving' Caroline could feel heat rising in her body and tears prickling behide her eyes
'No, i'm' Mac breathed in deeply and took her hands and pulled her into a hug 'Im dieing' He felt his body given into hers as he allowed to let the tears break free, Caroline remained still in his arms, she could feel his tears on her shoulder and realised he wasnt lieing, and grabbed on to him tighly
'N no no!' She cried mascara filled tears rolled down her face,'

aw xjessx this is brilliant.

wow Mac in the bath - :jawdrop hot stuff! and i'm not even a mac fan!

You should write erotic novels

more soon please!!

awww MAC!!! i love it jess i love it!!

:lol: you know what that reminded me of: that guy pohoebe dates in friends in series 8: and he says "I write erotic novels - for children, they are extemmely u npopular"

jess if you wrote erotic novels (not for children though) then i'm sure they would sell well ;) i would read them anyway

haha aww you guys are to kind!!

haha i would be carful cos my head may explode!!
I ME!! WON PKAYER OF THE DAY 2006 for paintballing haha they give two awards and i got one i was so happy!! lol well it was cos of me that we one two matches!!

I never realised the passing hours of evening showers
A slip noose hanging in my darkest dreams
Im strangled by your haunted social scene
Just a pawn out-played by a dominating queen
Its four oclock in the morning
Damn it listen to me good
Im sleeping with myself tonight
Saved in time, thank God my musics still alive

Mac laid sleeping peacfully his arms around her waiste and his head on her chest, Carolines head lent back on the arm of the sofa, lightly muttering in her sleep 'Mmm! yeah, HEHE YES!!' she shouted waking mac 'god i love you! thats it ooo thats it!!'
'Caroline! Caroline!' Mac smiled and shook her lightly
'Wha what?!' She woke up wiping the dripple away from her lip
'Having a nice dream? What was it about?' He smirked
'What? N no! a nightmaire! Really scary, Yeah! a erm farm tried to erm kill me cos i erm i saved a big called ummm' She looked around the room trying to think of name 'Table' Her cheeks burning
'A pig called table?'
"Yep! Table!! its quite a common name for a pig!!' She nodded hoping she had got away with it
'I take it he didnt kill you?'
'Nope, i stabbed him with a umm lamp shade'
'You liar' Mac laughed
'i did too' She protested
'You were having a 'nice' dream' he winked, Caroline looked around the room 'yeah, YES oh my god i love you, yeah ooo thats it!' Mac screamed
'Shut up' she hit his arm
'Ow!'
'Ohh sorry' She said rubbing his arm
'ooo thats it!' he smiled
'Mac!'
'What?' He smiled
Caroline smiled and lent forward and kissed him, urgently, their lip grazing, hungry for each other, Mac pulled her closer, Deepening the kiss, but suddenly stop
'Wait what are we doing?' he said looking into her eyes
'Well no ones here! and well we never got a chance to see if we could be happy and well if your..' caroline choked 'i want to be with you before i..we...' Mac pressed his hot lips against hers, and lifted her up from te sofa alowing his towel to drop as his arms supported her, she wrapped her leg around him.
He laid her gently on his bed, he stood in front of her watching her remove her shoes, her eyes sketching an image of his tones body! He pushed her lightly down into the bed and unzipped the back of her dress and pulled it down and off of her slender body, and began to kiss up her leg, along her ribs and chest, up her neck and along her jaw line untill he reached her sweet lips, the lips of caroline, sweet caroline, the woman he loved, the beautiful women he wanted to keep for ever.

WOW just wow and hot too!!!

:notworthy

:o hot stuff!!!!

seriously - erotica is SOOO your strong point lol!

absolutely brilliant xjessx! love it!!

:notworthy

ooh that's veyr hot.

This is sweet.