Sakura Avalon is walking inside wonka factory to catch a blueberry card. Inside the wonka factory sakura avalon is looking for a blueberry card until she saw a blueberry card. Sakura Avalon tried to catch it, it was too late. The blueberry card is inside sakura avalon body. Then sakura avalon look at her skin and it change her skin color from normal to blue, violet. Then her body is swelling up into a blueberry . What will find out in part 2

not very planned, but well done



(on a side note, has anyone seen UsagiJin?)

Speechjon... I don't mean to sound harsh, but there's really no other way to hit the nail home... This isn't very good... There's no beginning, middle, or end. Very VERY little plot at all, and all together it hardly makes a complete sentence. I'm sure you can get better at writing, just take a look at some other people's stories on this site (don't steal anything though) and maybe use other author's styles as a base point for your own developing style. C'mon, I know there's a good story hidden in your mind somewhere! You can do it, I have faith in you.

Ehh. :huh: At least it showed the ability to think and type at the same time. -_-

(sort of) :mellow:

Nope...no one's seen UsagiJin. :innocent:

Err...that's like one of those: "it was a dark and stormy night, then everyone died...the end" stories.... -_-