I guess I'll start it now, tell me what you think ;)

Here we go:

It was a normal day, or at least as normal as it gets around here. The city I live in is anything but ordinary. It seemed every person living here was recognised for something. My best friend even was the quarterback on our schools football team. but, as for me... nothing. I don't think i've ever been noticed for anything.At least, until today after school.

My friend Zach(he's the schools quarterback I told you about) and I we're walking home after school. Just doing the usual, you know chatting, and average teen stuff, you know?When we got to zachs house he noticed a young woman, no older than twenty was speeding toward me in her roofless car. And, when I say the car was roofless, I mean the cars roof was literally blown off.

I noticed a little bit too late. I did see her face though, and I knew I would never forget it as long as I lived.... which may not be for too much longer now.

Her car slammed into my unsuspecting self, and sent me flying about ten feet away. The car then came to a screeching halt. Zach ran toward me, and the woman ran out of the car and to me as well.

I was unconcious at the moment, and surprisingly barely injured. The two of them we're huddled over my body."If anyone askes, he fell down a flight of stairs, got it?
She told Zach, almost evilly. He quickly obliged." One thing, is he going to be O.K?"

"No, I needed a new soul to add to my collection.Want to be next?" She asked reaching out toward his head.

He screamed and ran off. The mysterious woman stared at my body." Hope that there is no permanent damage, but hey, it's all just in good fun right?" She asked herself as she walked off.

I woke up later in my bed at home."What happened?" I asked, almost expecting an answer. I heard my mom call "Sam, dinner time!"

I looked at the clock. 6:34 Wow it's late I thought to myself.

When I walked into the kitchen though, I saw something I couldn't believe.

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Hey if you read this thank you! :) Tell me what you think, and I'll continue, because I havn't even gotten to the best part yet! :thumbsup:

....evil woman....^^ hehe looks good. intresting writting style....

Ever seen FLCL? thats where I got the evil woman idea :innocent:

yeah ive seen it
......i really dont like haruko that much shes crazy

Wow, thats weird. I think Harukos the best character! :D

four simple words my freinds
1.pink
2.haird
3.animal
4.woman

1 I find the pink hair awesome.
2 arn't you starting an rp about catgirls?
3 The insane girl in my story is actually a bit more sane.

good point

WAHOOO!!! :D

I adore Haruhara Haruko (aka Raharu)...and I swear, as soon as she threatened Zach, I could swear she must have been riding a Vespa... :thumbsup:

lol.Should I really name her Haruko?and im toying with the idea of her buying a vespa... :D

like the song goes....
"its your thang do what you wanna do"

What song? Anyway, I pretty much know what I want to do now.

good for you

I eagerly await the next installment. :thumbsup:

I am quite eager to see where this idea leads my friend.

me too!
and i still dont like haruko
shes mean to the worlds biggest eyebrows guy

lol.

Anyway chap 2:

I stood at the bottom of the stairs, and stared at the table. Well, not the table itself, but the people at the table. I could of sworn I was dreaming.At the table, sitting next to my parents, were those pair of red eyes, the white hair, the look of youth that made her seem irresistable.

I simply pointed at her " wh-what are you doing here?!" I asked, angrily and frozen in place. more importanly what are you doing eating dinner with my parents?!

"Sam, don't be rude. She found you passed out on the street, and was kind enough to bring you home." My mother said to me.

"Hello, Sam my name is Raharu Filo. Nice to see your O.K." She smiled as she said this. I meanwhile was about to call the cops. How'd you like that you lying piece of sh-

" She also has agreed to rent out the extra room in our house." My father said realizing I wasn't too fond of her.

I suddenly wasn't hungry. The phone started ringing in the other room. "I'll get that." is all I could manage. At the moment though, bolting through my mind was Where will she sleep, we don't have an extra room! I picked up the phone.

"Hello, this is Melody is Sam home?" She asked quickly. Melody was a good friend of mine, and at the moment, gave me a reason to not stay near that crazy woman.
"Hey mel, whats up?"

"Me, Zach and josh are going to a movie, want to come?"

Ten minutes later I was heading out the door. I told my parents I was going, and they said okay. It was Friday night after all. As I was walking out, I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned to see that woman, Raharu, right in my face.

"Try not to get angry around your friends tonight, okay? Otherwise I can't promise that the innocent won't get hurt. Got it?" She told me in a commanding whisper.

"Whatever. Just get out of my face, and don't come near me tonight. You got that?" I said, trying to remain calm.

So with that I left for The movie theater. It was a ten minute walk from my house, and it helped calm me down about my situation. I didn't know what she meant by what she said, but I hoped it wasn't a danger to my friends.

When I got there, rather than being gretted by a 'hey whats up man?', I got a,
" Hey, your still alive! I thought she took your soul!"From Zach, and Melody seemed just as concerned. Apparently Zach had told her everything.


My first thought to Zach was Why do we hang out?

We each got our tickets and walked in. But, I had a feeling I wasn't going to watch the movie, rather than be on a lookout for Raharu.

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Thanks for you kind words everyone! I think I'm gonna get the inflation in next chap! Until then, uhhhhh, I don't know what to say to you...

bravo!

Is this a fan-fic? Why Raharu? :huh:

Oh, and why the name Filo?

It's really well written though, and I'm looking forward to the rest. ^_^

yeah me too

No its not fan fic. It's just... loosely based on FLCL. Raharu, was because... I didn't know what else to name her. and Filo was because, I went to a site that tells you what your last name means, and Filo was better than some of the others there.

good point

Real nice. keep it up, i cant wait for the next chapter.......and mbay some more explanation of annoying evil lady ^^ hehe

oh, you'll get an explanation.I've got the next chap figured out. Now if I actually can get myself into a writing mood..., well... thats something else.

i agrree this is a good story
keep up the good work!

I can relate about the writing mood...

Though the oddest thing is I can usually just write right past that, when I can't do the same thing with drawing... <_< -_-

For everyone wondering, I think I can get the next chapter up before the night ends. But I have some homework I have to get done first, so you can expect it in the next two or three hours!

Guess I'll read it tomorrow then.

Looking forward to it. ^_^

alright chap 3, here we go!
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The movie was horrible, a real chick flick. halfway through, I couldn't take it anymore. "I'm going to the bathroom." I whispered to my friends, as I walked out.

Out of the theater, and into the bathroom. I took a look at my watch. Only seven thirty! oh well, I guess I can make sarcastic comments of the movie with Zach.

I was about to leave when I heard a "psst" from the corner of the room. It continued as I walked towared it. I stopped when I reached the garbage can. She popped her head out of the can as soon as I got close enough.

"Ahh!! ... Oh it's just you." I said as I stared at the face I was now positive was demonic.

Raharu looked as if she had something important to say." are you still managing your anger well?" she asked, seeming unsure of the answer.

"Well, I was. What are you doing here?" I asked.

" I have to warn you of a danger that may come your way!" she said in an urgent tone.

"No, I mean, what are you doing in the men's bathroom trashcan? why not lock yourself in a stall?" I asked quizzically.

" One day, you'll understand. probably in ten years, when you have to find your pupil." She retorted. "Now help me out of this thing!"

So I did, and she explained to me that when she ran me over, she passed on some kind of power from her to me. I knew this was bull, but it got me out of the movie. She never mentioned what kind of power she gave to me anyway though.

" So, I got to get back to the movie before my friends think I died, okay? so uhh..." I started.

"Of course I'll come with you! Oh and dont worry about the ticket guy, I already came by him." she told me.

"I didn't mean come with m... wait, what did you do to the ticket guy?"

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two miles away a bound and gagged ticket guy wondered why he didn't just take the job at subway.

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" Nevermind, I really don't want to know." I quickly added.

We walked into the theater. I sat with my friends, and Raharu sat nonchalantly next to me. It's amazing, as insane as I knew she was, she did have good common sense, as to not make my friends know who she is.

A few sarcastic remarks, and some shushes later, the movie ended. The women we're crying, the men were trying to stay awake, and I could see Raharu had a hard time keeping herself from laughing hysterically.

She made her way outside before My friends and I left. I wasn't angry about Raharu anymore. I stared at her in the parking lot. "Maybe shes not so bad after all?" I said quietly to myself. I saw her try and start the destruction she called a car. "I'll never ride in her car though."

Just then I saw Sarah and Jake walk out. They were two more people I knew from school. If you were to ask me, I'd say they were a perfect match of idiots. I swear Jake had the IQ of 80, and an arm of steel, and Sarah could stand next to hitler and people would say 'whos the bitch?' if you've ever had a bully, these two could top them.

The two of them were walking toward us unfortunately too. I swear they would never leave us alone.

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I know I promised inflation in this chapter, but Im getting tired now, so I'll try to update tomarrow. thanks again for the words of kindness :thumbsup:

thats okay
we can wait...can we?

I can wait...

Even even if I can't, I'll have no choice come the 15th... :rolleyes: :thumbsup:

IM LEAVING DAY AFTER TOMMORROW
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!