Let me repeat, THIS IS SERIOUS< AND NO INFLATION YET, but there will be some don't worry.
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12 years ago

"C'mon, give it back Lena!" Yelled Andrew, Lena's younger brother.Lena was screwin around with him, like usual, by taking away his book, and holding it up.

"what do you say?"She asked.

"Please?"

"nope!How bout, give me your allowence for the year!"

"No!"

"C'mon, your eight, what're you gonna do with it?!"She laughed a bit.She eventually caved in and gave him his book back.

They were walking home from school like usual, when they were stopped by three armored men."Halt!" one said.

"What is it."Lena asked impatiently,"don't you see i've got a brother to torment?"

They raised thier assault rifles.One started to talk."Target Sue, and Rob Shadow, status.., terminated."

"Wh-what!"Andrew yelled out.The kids knew they were serious.

"Lena Shadow, status Terminated." He fired a bullet into her brain.All that she heard before passing out, were her brothers screams.She knew what was going on. Her mother was going to have a third child, which was strictly forbidden by the law.When the government finds out about a third child, they terminate(Kill) the family, and the oldest son, is sent to the military.

Lena passed out from the pain.

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She awoke several hours later in her doctors emergency room.Luckily, he was against the law, and was willing to help those hurt by it."are you okay?" asked the doctor mechanically.

"I think so. What happened! where am I!"

"Your in the emergency room, Lena.... your parents.... are dead i'm afraid, and your brothers been taken by the army."He looked sad"Your the only one left.You are going to be sent to a orphange in a nearby town."

Suddenly it all became too real.Lena tried to stay stoical, but lost it, and cried.

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One week later...

She was in the orphanage now.She was not the social, happy girl she once was.In fact, she barely talked at all.The others thought of her as weird.

One day even a girl who was kind of the bully around there went up to her."What's wrong with you!You never talk, you never have a smile!Your a freak!A freak looking for people to pity you!"

"I'd prefer if you didn't call me a freak, I don't talk because I don't need anyone else, and I don't smile because I have no reason to."She said calmly.

Weeks later, she still didn't talk, people started to call her "Freak"(because she didn''t talk) and "The Shadow"(Beacause she went around rather unnoticed alot)
Eventually they began to torment her, and she just couldn't take it any more.

She hit a kid in the face with half her strength.He fell down hard.An adult who worked there walked in and noticed."Oh my god!" she yelled.She put her fingers on his neck to check his pulse.There wasn't one. "Call an ambulence!"

She was left alone after that, and she was happier that way.But, anyone who talked about the incident, got a dirty look from her.

What did you think?

Dang, that's a sad openning... :(

Hey...if we're doing sad...maybe I should post some of my character Ten's story...

Decent stuff you got here... ^_^

*looks at above post* Ten? what the hell hapened to twelve?.....


Anyway Great Intro...

Thanks guys! I happen to just like a sad opening, plus i'm so used to writing on Fictionpress.com, and Fanfiction.net.

Good sites!

chap 2


As she was growing up, she seemed a step ahead of everyone else.She was the smartest of her class in school, and she was stronger than most of the boys.But, at fifteen she needed a job.Unfortunately, she failed in simple jobs.She tried, Bag girl at local stores,cashier at fast-food places, and always ended up fired.

Then she saw it.As she was walking home from school, she saw a poster on a poll.

$15000 a win!Join the womens fighting legue!

It was fightng.She got the job there too.but, it had to be secretly.It was basically a porn-perverts thing. They would ware extremely tight, and fragile clothing.So, it would break easily, for some good action for perverted guys.

Her clothes never broke once.She would always win.People started to come to see her, instead of for the nudity fighting.Eventually, she was offered a job by the local mafia as an assasin...That was when her life got interesting.

She discovered her one true love.., killing.

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Nothing like a bit of hard-core drama, eh? ^_^


Oh, well Ten came before Twelve...obviously. :P Ten was the one I thought up the entire concept for...Twelve was my afterthought....

It wasn't meant to show me as perverted really, more to just show that the world is really screwed up, if thats what you were implying...

Some people might argue that out love of inflating to be perverted but anyway we dont judge here. well at least I dont....

Anyway, great second chapter, keep going you've got me really intrested.....

Thanks! I'm thinking of making a story on fictionpress about Lena...

anyway chap 3.

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After her fighting league experiance, she started taking jobs from local gangs.She ended up being on everyones "To Hire" list.She enjoyed the Mafia jobs the most as they would provide a gun for her.Usually a sniper, to suit her lonely personality.She always only needed one shot per target, ALWAYS .She was one amazing person to the gang and drug lords, and even amazed herself.As time went on, she killed more, and as time went on, she enjoyed it as well.It seemed to be a good time in her life...

Until the government came in...

It was a normal day, she just got off "Work" and was relaxing at the orphanage.But, then she was called to the office.She walked, wondering if they had found out.When she got there, there was a man dressed in a black suit,... with her adoption papers.It was unusual, that someone would adopt a fifteen year old, but, so was the rest of her life.

But, the man didn't want any real part in taking care of her.No. She was actually schedualed to join the military, as her brother did.But, she was no ordinary soldier, she became a member of the new, elite group, known only as MERCENARY.
Which was what they were really, they would work for the highest bidding government official, sargent, or whatever.When she wasn't on an assignment, or looking for a high bidder,... she was tortured with the others.

Electricity, blades,gunshots, you name it, she suffered through it.It only fueled her hate of the government more though.She even tried to run once...

The hard-core was implying the severity of the drama, not anything perverted or sexual...

And it seems to be building up to something big now...I'm keeping my eyes open for this. :thumbsup:

As the fish said to the fisherman "Im hooked" :D keep it going

And to think...I believed myself to be the one with the old-fashioned sense of humor...lol. :rolleyes: ;)

chap 4

Being part of MERCENARY wasn't easy.Especially if you already had a criminal record.In fact one of her missions went a little like this...:

It was a normal mission.Go in, kill the guy, and every witness, and leave.

It never actually went like that though.

An international assasin was going around, killing U.S. citizens.Lena was instructed to go in to a party he was going to and make him gone.

At the party, she walked in with only a knife, and her trusty pistols.Getting in wasn't easy either.She went to the front, and had to kill a woman who walked a little too far off, without getting blood on her clothes.

A precise pistol bullet collided with the poor womans brain, and Lena quickly changed into her clothes, and then walked into the party.

She looked at the picture of the man she was given, and found him, mingling with two young, and pretty women.She also noticed that there were at least fifteen well-armed guards around too.the target told the girls to go away for a little bit.This was her perfect opportunity.She put a silencer on her pistols, and put one behind his head.Not a single person noticed.Until he screamed.

Ohhhh crap, she thought, as she shot the man in the head.Now every one was looking at her, and the guards had thier own weapons out...

Nice. keep it up. I cant wait to see how she gets out of this...

Let's just say, it won't be peacefully...

Present Day...

We join Lena telling her story in a bar.

"So, what next?Did you kill them all?"Asked the bartender, who was now very interested, as were many customers.

"No, well not me anyway."She replied."At that moment, a guy walked in.And all he said was..."

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"I'm looking for an international assasin.You probably know him as the guy who makes me look bad."He said.

The guards attention was on him.Lena saw a chance, but decided to see how this would end."Get out of here. He's been killed.By her." The guard pointed at Lena.

"Really?" He replied."Well then, I can't go back and tell them I didn't kill anyone, now can I?How bout I kill You guys, and then her?"

"I'd like to see you try."They all pointed thier fully loaded assault rifles at him.
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Back at the bar
"He reached for a katana on his waist.They went for the triggers.But, as soon as he touched the hilt of his sword...."

"What?"Someone asked.

"They all died.All I could see was thier bodies, falling to the ground, and him putting his weapon away."They stared in awe."Then he just looked at me and said 'Your next'."

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I hope you guys don't mind I added her telling her story to people in a bar.But, I thought it just fit.Tell me if you don't like it.

~Wazzup!

I like the touch. :thumbsup:

really good, keep it up. i wanna see what happens next ^^

You may be surprised...

"So then what?"The bartender asked.

"Well, he went for his sword.I took a step back, and readied my gun."

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He took his sword out.Lena fired one round at his face.He blocked the bullet with his sword."I hope you can do better than that." He shot across the room, straight to her.He slashed her with his sword.

She fell to the ground, wounded.He walked up slowly for the final blow.He pulled out a small hidden knife.

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"He was about to stab me with it, and then..."

"Then what?"A local barfly asked.

"I had him where I wanted.He thought I was in too much pain to do anything.But, I had it planned out."

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She grabbed her pistol out, and fired a rount into his chest.He was too close to block it.It wouldn't finish him off, but it would do.She grabbed his knife, rolled around to his back, and put the blade to his neck in 1.3 seconds.

"Who are you!?" She yelled.

"Do you think you've won?"He asked quietly,calmly.

A loud BANG shot the knife out of her hand.At this point Lena noticed a small light on her arm.She fired another bullet to its source, and took out one of his reinforcements.

"Not bad" he said.Now out of her grasp,he grabbed a small card out of his pocket, and gave it to her."Call me sometime."

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"..And with that he literally disappeared.I went to his hurt henchman and asked who that man was.All he replied was 'The Liberator'.

Everyone looked in awe, as they knew who 'the liberator' was.

This is getting pretty good. ^_^