okay so I'm trying to improve my art, and I decided to come here for some crit on my art before I finalize it in order to improve. I'll try to do this often.
So here's my most recent art (it's a WIP, I'm waiting for crit to finish it)

point out some flaws to try and help me. This is for http://kazuv.deviantart.com 's contest, and I want to at least make it okay-ish.

nevermind i finished it alread because noone gave me any crit :/

Well you did only have it up for a lil' over one day.....

But for the critique....hm.........before I critique I must ask what sort of elements were you going for in the art? The concept? Anything else that may be important in reference?

And as a quick side question, how did you get the picture up on the post like that, I've been trying to figure that out for months to no avail.................

What do you use to make your drawings? I might suggest that you use the figure sketching if it supports layers

BTW, NJ, use the IMG tags

Just be sure that you use a image hosting service

Looks pretty good. ^_^

Better'n some I've seen even under the same genre on DA. :thumbsup:

Sorry I didn't comment. Busy with a lot of things.
Hmm... looks pretty good. You get her overall shape very good on your sketch. Nothing I could add much.

looks like someone's using vectors :P

you've deffinitely improved since the last time i've seen something of yours. Better structure, although that hook seems to be "floating" in her unclenched hand.

Also, her torso is shifted off to her left, yet her feet are still completely even, giving the illusion of one leg being longer than the other. It's an easy fix on future works if you just give the near foot a little foreshortening, and moving the other up on the picture plain.

Keep on keeping on, your taking steps.