water inflate balloon card on card captor
sakura avalon catcher 3 of the new clow card. First: sakura avalon is being inflate, second: sakura avalon is becoming pregnant, and third: sakura avalon is becoming fat sakura avalon.
sakura avalon and her friend and kero’s is return her home. In sakura avalon bedroom, sakura avalon and kero’s and her friend. They having a sleepover and kero’s sense a new clow card is called water inflate balloon card. ”But kero’s we got 3 of the new clow card right” said sakura avalon. Kero’s said “yes, but there a forth of the new clow card is water inflate balloon card”.
sakura avalon said “forth of the new clow card, ok Madison Taylor, Li Showron, Meilin Rae, kero’s, and me let find that water inflate balloon card let go!!!!”. “water inflate balloon card location at the beach, next stop beach” said kero’s. sakura avalon and kero’s and her 3 friend arrive at the beach. Sakura avalon said “no sign of water inflate balloon card.” Sakura avalon is being to sleep again. Madison taylor, Li Showron, Meilin Tae, and kero’s saw a water inflate balloon card, and water inflate balloon is ahead straight sakura avalon, 3 of sakura avalon friend and kero’s tired to stop water inflate balloon card from going inside sakura avalon body, but it was too late. The water inflate balloon card is inside sakura avalon body. Sakura avalon is beginning to wake up and said “did guy got water inflate balloon card did you?”. kero’s said “ the water inflate balloon card is inside you sakura avalon”. “Oh no” said sakura avalon . Sakura avalon said “ I feel funny, and I need some water.” Then sakura avalon is drink all the ocean and sakura avalon body is begin to full all the water and inflate. “Oh no if sakura avalon drink all the ocean in the world she will be destroy we must do something?” said kero’s. Sakura avalon done drink all the ocean water sakura avalon looking at her body and she screamer at her body and she beginning to jiggle all the ocean water inside sakura avalon body. “Hey sakura avalon” said Madison taylor. “You found the way to return my normal form?” said sakura avalon. Madison taylor said “yes the only way return to your normal form is to sucking all the ocean water out inside you sakura avalon.” Sakura avalon said “do you have water inflate balloon sucking gun do you?” “yes we have water inflate balloon sucking gun”. Said Madison taylor. Kero’s and 3 of sakura avalon friend said “ ready, aim. Sucking.” All the ocean water is putting it back all the ocean place on the earth and water inflate balloon card is coming out sakura avalon body and sakura avalon body is return to her normal body. Sakura catcher a water inflate balloon card. “Yay we did it. We got all the 4 of the new clow card now let go back to my house to have a party” said sakura avalon.
The End.
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well what do you think? :)
WHY NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :angry:
I see no improvements from the origanal... And Sakura's STILL a ten year old...
Grammer seems marginally better and using 10 year olds is well ...odd...but doable as long as we're not going for sex here but still needs some heavy work.