We view the Ra yellow dorm from across a majestic lake at duel academy. The dormitory itself resembles a fifteenth century castly with yellow roofing material made of tile, the outer walls made of brick with very ornate windows spread about the building. We specifically view the west side of the dormitory, the girl's dormitory. We then see three students walking around the lake, currently on the opposite side of the dorm. One of the students was a male student known as Brock. He was about 5 feet and 6 inches tall, he had average male length brown hair, had mildly tanned white skin, brown eyes, and his uniform consisted of grey sweatpants, yellow green shoes, and a mostly yellow jacket that appeared to be 2 sizes too big for him. There were two girls walking around with him, one of which was known as Airyel. Airyel had vibrant blonde hair with brown coloration lining the bottom of her hair, her hair was about down to her waist, she stood about 5 feet and 4 inches tall, and had hazel eyes. Her uniform was made up of a short white skirt with green lining the bottom of it, a yellow long sleeved shirt with white cupplings and a green zipper on the back, and white and green high heeled shoes [the heels and opening's lining are green]. The other girl was not a Ra Yellow student like Brock and Airyel, she was an Obelisk Blue student known as Valerie. She was about 5 feet 4 inches tall, and had long red hair trailing down to her waist. Her Obelisk Blue uniform was unlike most other female Obelisks' outfits. She had a long sleeved blue shirt with a small white tie in the front with golden buttons covering the abdomenal area of the outfit, a medium length skirt [blue and down to her knees], and she had basic blue high heeled shoes with the exception of having golden buckles placed over the area of the toes.

"I am so telling you that my Megarock Dragon could take down your Gaurdian Angel Joan any day of the week." Brock said obviously continuing a conversation we missed, directing his comment towards Valerie, "Your dragon may be able bodied to exceed my angel's attack strength with ease, but my latest acquisitions will more than easily decimate your rock creatures." Valerie responded calmly with a smirk as well as her eyes being kept closed. "Look, can you two figure out who's got a better deck tommorrow when you two duel each other for the test?" Airyel complained sighing, "I'm just glad we only argue when it comes to duel monsters games' competitiveness...." Brock and Valerie gasped, Airyel walking into a strange dark figure unintentionally, it seemed to simply appear out of thin air...... "*Umph*What the he.....ehhhh........." Airyel then looked up to the figure she had bumnped into. It appeared to be a seven foot tall male wearing a trenchcoat covering all of his body except his head, which was covered by a black derby, a black scarf, and red goggles. "Hello there ladies, I've been waiting for you." He said in a raspy yet calm voice. "Let's get out of here like NOW!" Brock said running back to the dorm, "I don't think so..." The dark figure said, as Brock and Airyel turned back to the man he had Valerie in his arms, he appeared to be choking her with his left hand, gloved by a silver glove, a fraction of a duel disk visible, "Now my sole demand is a duel with you young lady, yes you with the gold hair...." He said pointing to Airyel with his right hand still holding Valerie, "Now if you duel me I'll let your friend here come back with you..." He then held up his left arm, now holding Valerie by her arm, and a duel disk materialized, the version now used by modern day Academy students. "And when we duel we have these stakes. If you win, I come with you to the dormitory and turn myself in for assault as well as the fact I'll give you all every duel monster card I possess....." The three then smiled, as he had dropped Valerie, yet the four duelists were now being surronded by a ring of ice and lightning, about 50 feet around, "But if I win, then I get to keep YOU!" He said pointing to Airyel. "So do you accept...Or will you allow me to kill off your friend?" He said, suddenly a red ring resembling a card known as Ring of Destruction appeared around Valerie's neck. "I accept!" Airyel yelled. "Now let my friend out of that bomb!" "Not till the duel is done my sweet..." He then responded. The two then took stances about 40 feet away from each other, the two then opened their mouths about to say one word in unison, "DUEL!"


<This is the moment right before the duel begins, I hope this'll become more interesting as it develops.....Please feel free to give your opinions.>

"Ladies first Airyel..." The figure said leaning forward in a bow almost pretending to be a gentleman. "You'll regret that idea!" Airyel said, then drawing the top card of her deck, the two duelists lifepoint counters reaching 8000. "I'll start things off by playing my Oh-So-Cute Winged Kuriboh in attack mode!" Airyel said, a small brown puffball of fur appearing in front of her. The puffball had eerily large yellow eyes, two sets of green appendages [two hands and two feet] each just barely visible tipped with yellow talons. The most noticeable feature was it's set of small angelic wings placed upon it's back. "And now I play a spell known as Pot of Greed which allows me to draw two new cards!" Airyel then picked up two more cards from the top of her deck, then smirking, "Now I play Graceful Charity which allows me to draw 3 new cards! Permitting I discard 2 cards imediately afterward." Airyel then picked up three cards, discarding 2 from her hand. "And I play my Premature Burial spell card, so at the cost of 800 lifepoints I can reserruct a monster from my graveyard in attack mode and equip it with this card.....And I choose to reserruct my....Amazon Chain Master!" As Airyel said this a female monster spouted from the ground, she appeared to be incredibly dark skinned as well as very muscular and busty. Her outfit was mainly fur like rags and chain based outerware as well as animal skin sandals. Her hair was black/gray and down to her waist, and she weilded a long chain with a bomerang like scythe on the end. "And then I set 2 cards face down and end my turn, your move......whatever your name is." Airyel said. "My name is Hugeimor, and now you'll regret not running away while you had the chance!" He then drew his card, "I'll start by playing my Oxygedon in attack mode!" A strange pterosaur like dragon appeared, it was made entirely of gas, and except for it's yellow eyes was completely green. "And now that Oxygedon's out I play a spell card known as Air Canisters!" Suddenly two gas holding tanks that were about as tall as Airyel appeared next to Amazon Chain Master. "Confused, you should be! because using my card I simply tribute one Wind based monster from my hand or field and I ca, well you'll see, because I'll tribute the Oxygedon I just summoned to use my canisters' powers." As Oxygedon evaporated, two hoses appeared on either side of the Amazon Chain Master, each from the canisters. "Now when my Air Canisters are activated, I simply tribute a Wind attribute monster from my hand or field and I can then decrease one female monster on my opponent's side of the field's attack points by an amount equal to my tributed monster's attack strength and the same goes for it's defense! And did I forget to mention one other thing?......." Hugeimor then rubbed the bottom of his scarf laughing. Suddenly the Amazon Chain Master began to fill up with a strange gas causing her body to expand rapidly. Soon her abdomen had reached a size of nearly 10 feet in diameter, all her limbs and other features no longer visible, "Oh yeah, now I remember!" Suddenly the Amazonian warrioress popped into a pile of skin scraps. "WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY AMAZON!?" Airyel asked scared.

"Well I guess I just realized I forgot to mention my card's final ability, if the woman monster it inflates has less attack points than the monster I tribute, it's popped, and there's another thing, if I tribute a machine monster from my hand, I can take my canisters back." Hugeimor discarded a card and the Air Canisters card returned to his hand. "And now for another factor, since I discarded the monster 'Heliumnocht' I can automatically summon it to the field in defense mode." Suddenly a monster resembling a deflated red balloon appeared on the field. "True, it has 0 defense points, but my Air Canisters have another ability, if I discard it from my hand while I have Heliumnocht on the field, my heliumnocht gains 1500 attack points for every Wind monster in my graveyard." Suddenly Heliumnocht began to increase in size, as if filling with a gas, such as helium. "And now I play my Mystical Space Typhoon so I can destroy one spell or trap on the field, and I'll take out...that one!" Hugeimor pointed to one of Airyel's set cards which then burst into flames in a vortex of wind. "You destroyed my Trenscendent Wings card!" Airyel proclaimed in anger and fatigue. "I know, but the best is yet to come. I play my Curse of Fiend card which switches all monsters in attack mode to defense and all monsters in defense to attack, so your little wingboy goes to defense and my balloon gets back into attack mode, now my balloon, destroy that Winged Kuriboh!" The Heliumnocht then flew into the air, then crashing down onto Winged Kuriboh which was then flattened and destroyed. "And now I initiate my end phase." As Hugeimor said this Heliumnocht increased in size again, "Now what happened to make Heliumnocht bigger?" Airyel asked, "Why haven't you learned anything yet, the balloon class of monster has a special ability. Every time an End Phase occurs, the person who's end phase was initiated, gets to place one inflation counter on any balloon monster under their control, and my Heliumnocht has the special ability that every time my turn ends he gains one helium counter, and each helium counter causes his to gain 500 attack points, meaning my monster now has 2000 attack points! And then I set my final card for the turn and end my move" "You creep, it's my move now!" Airyel said drawing a card, "I don't get what's up with this guy, he's got the weirdest cards....maybe this'll work!" Airyel then activated her face down card, "My face down is Call of the Haunted, and I'll use it to bring out another monster from my graveyard, this one's a bit more powerful...." Airyel said mockingly as she reached into her graveyard slot..............

Not bad so far, but if you're using my balloon monster type, you made a minor mistake. Your mistake was that balloon monsters gain an inflation counter during any end phase. A Balloon-type monster only gains an inflation counter during its controller's standby phase. Also, Air canisters is a little overpowered. It was fine up until the return to your hand effect. After that it was just more overpowered. Otherwise, good story so far.

<Yes, I forgot to mention the Air Canisters cards' negative effects. It remains equipped to the affected monster till its' destroyed. And every time a turn ends and it is in play [both the owner's and opponents'] the card's respective owner takes damage equal to the affected monster's star level multiplied by 100. The return to hand by discarding a machine monster ability can also only be used once, for no lp charge that is. The second time the owner must tribute 1000 lifepoints, the third time 2000. the fourth time 4000, and so on the amount doubling every time. I found no need to mention these effects yet because they hadn't been left on the field that long. And that ability for Heliumnocht may be long winded [pun intended] but Heliumnocht is a level 8 monster, and the only reason I made it so easy to summon is because, well....you'll see soon enough.......And the reason I made my balloon monsters different from yours is because those monsters are your ideas and I don't have automatic permission to use them, I simply took a new approach on the balloon class to respect you and your monsters>

"I don't like this one bit Brock... " Valerie said from the sidelines with a hint of concern in her voice, "I know Airyel is good and all, but I've heard of this Hugeimor guy somewhere. Something about him being the best duelist on the European continent. I heard he used mostly wind and machince monsters, never had I knew these BALLOON cards ever existed." "Yeah, those balloon cards are like, so totally unfair." Brock commented, "Can't we just like, leave or something and Airyel can catch up later?" "Hello BOMB STILL AROUND MY NECK!" Valerie retorted, "Well no skin of my nose, I'm going...." as Brock stepped over the ring a dark purple aura surronded him. Suddenly he collaped. "What did you do to him!?" Airyel yelled angrily, "Why he broke a rule of the stakes my dear, and I'll be nice and only make HIM pay the price for now....." Hugeimor then held up s duel monster card with a blank picture. Slowly a face came into focus on the card, as it finished it was clear that it was Brock screaming in agony, "BROCK!?" The two girls yelled for their friend, "okay...NOW I'm going to drag you all over this ring in you defeat!" Airyel said steadying her hand at the graveyard, ready to pick up her card, "And the monster I select is none other than.........GAURDIAN ANGEL JOAN!"

Ariyel prepared to bring forth her new monster, in it's majestic form and power. A beautiful white ring of evergy emenated from the ground, the ring forming an angel like creature within, or should I say below it. The creature was about average size for a woman in her mid twenties, she had short orange hair that didn't even rach the bottom of her face, and was adorned in white robes and sashes with golden coils of thread covering her entire body from the neck down except for her arms. The ring then sat inches above her head, as a halo, finally wuge feathery wings sprouting from the left and right sides of her back, her form then touching down to the ground. "My angel here has more than enough attack power to pop your balloon, but since that was a special summon, I can still make my normal summon too, and my choice shall be Mystic Elf in attack mode." A blue skinned elf, considerably tall for a female human, appeared in the field. She was donned in green robes from her neck down, the neck lining area and her forehead adorned in what gave off the apearance of white tiaras. She also had long blonde hair down to her feet and her eyes were closed currently. 'Sure she may not be strong now, but that's why I have this field spell card! Luminous Spark!" Airyel then opened a slot on the end of her duel disk placing a spell card in. As she did a bright light filled the arena, as the light began to dull, an yellow aura could be seen around Airyel's monsters, "Ya see this Luminous Spark field spell makes it so that every light monster out gains 500 attack points, but loses 400 defense points, but that's a small price to pay, for my monsters' boosts. NOW JOAN ATTACK THAT BALLOON!" Airyel said, her monster then showing it's left hand in front of it's body, the Heliumnocht then gained a mysterious white aura, and evaporated into thin air. "And because of Joan's special ability, if she destroys a monster in battle, I gain lifepoints equal to the monster's attack points." As Airyel said this she expected her lifepoint counter to go up to 9200, and it did, but as she smirked out of pleasure she noticed a tightness in her uniform's top, "WHa....ooohhh....what's happening!?" Airyel questioned as Hugeimor's lifepoint counter dropped to 7200 from the attack, "Well first off don't get comfortable with those new assets because it's time for Heliumnocht's final ability. ya see if he isn't destroyed by a spellcaster class monster or a wind monster, we both take damage equal to Heliumnocht's attack points at the time of his destruction." Suddenly Airyel's lifepoint counter reverted to 7200, Hugeimor's going down to 5200, "And about your ex new cleavage, in a shadow duel, your body is your lifepoint holder, that thing on your duel disk is just a display..." As Hugeimor said this the bottom of his trenchcoat began to evaporate, his legs not visible, he was nearly missing his bottom half of his body. "So when you gain lifepoints you get body back, or even more body, in the way you want it, but when you lose lifepoins, you lose body, did you notice when you used premature burial your knees suddenly dissappeared? And they have again because of Heliumnoct's ability?" Airyel then looked to her legs and sure enough she was missing the stubs that were her knees, "Sh-Shadow D-Duel?........Well I can still attack with my Elf!" Airyel said, the Mystical elf then began to start a strange chant, Hugeimor's lifepoint counter droppint to 3900. "And there goes the last of your ass." Airyel said partly laughing, "Try to keep your language mild, this is an all age story." Hugeimor said, "I don't know what you're talking about, but I'll end my turn now." "My move!" Hugeimor said drawing a card, "Well Well Well, I drew a very powerful spell card, it's called Spider Web. This card allows me to take one spell card from my opponent's graveyard and add it directly to my hand, and I choose Pot of Greed!" Suddenly a silky lins shot out of Hugeimor's hand, into Airyel's graveyard, and then made return trip to Hugeimor's hand. "And I'll activate it post haste, so it goes back to your graveyard now, and I use it's powers. And these new cards are pretty good ones.." Hugeimor commented, "And here one goes! I play the equip spell card known as B.I. pills!" Two items which resembled pills then appeared in Hugeimor's hand, "And I'll give em to your angel there!" He said, Joan instinctively opening her mouth knowing she wanted those items, "And now for their kick!" As Hugeimor said this Joan's breasts [which were about B cups to begin with] began to inflate with a hssing sound, first they expanded to about 6 inches in diameter, then 1 foot, then a foot and a half, and finally they expanded to be nearly five yards in diameter, Joan's gown miraculously expanding with them, "You see my equip spell simply does this, allows you to gain 1000 lifepoints, but then the monster I equip it to is no longer able to be used as a tribute in any way, can no longer attack, and last but not least [Hugeimor then takes a more elegant pose for his next phrase and speaks it more calmly]your monster gets a beautiful new set of breasts which could double as pillows if it weren't for the face they're causing her to float over the field." And he was right Joan was now dangling in the air, suspended by her breasts. She flapped her wing rapidly and tried to shove the breasts back into her chest, as well as anime anger symbols and anime sweatdrops covering her angered face. "You think giving my Angel some hot air balloon boobs will do anything, I still have my elf!" Airyel responded angrily. As her counter reached 8200 she noticed a tingling in her chest, although weaker than when she nearly had 9200, Her breasts expanded from a C cup, into a D cup, the top of her uniform beginnig to feel tight and restraining, "And giving me back lifepoints was even stupider, and these lil' gifts as you may call 'em arent' gonna bribe me!" She said pointing to her breasts, "Who said I was trying to please you?" Hugeimor said then taking the second card from his hand, "And now I summon Hydrogedon!" A strange lizard like creature then spouted from the ground in a brown haze, it was very stout, and was all around brown except for it's yellow eyes. "Now my creature attack and destroy The Mystical Elf!" Hydogedon then opened it's gargantuan mouth releasing a stream of gas [Hydrogen] right at the mystical Elf which then evaporated. "And my Hydrogedon has a special ability, whenever he destroys a monster in battle I can summon another Hydrogedon from my deck!" Another creature then appeared on the fieldm exactly like the original Hydrogedon.

"So it's your turn now..."Hugeimor stated as Airyel drew her card hers and Joan's bodies began to expand again. Joan's breasts had now swollen to be nearly 8 yards in diameter, Airyel however began to expand elsewhere, her stomach had now swollen to be nearly a foot in diameter. "And by the way, you gain 1000 lifepoints for every turn B.I. Pills is in play, but the equipped monster's attack points decrease by 700 during every one of your Standy Phases, and I hope you like ow big your getting, inflating is my specialty after all....BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Hugeimor bellowed as Airyel sighed in desperation hoping the duel would end soon.....

<By the way Zero, only the person who's end phase it is decides to add counters. Like if it was Airyel's end phase and she decided she didn't want to give Heliumnocht an inflation counter when her turn ended, that's her choice. Also, as a tiny note, if Heliumnocht's attack strength ever goes over 3000 it is automatically destroyed.>