sakura feel funny day on card captor

chapter 1. inflate sakura.

chapter 2. pregnant sakura.

chapter 3. weight gain sakura.
bonus pics from chapter 1 and chapter 3.

chapter 1. inflate sakura.
sakura avalon went home to talk kero's about three new clow card. kero's told sakura everything 1. inflate card, 2. pregnant card, and 3. weight gain card. Then one night inflate card go inside sakura avalon room and inflate card headstrait to sakura avalon body. on the next days sakura is awake up and out of her bed sakura is feeling funny and she look at the mirror and she look at her body and then she scream that she became inflate sakura avalon and her shirt is pulling up itself. sakura friend is here in sakura avalon room and then sakura friend and kero's saw sakura is being inflate. "If sakura avalon getting more inflate and get biggest and biggest she pop." said kero's. "The only way to make sakura avalon back to her normal body is to dance" said kero's. sakura avalon begin to dance then inflate card out from sakura avalon body. Then sakura body is returning to her normal body and sakura catcher a inflate card. "one clow card down, two more clow card to go" said sakura avalon. The End.
chapter 2. pregnant sakura.
Sakura avalon got inflate card in her hand. to find & catcher pregnant card sakura avalon go straight and kero's and one of the sakura friend go left and two of the sakura friend go right. on noon sakura avalon is begin to sleep on a chair. then pregnant card saw sakura avalon and pregnant card is headstrait sakura avalon belly and then sakura avalon belly begin grow. sakura avalon wake up and she search for pregnant card and then sakura avalon look at the mirror she touch her belly and sakura avalon look at her shirt is pulling up itself. then sakura avalon found pregnant card is inside her belly. then sakura avalon look at her belly is begin to grow. kero's and sakura friend hear sakura avalon voice at the waiting room. kero's and sakura friend saw sakura avalon at the waiting room and then kero's and sakura friend look at sakura avalon belly. "SAKURA AVALON IS PREGNANT!?!?!?!?" said kero's and sakura friend. Sakura friend touch Sakura avalon belly. Sakura avalon is ready to push to pregnant card out of sakura avalon belly. Then pregnant card out of the sakura avalon belly and sakura avalon belly is back to normal. sakura avalon catcher a pregnant card. "two clow card down, one more clow card to go" said sakura avalon. The End
chapter 3. weight gain sakura.
First sakura avalon catcher inflate card, second sakura avalon catcher pregnant card. Now there one more clow card left is weight gain card. Sakura avalon, kero's, and sakura friend go to the work out gym to find weight gain card. Sakura avalon go left and kero’s and one of the sakura friend go up, two of sakura friend go right. then weight gain card put a weight gain cover all the food and all weight gain card inside the food. sakura avalon go the food to eat room and sakura avalon go in. and then sakura avalon saw all the food to eat. sakura avalon is feeling hungry so sakura is going to eat all the food. sakura avalon is eating all the food and then sakura avalon belly begin to gain some fat. the weight gain card is inside sakura avalon body. in noon sakura avalon wake up and she look at the mirror she gain some 9,000 lbs. kero's and sakura friend heard sakura avalon voice at the food to eat room. they here at food to eat room and they saw sakura avalon became fat. "the only way to make sakura avalon back to normal again is to sucking all the weight gain card fat magic with a sucking all fat gun. they sucking all fat out of sakura avalon body. then sakura avalon wake up she catcher weight gain card. "We got three new clow card" said sakura Avalon, kero's, and sakura friend. The End.
bonus pics from chapter 1 and chapter 3.

well what do you thick of my first fan fic?

I moved this thread from the Inflation RP forum to this forum because this thread is a story and not an RP. As for your work, speechjon, it looks good but I have a question. How old is sakura in the show?

Age: 10

Off tpoic, wrong forum, bad quality? deleted.

here sakura avalon info.

sakura avalon
age:10
hair color:brown
eye color:green
sex:female

No offense well ok I can't really say that and mean it but this was horrible. besides the concept of a 10 year old pregnant the story was some mangled piece of wrinting that needs put out of it's misery. First the end... not meant to be used over and over. Two, most of those sentences are grammer slaughter houses. Three well i'm not going farther enough has been said.

Well, if English wasn't speechjon's primary (first) language, then you can't really blame him for the grammatical problems. Even then, using a 10 yr old for expansion/inflation is distrubing.

Even if it wasn't it's structured badly to many the ends guh it's just a mess.

sakura avalon age 15

Why are you saying she's 15 now when you said she's 10 at an earlier post. Besides, she can't be 15 years old -- a quick google search reveils that she is in the forth grade (the site I got that info is at is http://www.ex.org/5.6/44-manga_ccs.html).

i'm sorry :(
forgive me everybody

everybody make a fan art of scene from the fan ficton call: sakura feel funny day on card captor

chapter 1. inflate sakura.

chapter 2. pregnant sakura.

chapter 3. weight gain sakura

is that understand

That last reply of yours needs to be in a different thread under inflation art...

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