here come the story.


in a world plaged by evil six hero come forth each having great skill and power.this group hold a dragon knight,a white summner,theif,monk,gun mage,and finally a red mage,the only question is will these 6 kid save us or will all females become ballons only time will tell.welcome to

FINAL DREAM


chapter 1:the start

Are story take place in the city of lender where we find are three hero walking into town.the boy with the spicky dark grey hair wearing the red short sleeve butten shirt and blue pants is hero the dragon knight,the girl next to him with the long brown hair wearing the white shirt and the veary tinny miny skirt is piper the summner,the boy wearing the mage clothes is chris the red mage,the girl with the short blond hair is mary the thief and she wearing a green tub top and green shorts,the short boy with the messy tan hair is the great monk in his kung fu clothes,and finaly the gun mage rose wearing a short pink dress with her hair in a pig tail.As the group walk down the street they saw that that the girl of the town where very round like baloons."so the what we heard was right they been hit here to."said hero looking around."yep look like it."said mary."so by the look of it the prophet doing this but how?"asked chris."by magic" answerd tom.(mean while at the church)"father how could you!"said a women being stuffed with pink stuff."you know to much so this end will be good for you."said kain walking away.as soon as the men left the women expanded and her clothes pobbed off to show her pink under wair but she still grew."please stop im going to pop" yelled the women as she grew bigger and fatter till it happen she pop right there.

well wht do you think?

Well apart from spelling errors and grammatical mistakes this may evolve into something interesting yet. And just a question...Are you still working on the Love of Two Dragons story?

<sorry about the spelling and typing but i stink a english.i will as soon i i think of an idea for a chapter but if you have any ideas please tell them to me.>


chapter 1:the start part 2

well in are last chapter we learned that the world is in danger of inflation and the 6 great heros are on there way to stop them.


Are hero walk into the center on town and then said they cover more grownd if they split up and so they did and we know see hero walking down the street."It weird that some one could do this to so many girls in such a little time"thought hero looking around seeing all the inflated girls.behind hero were to skinny women watching him becaues they knew that hero was not human."Should i ask why your following me"asked hero still looking forward."becaues your that evil dragon knight we heard about"said the blond girl.there was a great quite before one of the girl said "that mean we must kill you" and as soon as she said that two more girls moved in front of hero."im not worred becaues you got nothing to fight with."said hero camly."oh really"said all the girls as they pulled out a pink food and ate it,a moment later the girls were inflating there robes showing only there belly."that not good" said hero."square attack"said all the girls as they charged forwerd.hero bent down then jumped higher then a builden."how he do that"asked the girl with black hair."his leg are stronger because of his dragon knight blood."answerd the red head.at the other end of town the three girls went to the church but the kain had a plan ready."piper im getting a bad feeling about this"said rose looking around."you worry to much what the worst that can happen"said piper.<back were hero was.>"man what was those girls"said hero dropping from the air."there he is get him!"yelled a vocie."shoot that not good" said hero running but when hero got to a dead end a hand pulled him into a houes."what going on"said hero."nothing relaxes"said a girl with short but a little long brown hair."who are you?"asked hero."Im kelly your angel."said kelly pulling hero out of the houes and to the church.<a couple moments later in the church>"father kain i brought him"said kelly going up to the alter."good"said kain as his men graped hero."I broght the boy so you need to make him love me"said kelly."how could he love a blimp"said kain with a evil smile.<a moment later we see hero chain down and kelly bolted to the wall about to be stuff.>"you wounld't"said kelly looking at kain but he did he kept feedind her but at first nothing happen but the kelly belly kept growing her small skit ript clean off showing here pink panties the her shirt came off showinf her pink bra and then it stop but kelly was as big as a houes."im so fat"cryed kelly.

to be continued.....

Oooh... This is getting good! B)

Where can I buy some of that pink stuff?

(you'll find out soon)

chapter 2:answers

"why did you do all this kelly?"asked hero looking at the growned."love."answerd kelly."what that mean?"asked hero."i love a dragon knight just like you but he had to leave soon i lock my heart but then kain told me that he was comming back and that it was you."answerd kelly smiling at hero."no i'm not"said hero with a cold stair right at kelly."but you have to be..."began kelly before hero yelled "MY NAME HERO".the door then opean but it was not solider that came it was tom and chris."hey hero what up"asked tom laughing."unlock me and then were going after kain"said hero."sure"said chris as he freed hero."let go."said hero walking."what about her?"asked tom."leave her."said hero as the three left.As the boy left a women with long dark hair wearing a veary small dress walk in."do you hate him"asked the women."yes"answerd kelly."good"said the women as her nail grew and wen't into kelly belly sucking it all up."thank you"said kelly.in the women hand was a gold buff that she shoved down kelly mouth.<back to our heros in the middle of the church.>"so you got out well know i can kill you my self"said kain."fight sure it sound fun"said tom."oh but there a only some time boys,look at the wall"said kain pointing at the wall.on the wall was piper,mary,and rose bolted to the wall with tube in there mouth."you wouldn't dare"said chris."yep.if you don't beat me quick the girl get bigger and bigger till they pop."said kain as he snapped his finnger then puff slime went threw the tubes but then stop but all three girls belly look like they were pregnet with 7 kids.

will hero,chris,and tom be victoies or will the girls pop.find out next time.

Great story man, but looks like you could do a bit more with paragraph spacing.

Heh... Maybe I should join in the fight and make sure the girls pop ^_^

oh but if you did that you miss the best part in chapter 4.

How much for a gallon of that puff slime?

chapter 3:ready,set,fight!!!

the boy look at the girls an thought of what would happen if they lost."okay let go."said the boy as the chagred at kain."kick his but"thought the girls.

hero pulled out his sword and try'ed to slash him but he kept missing,chris cast all his spell but he missed to,and tom couldn't hit him.the girl were growing fast the biggest was rose she was so big her dress was ridding up showing her white panties,next was piper who skirt was going to rip soon,mary was small but her clothes were tight still."why can't we hit this guy?"asked tom breathing hard."becaues he fighting with cat style."answerd chris."okay that mean we have to use team over drive!"said hero holding his blade that was glowing with light."got it"said chris with his spell book glowing."let rock"said tom glowing."flamming air cutting punch."said the boys."okay full blast"said kain as a hole lot of puff slime went into the girls.thank to the full blast the girl were as big as blimbs all of the under garment were showing.but that was kain final infaltion the boys won (in more way then one :P )"were huge."yelled the girls."that the least of your problems know."said kelly in her new thin figer.

what going to happen know?will are hero quest end here or will somthing good happen?

*Claps* I had a hard time following the fight scene, but picturing the look on the girl's faces gives me goose bumps. They must be so cute and bloated...


... Can I barrow Hero's sword for a minute :ph43r:

okay let me sum up the fight for every one.it hero,chris,and tom vs kain.at the start the guys can't hit him becaues he use cat style that let him move veary quickly so the guys use the over drives (best moves) in a combo that burn,cut,and brused kain.why do you need my dragon blade???

To poke teh girls...

Fiendish shame on you your supposed to come prepared with darts and other pointy things if your going to do that... anyways ok story gramatical errors half kill it same for the godly power gaming runnign around ut kinda works.

*Bows in shame* I am sorry master Tippsy... I'll bring a pin next time... or a high heeled shoe...