I made plans to write an inflation series. I don't know if it's good enough though. Here's one part of it.


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Trimini’s Mask Saga
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The Patience Chapter
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Written by TwilightArk
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A man with scars upon his face named Ko was left in a mountain village called Remmira abandoned at a young age by his parents to fend for himself. Because of the scars, he was treated as though he was less than human and was denied respect by the villagers around him. Despite his face, the man is far from normal. He discovers an unusual significance with balloons. Their traits lure him towards a strange interest for he tends to wish for the same properties in females. An inflatable girl who fills and expands. Such a fascination brought him happiness but it was only brief, as this only gave the others all the more reason to exclude and torment him.
On the night of his 19th birthday, a trio of men who spent years taunting him ambushed him and beat him mercilessly with sticks. He limped back to his lonely home to find a box wrapped in paper. Ko did not know who sent it. He opened the box and inside was a mask that resembled Trimini, the Magical Trickster from the stories of the village. Upon putting on the mask, he found himself granted with the reality bending magic of Trimini. The power was great and within a few days, he discovered how he could wield it. The power of the mask had granted him youth and eternity as he travels throughout lands using his newfound magic to harmlessly inflate others for years and years to come.

This is a story of a strange man wielding a strange power…

This is the Patience Chapter…
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The last of a rainstorm tapped upon the windows of the inn while Ko took the chairs and stacked them atop of their table, then he took all of the furniture in the room and pushed it into a corner ensuring himself that there would be plenty of space, then he sat upon the bed waiting for the inn’s room service. His stomach moaned reminding him that he had not eaten in weeks. If not for the magic of the mask he was wearing, he would’ve surrendered to his painful hunger and died. A while ago, he had asked the inn to cook up a bowl of beef stew, and made preparations for Tammy the maid to arrive with his desired food. It was tempting to ignore her and skip right to eating his meal but then all his effort and planning would be all for naught. It took him time to get all this ready for her. He would not miss it.
Suddenly, the door clicked open and a woman walked into the room with a food cart holding a steaming bowl of beef stew. It was her. It was the young lady he had been expecting. Her long, sunshine, blonde hair holding her cap and waving along her tender face as she walked into the room. She was dressed in her light blue maid outfit in a trim and tidy fashion. She was so preoccupied with her work; she failed to realize all of the room’s décor had been pushed against one wall. This was the moment. Ko focused his eyes on Tammy in concentration.
Immediately, a hiss whispered from Tammy’s chest just as she was about to grab the bowl. She stopped immediately what she was doing and checked upon herself. Her reaction wasn’t a happy one. She screamed as she saw her breasts swell rapidly. She watched in surprise at her amazing change then started to painfully moan as her bra tightened running out of space to contain her blossoming bosom. A similar hiss began to surface from Tammy’s lower half, but she had failed to notice due to her inflating chest until her sides and thighs began to plumpen outwards. Her waistline spread out and she was blowing up like a balloon. She whimpered as she began to expand bigger and bigger trying to stop herself from growing any bigger with her hands but it did no good. The strap of her apron clinging to her was doing better as it held on and divided her into two sections each starting to bulge pass the strap. It had given in and burst off of her, causing her jolt out even further. She had to be three times bigger than her original shape. Her attempts to stop the expansion with her hands were ended as Tammy’s arms began to puff and stiffen like the rest of her, and slowly she lost control of them as they pulled away backwards and retracted back to her shoulders, as they got bigger. Meanwhile her legs had blown up into a pair of oversized stubby masses. At this point, they no longer offered her support as she slowly descended backwards onto her swollen posterior.
She laid on her puffy back waving her swollen arms and legs and in a pointless effort to somehow stop the chaos but to no avail. With a pop, her restraining bra gave way and freed her chest. The size of her breasts began to neighbor her neck forcing her to tip her head backwards. She had given up on stopping herself from blowing up. Now she helplessly watched her herself get bigger and wider all the while the masked Ko inflated her. She was quite an interesting sight. Her vast chest had conquered her upper half and her inflated waist and belly took over her lower half with bloated and useless limbs attached. Her short skirt had failed to keep her lower section covered. Ko had stopped his magical concentrating and the hissing ceased.
Ko took a moment to admire the inflated young lady before resuming staring at her with concentration. With a snap of his fingers, Tammy began to float off of the carpet and travel upwards squealing in panic along the way. She greeted the ceiling with a series of light, unstable bounces before settling. There she stayed for a small moment. It calmed her down and allowed her to ponder her situation. Tammy felt so full. It proved to be a powerful, overwhelming feeling for her and yet she was starting to enjoy it. Tammy always enjoyed helium balloons when she was young but never had she ever pictured herself as one, though. She took a moment to close her eyes and embrace the moment, all the while; Ko got up from the bed and reached into one of the pockets of his coat.
Many minutes had passed. The rain had cleared away even though the clouds remained. The manager walked into the room to find his maid blown up like a giant balloon quiescent upon the ceiling. He took a moment to glance at the bed where he found Ko’s trademark envelope of gratitude and one of his pins for the manager to puncture Tammy with and restore her back to normal. Ko was no longer in the room. He was on the roof of the inn, his mask slightly tipped so that he could eat the stew he had been waiting so long to eat. His stomach thanked him. As he consumed his meal, he pondered where he would go next.
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There's one, but should I write more? Rate my story. Be honest. Be brutaly honest. then TELL ME HOW I SHOULD'VE MADE IT BETTER. I'd prefer that more.

In my opinion, inflations work better if you've sort of established some sort of background or personality for the person being inflated. Something to make this one individual memorable.

But you set a mood for the piece well.

That's a good idea. Thank you and if there's anything else you can suggest, tell me.

I liked it. Personally, I would have popped her, but thats just me... Great story!

Thank You. And sorry about the lack of popping. I'm trying to maintain a friendly, not-so-threatening story here.

Well, thats your thing man. Still a good story.

I enjoyed it. The only thing I would have done was include how she returns to normal. It seemed the pin does that rather than make her go splode and die or something like that.

Other than that I liked it very much.

Thank you.