Prologue:
Cindy was fast asleep, having a nightmare about the boring assignment in Mr. Kramer's class. A shadowy figure silently pulled himself through Cindy's open bedroom window. Only this person wasn't here to take anything, he was here to give something. The figure placed a thin, blue colored package in Cindy's purse, than quietly slipped away.

Main story:
"Alright class, pull out a pencil and turn to page 134" bellowed the teacher.
Cindy reached into her purse and began fishing for a pen. The 16 year old, blond, 5' 11" searched for what was like 5 minutes before coming across some oddly wrapped bubble gum. "Darn Sarah, always going through my purse" whispered Cindy to herself.

Sarah was always going through Cindy's purse. Cindy was always finding weird stuff in her purse. Sarah had left her sister some used lip balm, a hand comb, 3 pens, 23 cents, and some purple dryer lint, not that Cindy was counting or anything. Well, at least she left me something useful this time thought Cindy to her self. Cindy hated school. Just the thought of an assignment made her skin crawl.

Yes, something to keep my mind off my work she said to her self. She unwrapped the blue colored gum and stuck it in her mouth. Yum, she thought as the blueberry flavor hit her taste buds. She was spell bound; all she could do was chew.

"I hope I don't hear someone chewing gum in my classroom!" barked the teacher to no one in particular. "Can't spit this out now, gotta keep chewing," she said still in a daze. Cindy's best friend Amanda leaned towards her and said in a worried tone "Cindy! Your skin is turning blue!" "That's impossible," said Cindy as she started turning down "people don't turn bl...aaahh!"

"Mr. Kramer, I gotta go!" yelled the blue girl in a very worried tone.
"Yeah, go ahead..." his voice trailed off. Cindy ran out the door, and began heading to the girl’s bathroom. Wow, all of a sudden I feel really bloated Cindy thought to herself.
Cindy looked down to notice her belly bloating out

Cindy took off. She had to do something. Unluckily for Cindy, the bathroom was far away, and her belt was beginning to dig into her side. Cindy began fumbling with her belt, trying to take it off. Much to her surprise, however, her arms were inflating as well.

Cindy kept running, and running, and running. Her increasing size was just too much for her belt to handle, so it wasn't long before "Pop" and suddenly the pain stopped.
But Cindy just kept growing. And it was getting harder and harder to run. Cindy finally couldn't keep running. She had to stop and take a break.

Cindy might've stopped, but her growing wasn't. Her shirt and jeans just couldn't handle the pressure. RIIIIIIPPPPPPP! Talk about embarrassment. Now Cindy was stuck in the hallway, stripped down to her undergarments, blue and freakishly large. It was a miracle no one had seen her.

Cindy had finally caught her breath. She tried to push herself up, and barely managed to. Her arms were gone up to the elbows, and her breasts were the size of watermelons. Her belly looked like she was 5 months overdue with septuplets.
Needless to say, it was hard to catch her balance.

Cindy couldn't run at the size she was, so she began walking to the restroom.
It was getting hard to walk now. Her legs were gone up to her knees. As you can imagine, it wasn't long before Cindy tripped. Cindy was stuck on her back looking up at the ceiling.

Then the bell rang. Students began pouring out into the hallway. It wasn't long before a crowd had gathered near the human blueberry. She was stuck there, everyone’s eyes beading down on her for 10 minutes before the principle arrived. "Ms. Cindy, what’s going on here?" inquired Mr. Page.

All the while, a dark figure was seen putting what looked like pieces of gum in the purses left in the empty classrooms.

And so she told him the whole story. Mr. Page had called a janitor to help move Ms. Cindy. Cindy was the laughing stock of the school. The Blue never went away.
Cindy learned to love learning, and was later elected president of the "Differences among Us" club.


The end, or is it?

Overall, a greatod job, although I have a few criticisms. The first is that I found the ending came a little too quickly. What I mean is that I wanted to see the part of how Cindy learned to love learning expanded upon, and a few more details on the meaning of getting elected president of "Differences Amoung Us" club to Cindy. Finally, the part with the dark figure seems out of place and should be deleted out of the story unless you can put him in elsewhere in the story or expand on his success rate of turning girls in blueberries.

The dark figure is kind've a hook in case I wanted to revisit that setting.

Ah I see...if that's the case, then perhaps maybe make a quick mention of the guy early in the story, as it seems a little out of place to me as it is.

Not a bad story overall.

Though... "Differences Among Us" club?

Not sure what that is.. :blink:

It's supposed to be a sort've Diversity club. And I've added the shadowy figure.

Interesting story The2Cheat. I think that I like the mystery man, When does he come to my school? :D I think you're doin' good with all the stories mon, one question...Do you have any suggestions for my story? My story on Xamel and Curia's wedding.......[the title escapes me]. I'm open to some new ideas.