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Title: My first story (feed back pwease :))
Description: The Berry Bush


Bellyanima - December 8, 2005 09:42 AM (GMT)
hello everyone, this is my first story so yeah,please tell me what you think! ^_^ this is also on my Deviant art site.

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The Berry Bush

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There existed a mystical plant, a plant that was written as the human equivalent of a Venus flytrap, yet much more sinister. It appeared to be nothing more but a blueberry bush. The only way you could tell it apart from the true bush was that its leaves were dotted blue. This plant is incredibly odd, no one quite knows how it does this but, it turns its victims into blueberries. But what causes the victims to be lured in? The berries on the plant, perhaps its other victims, perhaps regular blueberries. This is a tale of one of the plants many victims.

On a fine summer day, in the cool forest, a woman was taking a nice, relaxing walk. She was a rather beautiful woman, she was slender but not too small, had decent sized breasts and long, silky blonde hair. She had just thought about turning around and returning home when she came across a blueberry bush. She was rather hungry and decided to have a berry or two until she returned home. She plucked one of the sweet smelling, succulent berries from the bush and placed it in her mouth. It was the best blueberry she had ever had! The flavor filled her entire mouth as the juice slid down her throat. She decided to take a few home with her when suddenly she noticed something rather odd. Her arms started to turn purple. Panicking, she brushed it off as light being reflected off of something. Yet the purple continued to darken until it became dark blue. She could suddenly feel her clothes starting to tighten around her waist, looking down she realized her belly was pushing its way out of her shirt! Astonished, she stared with her mouth wide open. Suddenly her belt snapped, revealing a belly the size of a nine-month pregnant woman’s. Her belly continued to surge forward, becoming bigger and rounder by the second. Worryingly, she began looking around franticly for someone when she realized her breasts were getting bigger too! Looking down at her belly, it looked like a giant beach ball. Her arms and legs started to puff up as well.
“What is going on?!” she screamed.

“Help! I need help! Somebody! Anybody! I think I’m turning into a…. Blueberry!”

No one was around to hear her screams. By now her belly looked as though she had twelve kids! Each breast was the size of a beach ball. Her belly kept growing and growing, until her entire mid section was completely round, her breasts starting to sink into it. She waved her arms franticly, as if to signal someone over. Still no one came. Her legs were now becoming cone shaped, restricting all movement.
“ Oh please, someone please help me!”

Her legs completely sank into her body, her arms quick to follow. She was almost completely round. “That blueberry! What was it? Oh god I am turning into a blueberry, someone please help me!” Her arms had completely disappeared, leaving only her hands. She waved them franticly. “Oh its no use, I’m doomed! No ones going to help me, but I’m afraid I’m going to pop!” She was completely round, the sun glistened off of her tight, blue skin. She wept a single tear. Suddenly she felt a tingling in her feet. She couldn’t look down , but she suddenly felt her feet sink into her body. “Ah!” She rolled onto her back, her feet were the only things keeping her up right. Her feet had disappeared into her body! “Oh no what’s happening now?!” She turned her head as best she could to see her hands slowly sink into her body. She tired to scream, but her voice had disappeared as well. Her hands had completely sank into her body. She sobbed at the thought that her head was next, she was becoming a real blueberry. Sure enough she was right, she felt her head slowly melt into her vast body. Eventually her body completely took up her head, as though it was water swallowing up a sinking object. The giant blueberry stood there, glistening in the sun, tears running down its sides. Slowly, the blueberry began to shrink, until it was the size of a normal blue berry. A branch from the bush crept out, and stuck into the berry and dragged it back to become another berry on the bush.
The bush lay still, waiting for its next victim to come around.

Nogard's Jester - December 9, 2005 01:54 AM (GMT)
It's the only BBS [Blue Berry Story] I've ever read where the eantire body becomes the berry, head and all, and then shrinks to such a small size.......It's somethin' else.

Bellyanima - December 9, 2005 03:41 AM (GMT)
yeah, an idea ive had for awhile, i think too much XP. now a series of pics where it happens, that i want to see :yes: thanks for the feed back, even tho you didn't say anything about liking it or it being any good but ok.

Dwarf - December 9, 2005 10:12 AM (GMT)
Hehe. Cool story.
Is it related to that art sequence posted at Bodyinflation.org ?

Bellyanima - December 10, 2005 10:20 AM (GMT)
i have seen that but ive had this idea before i saw them. sorry if it sounds like im lying but still. glad you like it ^_^

Dwarf - December 11, 2005 12:39 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Bellyanima @ Dec 10 2005, 08:20 AM)
i have seen that but ive had this idea before i saw them. sorry if it sounds like im lying but still. glad you like it ^_^

Coincidence, then? As they say, great minds think alike... XD

Bellyanima - December 11, 2005 02:55 AM (GMT)
yeah thats probably it XD




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