I was thinking of making a story for Xamel and Curia's wedding, however I want some opinions on what I should do specifically, and I'd also like to recruit some characters. Note: I will take advice, ideas, opinions and such here, I don;t want the story thread itself to be trashed..............

You can use Rio.

well...since im already in it you can use me and zhou

Oh yeah I forgot.....If your charactersare used and you want me to do something specific to them you will have to request it here before I start writing..er....typing...uh..... :angry: MAKING THE STORY.....kay?

you can use hero or piper just one thing tho piper is pregnet with twins.don't worry you story will do great :D

How about a scene where Curia uses Rio to help feed the wedding guests via having a concentrated sap-like substance multiply within Rio and is abstracted via some device on her belly button. Of course, controlling the growth can be a different story.... Just a thought, so long as you make Rio expand.

Count me in. Use Keos and Xzan however you wish.

Who's Xzan?

Another of his characters. Also, I've noticed how in the story Dark says Rio still can make up her mind on her boyfriend. A little pointer to keep in mind that both chars don't realize -- she's torn emotionally over the to, though she doesn't show it...

Oh and I like the story so far.

man this story is great,you use such great detail man.well if you'd need anyhelp with piper of hero just pm me.

Why thank you Silver and Odd, Silver Dragon I do actually have a question about piper. As you notice I never mentioned Piper's size, because I'm unaware of how far she is in her pregnancy, just give me an idea for her size and such, kay?

I hate to say I'm running out of ideas for my story, but from what I've got it;s not enough to cover a whole *INFLATION* story, so if possible, could I please get some possible ideas from some FIRers, not just the ones I'm using in the story? Please and Thank You.

Let's see, you have Rio attempting to pull a prank on Curia. You could also have Dark and/or Keos get involved in some way, another character (possibly Karen) who somehow messes up Rio's attempt, and/or inadvertantly mess up everyone's plans except that Xamel and Curia do get married.

I probably won't be able to add on to my story till later December or January of 2006. I'll be busy with holiday stuff and such, I'll still be around FIR, but I won't have enough time to type up story fragments like that.....Merry Whatever to all! And to all a good new year!

I'd like to apologize for not posting in my story a lot lately. I've been having a bit of writers' block. Open for suggestions.

Well, you can have Rio officially chose Dark as her boyfriend in your story ...

just do what i do relax and then a idea will come to you

In case you didn't realize, my suggestion was meant as a sub-plot thingy

Other ideas to include: Karen and Rio in a prank war, Dark and Keos trying to outdo the other for Rio's affection, Hero and Piper trying something different (like Karen's chaotic lifestyle), Curia or Xamel being unsure about the wedding but eventually overcomes his/her doubts, with Xamel and Curia on the belly of an inflated female of your choosing.

wow odd dude you won the jack bot of idea didn't you?

I just want to say I like the newest part of the story you wrote, Jester. It seems that you have come out of your writer's block. Keep up the good work!

thanks, I'm planning on doing more typing for it on Friday, it seems that somehow I just got a surge of inspiration once I put on my cursed medallion earlier today...weird, I guess attempting to pleasure him in many ways is finally starting to make him the good luck charm he was supposed to be. Also, I am planning on incoorperating a few of your suggested ideas into the story in the next chapter, or maybe just one, let's see what my Thursday thinking day does for me, I may not even be on on Thursday....Well thanks for the compliment and I
m glad you're reading and rating.

A few things to comment on the newest addition to your story.

1. Rio would stay away from alcholic beverages, even if she's stressed/upset, etc. But I somehow failed to mention this, so its not your fault.

2. I was expecting Rio to get more emotional when she announced her decision, and to be crying and apologizing to Keos for turning him down. Perhaps I failed to to elaborate on Rio's behwvior beforehand?

In any event, it was good. Of course, Keos could always come back for revengence or something else...

I'm sorry about Rio's behavior, it'll be more explanatory next chapter, as for the alchoholic drinking, I'll fix that code ASAP, thanks for the opinions.

I like the most recent part of the story, although I'm still confused why her belly expanded to 4 ft in diameter in the first place...

Rio's expansion is to keep the inflators' attention in the story till all the major 'fun' begins, and I'll explain it next chapter....

Are you experiencing more writer's block? Need an incentive to write more to the story?

Possibly, or maybe I had a good idea, got accidentally deleted, and I can't remember it now, or maybe I simply do have a basic case of writers' block, and if you look back into the story I made Rio's stomach a slightly more reasonable 2 feet in diameter until and explanation for the growth is given.

Well, once you finish this story, and only after you finish this story, you can do one on how Rio and Dark get married...