I started this way back when but never finished it or let any one read it. So I will post what I have here and let some one else take it.

All i ack is that you post what you think of what I already did and what you do to it. If you can't post it here send it to me.

Any way here is what I have.

Air Travel
A story by the Lordofthedarkabbis
If you are under 18 or are not into inflation then you should go get someone that is 18 and is interested in this kind of stuff, if you can?t find someone then go about your bisness as if this never happed.

Shelly was your average 24 year old. Fresh out of college and still unsure what she wanted to do with her life. She had broken all tithes with her parents when they had an argument about her becoming a doctor (something she had no desire for). She was on her own and was starting to get strapped for cash. She went through several jobs including three fast food joints, two secretary potions, and being one of those people that ware signs around their necks to advertise for different things. She felt she only got the jobs because of her slim waist figure, large breasts about the size of cantaloupes, and a perfect heart shaped ass.

She hated the jobs she had because she didn?t like to be judged just by her figure and the fact that a job was always the same and never changed. She now had a little money but it wouldn?t last if she didn?t find a permanent job soon. She was thumbing through the want ads when an article caught her eye. The article read, ? Do you hate your job? Do you need money? A lot of money? Do you want to travel the world? Is so then give us a call at 555-AIRTRAVEL. You will be given your job interview over the phone and if you are what we are looking for then we will send a car for you so you can start immediately. You will not need to bring anything with you except for the clothes you have on at the time. We will provide you with everything you need.?

She thought something was odd about this but she was desperate. She called the number and heard a high voiced operator respond ?Hello Air Travel the best way to see the world how may I help you?? ?Hello my name is Shelly and I would like to apply for a job with your company.? ?Are interested in seeing the world?? ?Yes.? ?Are you a good people person?? ?Yes.? ?Have you altered you self in any way such as plastic surgery of an kind?? ?No.? Shelly said thinking that that was a slightly odd question. ?Well that?s all we need to kwon. If you give us you address we will send a car to pick you up tomorrow.? Shelly gave the operator her address and thanked her for the job and hung up.

The next day she awoke to the sound of the doorbell ringing. She got out of bed slid her feet into her slippers and quickly threw on a pair of jeans and a baggy T-shirt. She opened the door and was surprised to see a man dressed in Limo drivers outfit. ?Hello Miss, I am here to take you to your new and exiting job for Air Travel.?

Shelly went back in side to fix her hair and then headed back the to door and was then escorted to the most breath taking limo she had ever seen.



(Give it to me strait, I can take it)

It was a good start. I noticed a few typoes and some gramattical errors. Other than that, it was a great story starter! Keep posting!

Thanks. I have another story in the works that involves a cotton inflation.

Any hoo, I know it has some bugs in it, but i have never claimed to be a grammer wiz.

If you like it go ahead and add an ending and a middle on it and it is yours.