this story about hero and piper getting married but i need some more charicter.here the thing piper and hero are older so that go the same for you so tell me what you be like?one last thing you have to pick are you with the bride or groom.

You can use Rio -- she can be a friend of Hero's.

thanks.know i only need a few more people

Go ahead and use Sheena if you want! ^_^

Feel free to throw Karen in....and maybe Curia...........but don't do so much as a friend-relationship between Curia and Hero....just acquaintanceship, because they don't really like each other, Karen and Hero are friends though...I think

yes.hey jester would it be okay to say that curia and piper are rivals for hero and when curia find out that hero and piper are to be wed she plan evil thing for piper?

Evil...rivalry? Maybe I didn't say this clearly....she doesn't, DOES NOT LIKE HIM.......
Curia's more of a self dependant person.....oh right. But I guess giving her great intellect a challenge wouldn't be a bad idea.......just make it so she prolonges [attempt to] the wedding to see if Hero really is all he's cracked up to be in solving any problem he's confronted with.......hopefully you know what I'm talking about because I don't.

....wait dont tell me i know this (some one puts a candle over my head) got it the idea will work fine. i'll start the story soon.

chapter 1:the big question

this is the story of two dragon one was a brave fire dragon named hero the other was a beautilful wind dragon named piper know these two knew each other for some time but not till know did the tell each other how they felt and this is how are story starts.<at a fansie resteront piper and hero are siting eating dinner> "piper"said hero blushing "yes hero"said piper calmly "well i i i a well i"started hero but piper put her finger on hero lips "i know i love you to."said piper as she kissed hero as she did a explosin wen't off in the room "there more"said hero getting down on one nee "piper will you marry me"asked hero blushing "oh hero"said piper crying "yes yes i'll marry you"said piper hunging hero "could life be any better"thought hero. well look like every thing going good for the dragon two but unknown to then is that evil going down?all answerd in chapter 2:the big problem.


so what you think?

its pretty good i wonder what adventures this newly engaged couple will embark on :ph43r:

chapter 2:the big problem

well in our last chapter hero asked piper to marry him and she said yes.the next day hero went to rio and piper went to sheena for some help and this is how this chapter starts.<at rio home>"well this is where rio is" said hero looking at a pice of paper but when he looked up he was shocked "rio live in a mansion!" thought hero as he knocked "come in"said a vocie.hero walk in to see rio in her t.v room reading."hey rio long time no see"said hero "good to see you too.well you've grown some bit hero"said rio laughing "ya and you look good for some one your age"said hero "are you calling me old hero?"asked rio with a glare "no no i came here for your help see i going to marry piper problem is i think i could look cleaner so could you help"asked hero "sure"said rio.(a couple of min later)hero scream "my hair it flat there not one spike!!!!! and my cloths there so nice and rich like"said hero "there know you look great"said rio."thank rio.you grandma"said hero quitely rio threw a vase at hero "i herd that"said rio.<at sheena home>"okay this is where sheena live nice place"said piper as she knocked "come on in" said a vocie.when piper walk in a ninja star came flying at her "what the?"said piper as she ducked "oh sorry i thought you were a theif"said sheena jumping out from the shadow "it no...what the your pregnet"said piper as she notice shenna belly "but i thought...but arn't you....never mind this is giving me a head pain"piper added. "whoa you look like a me when i was younger"said sheena "and you look good for a women your age"said piper "your boy friend said somthing rude to me too that one of the resone his hair dark gray"said sheena with a glare."sorry.i came here for some help becaues i don't think im going to marry hero and i need to look really cute like you becaues you have really big wait no that rude i mean your you know what are larg and im"said piper "flat"said sheena drinking tea "well i would't go that far" said piper."sure i'll help"said sheena(a couple of mins later)piper let out a scream "oh my word my brest there huge!!!!!"said piper "know you look hot"said sheena laughing."thanks you.old hage"wispered piper sheena threw a rock "i heard that" said sheena.well look like both our dragons have change for each other question is will it work?you'll find out in chapter 3: the big plan

so what do you think

Fire and Wind make steam when they are combined? I thought that was FIRE and WATER, not fire and wind...........Ah, never mind that's just my thoughts................ Wait is that whenever they kiss or just every now and again? Don't forget to bring in C&K!

thank you and i will soon

chapter 3:the big evil


well why'll hero and piper where getting ready for there big date,there a great evil being planed.(in karen basement) "okay boss we got the plan" said a girl in black robes."good good know that every thing set up i can finally make that jerk hero pay"said the leader of this group."hey curia what are you doing in my basement?"asked karen."im doing nothing but plan to ruin hero life"said curia "you know i can hear you right" said karen.well this dosn't look good for hero and piper and there so many question left unanswerd like what is there evil plan,why did curie plan in karen basement,and why is this chapter so short all these question answerd in the next chapter.


part 3 of my story so tell me what you think

<Curia and Karen share a well furnished, antique-filled, and frightful-object filled appartment, on the fourth floor of their appartment building. Also, may I ask why/how/when/where Curia joinedor started an minor organization?>

it in the futer

Is this gonna end up discontinued or are you still working on it Silver?

chapter 4:chang for better or the worse.

well in are last chapter we found out there a group of girl titck at hero and well that it really so back to the story.

piper was already at the resterunt when hero got there but when hero saw piper his jaw hit the ground and the resone why was becaues instead of wearing nice clothes she was wearing a short minni skirt and a pink tub top."close your mouth hero it rude"said a vocie."who said that"asked hero looking around."it me rio"said rio next to hero."okay should i ask why your here?"asked hero."i'm here to make sure you don't scew up."said rio."thank really"said hero.while hero was talking to rio piper saw him and was just as shocked as hero was but the resone she was shocked was that was the first time had ever dressed up."whoa hero dressed up for me and he still look good."said piper blushing."oh hey there piper what up"said a vocie and it was piper good friend karen "man you look different"she added."oh hey there karen, ya i did this for hero and i mean every thing even down to these fake boobs but know he all dressed up."said piper looking at her chest then she let out a big sigh.

hero walk up to piper and then there was a long quite before karen said "well hero your dressed up that must mean hell has frozen over,okay and know i'll leave yoy two alone.".hero sat down and look at piper then he finally spoke "so piper who should we bring to the wedding....okay this is getting old"said hero."what is hero?"asked piper."all this I mean come on this is not the real me."answerd hero fixing his hair and throwing of his tie "and this isn't the real you."he added."I know but i thought this would make you happy."said piper."the only thing that will make me happy is you being you."said hero as he leap up."I feel the same way and i don't care if you'r not high class becaues i feel in love with the normal hero."said piper as she leap up and at firt the just stood there then did they ever kiss and it lasted about 6 min."one last question are those real?"asked hero."well kinda see i got a sex bra from curia and speaking of that let go big boy"said piper as she pulled hero into the bathroom.

well look like hero has learn a leson 1:be your self and 2:sex bra mean sex bra.


<sex bra idea belong to vohn>

chapter 6:big news.

after 3 hour in the bathroom hero came out only problem was he had lose his shirt in the bathroom."whoa you went three hours"said a man next to the bathroom."thanks"said hero as he walk away."hero!!!!"yelled a vocie and that vocie was rio "what in the world where you thinking"she added right before she gave him a good slap."what was that about?"thought hero."hero you jerk"yelled karen."what did i do"asked hero."you did it"yelled karen giving hero a dirty look"and you also have no shirt on"she added before she slap hero."man love hurts"said hero rubbing his face.(a crazy month at piper home) piper found out somthing veary shocking the next morning "im....pregnet...."said piper shocked.hero knocked at the door he had brought all the thing for the wedding."piper you home"yelled hero."it hero but how can i tell him where not even marryed put im already pregnet."thought piper.

holly cow look like all good thing have ended.so will piper tell hero or not???

Um, why would she test for a pregnancy the day after? Wouldn't it be after a month, when she has missed a certain time of the month?

Interesting new additions to the story. Might I request you take more time to check over the spelling so it's easier to interpret, and also, I must ask Odd_Dude's question as well, why would she have a pregnancy test turn positive so early, isn't there like a missed period or something.

chapter 7:??? (i cant think of one)

well if you don't know what going on then I will tell ya.hero asked piper to mary him she said yes,a evil group is going to try to destroy the wedding,and piper is pregnet with hero kids.

"piper are you home" asked hero knocking at the door again."I'll be right there"said piper as she ran down the stair to opean the door "hero what are you doing here so earily." piper said opeaing the door as relax as possible."piper it 12:00 pm"answerd hero with a confuse look on his face "and im here to plan for the wedding" he added as he walk in but piper put her hand out to stop hero."not today hero okay."said piper as she slamed the door close."did I do somthing wrong" thought hero.<later that day still at piper houes>."okay who can I tell that i know won't tell hero"thought piper to her self "karen!" said piper as she ran to the phone and the call karen cell phone."hello"said karen. "hi karen I need you help" said piper."im working piper"said karen."karen you don't work your rich"said piper."oh ya, so what is it" asked karen."im pregnet" said piper."YOU'R WHAT"yelled karen threw the phone."karen you have to promis not to tell hero"said piper quickly. "well in 3 months he going to see it" said karen. "don't you mean 2 months."asked piper. "you forget this is hero,he not that bright."answerd karen. "true,but please don't tell him" said piper. "okay i won't"said karen as she hung up.

so what do you think.

chapter 8:"confused"...."yep"

well look like hero a bit confuse but thing are bond to turn up right....or maybe not who really knows well i guess will find out.

we start off with hero in his room laying on his bed next to a lion doll."do you think I did somthing wrong?"asked hero."knowing you i'd have to say yes"said a vocie.If your woundering who was talking it was me kai you know that lion doll,let me explan see i'm hero little brother kai and I use to be human but i got my soul knock out of that body and into this one and know back to the story."thank like always you give me no help at all kai."said hero throwing kai against the wall."i was kidding you jerk.hero why don't you just ask her."said kai standding up rubbing his head."yea that a good idea"said hero getting up and leaving.

at piper houes we see hero walking up piper stairs to the door."piper we need to talk and i mean right know."said hero opeaning the door to find rose and mary standing there."what are you doing here?"asked all three of them."well where for piper."said mary."what wrong with her?"asked hero.rose then pulled mary down and wispered "piper told us not to tell hero.".the girls got back up and both said "hero leave."."and if i don't?"asked hero.<1 min later> we see hero being throw out the windo."man was that close."said mary."yea."said rose closeing the windo."what was that nosie?"asked piper comming down the stair."oh it was nothing"said rose."so have you told hero the big news"asked mary."no.have you told chris."asked piper."same."answerd mary."what about you rose?"asked piper."i haven't told tom either."said rose.all three girls let out a big sigh.

know we see hero,chris,and tom at the park sitting down."hey guys."said tom."hey"answerd the other two."you'r futer wife's acting weird to?"asked chris."yep"answerd the other two."think this will end up with us doing something stupied?"asked hero."oh ya"answerd all three of the boy.


so what do you think

This latest chapter is building suspense making me want to beg you to continue writing......KEEP GOIN' MON! WE CAN'T KEEP THE CURIOSITY HELD BEHIND THE DAM ANY LONGER!

chapter 9:wrong.(part 1)

this chapter starts off with the guys (chris,tom,and hero)at the park thinking....well atleast chris is.

"so any one get a idea"asked chris looking at hero and tom."yea and it goes like this.we all go to each other girls friend houes and make them talk"said tom.the other look shocked when to said that."that is the best idea you ever said tom"said hero."but who get who girl friend?"asked chris."well i'll take mary"said tom."then i'll take rose"said hero."that leave piper to me"said chris as the three left.

at rose houes we find hero and rose in rose kitchin."no"said rose leaveing."why?"asked hero."because now leave."said rose leaving the houes.hero was about to leave when he saw so food that when you put a match it it make a flame."i shouldn't but i will"said hero lighting a match and throwing in.the pot threw out a big flame and hero like it alot so he put a litte beer in it then a little more and then finally a lot."here we go"said hero lighting a match and then throwing it in.this time a large flame came exploding out and it stayed like that so hero try'ed to put it out till he threw a cloth on it and made it stop."man that was close"said hero not knowing the the cloth had lit on fire and know was spreading.when hero look back he let out a big scream.<2 min later>we see hero in a burn kitchen yelling "why!!!!!!!!!!!"."hero what have you done"said rose.hero ran like the wind.

chapter 10:wrong (part 2)

well in are last chapter we learn that hero should never be left in the kitchen alone.

this chapter start off with tom in mary green house."mary please tell me"asked tom on his knee."no tom,know go away."said mary pointing to the door."i'm not going till you tell me what you know."said tom."hey is that rose in a bikki"said mary.tom went flying out the door."sucker"said mary with a laugh.it was quite at first but tom cam crashing threw the glass."i don't give up that easly."said tom.but soon all the glass brock and it cut all the plant."oh boy."said tom."....tom...your a dead man"yelled mary."run away"said tom running fast.

know we find our self at piper houes."chris go away"yelled piper closing the door and then walking up the stair."this leave me only one plan,a plan I call "plan b""said chris sneaking in a windo.chris sneak around the houes soon he got up to piper room and opean the door."piper I demand you talk"began chris till he saw piper naked."chris you pervert"yelled piper as she threw chris out the second floor windo."yea that did not go veary well."said chris walking away.

we know find are self back in the park where we see hero burned,tom brused,and chris with glass in him."are plan back fire"said the three.

"piper you'r boy friend burned my kitchen"said rose."well your's destroyed my green houes with all my herbs in it"said mary."and your is a pervert he look at me naked"said piper."well this mean we should tell them but in our way"said mary."got it"said the other two calling the boys.

how will the girls tell the boys and how will they take it?all question answerd in chapter 11:the truth

so what do you think?

chapter 11:the truth

well so far we learn alot about are charact but know will learn somthing even better and that is me the great kai!!!!<see every one leaving>okay i keep telling the old story.

this chapter starts with us in rose secret garden where we see tom walk around."rose are you in here?"asked tom looking around and then siting down in frount of a big rose.<i mean the flower>."man that werid i thought rose asked me to meat her hear."thought tom."tom"said a vocie from behind tom.tom look back to see the giant rose was opeaning and inside of it was rose naked."have mercey"said tom with his mouth wide opean."hey tom guess what."asked mary but tom was still in shock "nope,the good news is im pregnet"finish rose."....hold that thought would you"said tom slowly walking away.<a couple of min's later and a few swear later>."so tom are you happy?"asked rose."rose im a lot of thing right know but i am happy."said tom.

well that was weird.....know let check on chris and mary.

we know see chris walking around in his old high school."mary where are you?"asked chris walking into the dance hall.as soon as chris had gotten in the door slamed shut and the light turn all to one spot and there was mary in a pure white dress."oh my god...."said chris eye opean."can i have this dance"said mary."yes"said chris as he took mary hand.the two dance greatly and then mary dropped the bome."chris my sweat"said mary."yes my love?"asked chris."i'm pregnet."said mary.the music just stop and then chris fell clear over.

well this is all the time i have today till later good bye.

<the thing you set on fire with a match is called my retarded next door neighbor.............oh you mean the serving dish? :blink: It's called a 'Flambe'. And now I am confused, in suspense, and still feeling an need to continue reading. And when Rose and Tom are in the garden, when Rose asks Tom is he's happy and he's in shock, you misname Rose as Mary.>

( :o thank for telling me)

chapter 12:the truth,the pain,and the past.

well in are last chapter we saw chris and tom take the news well and when i say well i mean like morons and know will see how hero take it but if you ask me he going to be the same as the other two.

we know find are self in piper living room with hero siting down with a dumb look on his face."wounder why piper called me here?"thought hero.the light suddenly went off."what the heck"said hero.as soon as hero said that a light went on showing piper in her dancesing dress (it look like yuna from ff x-2).hero was so shocked a fire started."oh my god,have mercy!"said hero as piper began to dance.(moments later)we know see hero with piper on his lap."piper what did I do to get such a great wife to be."said hero with a smile."hero you'll love me no mater what right?"asked piper."ya.why are you asking that piper?"asked hero."becaues hero there somthing I need to tell you."answerd piper."what ever it is I will still love you piper."said hero."thank you hero.okay then I should tell you that Im going to have a baby."said piper with a smile.hero was shocked and was also happy."but how?okay I know how but how long?"asked hero."I found out a week ago"answerd piper getting up."okay I can haddle this"said hero."and hero there one more thing I need to tell you."said piper."please tell me it that your not pregnet with a nother guy."asked hero."no hero don't be and idiot."yelled piper."okay then what is it?"asked hero."your dad coming to the wedding."said piper.hero got up."no"said hero with his fist tighting up."but hero"started piper before hero yelled "no!"."i need to think i'll be back later"said hero walking out the door."hero why do you hate him so much?"asked piper.

we know find our self in hero room where we see piper walking in."kai are you in here?"asked piper."PIPER" yelled kai leaping at piper chest."down kai."said piper."what wrong piper you never just yell at me?"asked kai jumping on to hero bed."kai do you know why hero hate your dad so much?"asked piper."oh that why your here.well take a seat and i'll tell you."said kai patting the bed."see it like this when we where little my dad would come and go but that not buged hero,the thing that got to him was the way my mom acted."said kai."what does that mean?"asked piper."well when my dad was home my mom wouldn't even look at hero and the only reson she notice me was caues my dad thought i'd be just like him.when my dad left it was like my mom lost all her energy."finished kai."so that why hero hate him so much but shouldn't he forget that."said piper."it not that easy becaues are mom died with out saying "i love you hero" once and my dad never said it ether so hero hate him for doing that to him"said kai."so that why hero."thought piper as she began to leave."piper don't tell hero that i told you."said kai.

we find are self now untop of a old school where we can see hero laying down."man the nerve of that guy showing up know"thought hero."hey hero"said tom walking over to hero."hey tom what are you doing here?"asked hero."I came here to think about thing's and you?"asked tom."same."answerd hero."so your girl friend are pregnet to."said chris walking over to the othe side of hero layind down next to the others."it werid"said tom."what is?"asked hero."this is where we first met remember?"asked tom."oh ya."said chris as they all rembered that day.

<three year ago>we see two punk betting up a young chris."come on you freak use some if that water magic on me"said the taller of the two."you jerks"said chris charging the two but the just hit him back."okay let finsh this"said the fat goon."back off!"yelled a young hero."and what if we dont zero"said the tall one as he charg hero."this."said hero punch him in the face."why you little."said the fat one about to attack."hey smelly head up."said chris as he kick him into the wall knocking him out."nice"said hero walking up to chris."your not to bad your self."said chris."im hero."said hero with his hand out."nice to meet you hero im chris."said chris sacking hero hand."no you two are dead meat."said the tall goon as he pulled out a pair of brass nuckles."this is bad"said hero."die!"yelled the goon as he jumped above hero and chris.but right before he could hit them he got knock to wall with great force by a young tom."jerk,useing brass nuckles."said tom."dude"said hero shocked."he did that with one punch."said chris."oh hi"said tom waving high."man how did you do that?"asked chris."the truth is that im a earth dragon."said tom."your a dragon to?well im a water dragon"said chris."wait you dragon.so am i but im a fire dragon"said hero."wait i don't evern know your name yet"said tom."im hero."said hero."and im chris"said chris."it great to meet ya both im tom."said tom.And the rest is as the say is history.

so that the end of that chapter and man was that different.

so what do you think?

Interesting, just one question. I don't ever recall you using, describing, or mentioning Kai before, so who or what in the heck is Kai? Otherwise it is still nice, interesting, and still a bother to have to wait to continue reading this addictive story.............

kai mail

well we have gotten a lot of letter asking alot of question so we thought we answer them.question 1:why is hero hair gray.okay that stupid next.question 2:why is tom so short?well no one really cares so the next qustion is from a person called Nogard's Jester and he ask."what are you kai?".finaly a good question,well im hero little brother who soul was knock out of my body and so hero put in the best body around witch is this lion doll so that how i came to be.

chapter 13:im sorry,im sorry,and im sorry

"so hero why is the real reson you came up here?"asked chris."you know why."said hero."come on hero it would take alot more then your girl friend getting pregnet to make you come here.so tell us the real reson."said tom."it my dad...he coming to the wedding."said hero getting up."oh that why.you still hate him don't you hero."said chris."ya."said hero heading for the door."leaving so soon hero."said tom jumping up to his feet."yea becaues one i need to say sorry to piper and that where being watch"said hero walking threw the door."still as sharp as ever."said chris walking to the other door."ya he is"said tom going down the ladder.hero was right becaues three block over where three hooded men watching them."hero this is where your story ends"said the leader.

at piper houes we see hero walking threw the door."piper you home."said hero."hero!"said piper running up to hero giving him a hug."piper what going on?"asked hero."im sorry I din"t know"said piper."no piper im sorry i should have told you."said hero."hero why do you always ack so calm with me."yelled piper with tear in her eye."don't cry becaues then i cry"said hero holding piper close."how sweet.man am i gowing to anjoy breaking them apart."said the leader of men."piper he back."said hero."who is?"asked piper."it...kain"said hero closeing the door."kain but how i thought you killed him ten year ago."said piper."yea i did"said hero.

who is this myster group and is it truly led by kain all question answerd next time.

sorry it short but i was rush.

chapter 14:train starts

well in our last chapter we learn that the villan of the story has come and hero a bit worried.

still in piper living room."piper why don't you go up stairs and i'll be up in a sec."said hero."oh hero there somthing I forgot to tell you."said piper."what now?"asked hero."me and the rest of the girls think that we should give up sex till were marryed."said piper."that a good one you almost had me going there."said hero laughing."no I mean hero."said piper."noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!"yelled hero on his knee's."so i'll see you up stair hero."said piper going up the stair.hero got up but with a serios look on his face."piper im sorry but you won't see for two months"thought hero as he walk up the stairs.<the next morning in piper room>."good morning...hero"said piper looking around when she saw a note on the door.the note said
dear piper,
Im sorry piper but I need to go train so that I can protect are famliy.I'll probly be gone for two months tops.piper when im gone please don't cry or come look for me becaues this is somthing I need to do.piper i love ya and I can't wait to see ya in two months.
your truly hero
"that jerk!I know he do somthing like this after I told him no sex!"yelled piper.<in a ally with hero,chris,and tom>"so how do you think piper will take it?"asked chris."knowing piper i'd say pretty well."said hero "but the real question is who going to train us?"he added."well there is one guy I know."said tom as the three started walking."who that?"asked chris."his name is kakashi."said tom as the three walk into the sun light.

chapter:kakashi traning.

well this chapter will let us meet the mysterous kakashi.I wonder what he'll be like?maybe like those kunfu master in the old movie.well only time will tell so let go.

we see hero,chris,and tom out side a store called "dragon-go"."tom sure this is the right place?"asked chris."yea this is where I was told to go."answerd tom."well let check it out."said hero opeaning the door.The inside of the store look like well a store."hey where not opean yet!"yelled a boy with flame red hair who was standing next to a girl with black pig tail on the side of her head."where here to train under kakashi"said tom.a really strong man walk out and said "what going on here?".the three boy bowd to him."he not kakashi he lee"said the girl.then a black cat came in.the boy bowed to it."that just a cat!"yelled the boy."i'm kakashi"said a man wearing a striped hat,japness robes,and clogs."is this a joke?"asked hero."okay let me prove it be fight you three one on one."said kakashi."sure.I'll be first."said tom putting on some black gloovs."okay."said kakashi holding his kain.tom charged with punchs moving like the wind but kakashi just kept moving."why can't I hit him"thought tom."becaues your to slow"said kakashi behind tom."can you?"asked tom."yes I can read your mind"said kakashi knocking tom out with one hit.the other boy where shocked."so who next?"asked kakashi with a smile."i'll go."answerd chris pulling out a chain with a cross at the end."okay then let start."said kakashi charging."your fast so i'll just slow you down.frezze."said chris as ice came out of his hand."not bad."said kakashi as he stop the ice with his kain."this guy realy good."said chris throwing his chain at the kain."not bad to chain my wepon but that mean yor opean to magic like this shock."said kakashi as thunder shoot at chris and knocked him out."chris and tom.he beat them both with easie."said hero."and your next hero."said kakashi pointing at hero."I can't losse"said hero pulling out his sword."then let starts."said kakashi charging hero."alright."said hero charging.Hero blade clashed with kakashi kain."this the best you got?"asked kakashi pushing hero to the wall."you wish"answerd hero pushing him self off the wall.hero fought as well as he could but kakashi was always a step a head of him."hero if you fight like this how will you protect piper?"asked kakashi."shut up!"said hero."what you going to cry hero."said a vocie."dad?"said hero looking up to see kakashi had turn into hero father."come on you big baby fight back!"yelled hero father.hero charged him with fire in his eye swinging his bladewith rage."come on is this all you got kid."said hero dad blocking them all."I hate you"said hero swing his blade one more time.hero dad knocked the sword out of hero hand."you lose hero"said hero dad as hero pass out."master what should we do with them?"asked lee."put them in a bed becaues they can't train if thet passed out."said kakashi."your really going to train them."asked lee."yea these three have the power but not the controul."said kakashi.

piper houes."hero when you get back im going to kill you"thought piper eating a bucked of ice cream.

whoa that kakashi guy is strong I mean he beat all three of are hero with out trying know that power.

<so what do you think?>

chapter 16:all part.

we see are three hero's in bed after they got there butt kick."what happen?"asked hero getting up and rubbing his head."so your wolfgang son?"asked kakasih."ya but I wish I wasn't."answerd hero."is that so.you look alot like him you know that right."said kakashi."you knew my old man didn't you?"asked hero."yea me and him are old friend."answerd kakashi."that so.will you train me and my friend."asked hero."sure becaues I promis wolfgang I would."said kakashi leaving.

on a grass feild we see kakashi,hero,tom,chris,and lee."so you boy ready?"asked kakashi."yes"said all three boy."good.well start with testing you all one on one starting with tom."said kakashi."so what do I have to do?"asked tom."you'll fight sally."said kakashi pointing to the girl with pig tail."I cant fight a little girl."said tom."if you don't fight back you will die."said sally getting in fighting form."oh boy!"said tom."my money on the girl."said chris."your on"said hero.

piper houes.<it been a mounth.>"hero still isn't home what about the other boy?"asked piper on the phone."are you sure you want hero to see you so big?"asked mary with a laugh.it was ture piper was bigger then the other two but only as big that her cloth showed a little of her belly."shut mary!your proble be bigger then me at the end!"yelled piper."no you are wrong you'll be the biggest."said mary."your both wrong i'll be the biggest"said rose.<hour of fighting later.>"okay the deal is that the biggest pregnet belly win."said piper hanning up and running to the kitchen.

in a old church we see are three villans."so hero gone of to train."said the one with short spicky hair."it will do him no good tho."said the one with the long hair."zain and bain calm your self will strick when hero most weak."said the leader on the group."yes pain and well get back at him for killing dad."said zain.the three started to laugh a trully evil laugh.

whoa these battle coming up are going to be somthing so stay tune. :yes:

chapter 17:butt kicking.

well where about to see who going to win tom or sally.okay that go!

"fighter ready,set,and fight!"said kakashi.As soon as kakashi finished sally was gone."where she go?"asked tom."tom behind you!"yelled hero.sally was right be hind tom about to punch but tom duck and roll so sally hit a bolder."man that was close."said tom."man she fast!"said hero."not only that but she strong"said chris becaues the bolder was complete destroyed."this is bad."thought tom as he began to charge."he running at her."said kakashi.tom went right by sally."and he ran past her."said lee."come on tom."said hero.tom stop at threw a punch at sally but it was a tap but sally snaped and whiped to the wall but kakashi stop her from killing him."tom lose."said hero."yes!"said chris."no he passed."said kakashi."yes!"said hero."no."said chris."how tho?"asked tom."the point was to see if you could doughe the first blow.chris your up next."said kakashi as he snaped his finger that made a pit around chris feet."chris"said tom and hero.

what is kakashi thinking well will find out next chapter.

chapter 18:one problem after a nother

well in are last chapter we left off with chris falling down a bottem less pit.

"what are you doing?!"yelled hero."where going to see if he can get out of the bottem less pit."answerd kakashi."that crazy!!!"said tom."wait how do you know it bottom less?"asked hero."well.....shut up."answerd kakashi."chris you can do it!"yelled tom.

chris falling down a pit."okay how do I get out of this?"thought chris.chris fell a while before it finally hit him."that it!"said chris.chris put his arm like he was about to shoot an arrow.soon a bow apperd that was made of blue energy."spirit bow!"yelled chris fireing a spirit arrow with his chain tied to it.the arrow flew up and then hucked to a tree next to hero."what the?"asked sam. <the boy with flame red hair>."it chris!"said the two boys.Chris pulled him self up after an hour."man was that a jog."said chris."you pass."said kakashi."you think."said chris

chapter 19:hero nightmare.

"hero your the last to go."said Kakashi."don't tell me im going to have to sing."said Hero."no you must face your greatest nightmare."said Kakashi."my greatest nightmare is waiting at home."said Hero."trust me this is so much worse."said Kakashi putting his hand on hero head and then saying "NIGHTMARE".hero pass out."what in the heck de he do to me?"thought hero."hero!where are you?Hero!"yelled a vocie."piper is that you?"asked Hero."Hero I need you!"yelled piper vocie."piper!"said hero running for the vocie.Hero kept running till he saw piper."piper."said Hero running up to hug her but see disappered when hero touch her."you let her down."said a nother vocie."who there?"asked hero.A women with long brown hair that fell over her solder wearing a blue dress with a white appran over it walk out."it me hero."said the women."mom...mom is that you?"asked Hero."Hero."said Hero mom ponting her palm at hero."what are you doing?"asked Hero."you let every one down so you must die."said Hero mom fireing a blast of energy.hero douge it but his mom appered right infront of he and stabed him."hero mommy love you."said Hero mom."your not her becaues she never said those word to me"said hero pulling the knife out."hero..."said hero mom."shut up"said hero as he formed a energy blade."thank you."said hero mom smiling."good bye"said hero slashing his mom in two.hero walk around after that.

at piper houes."hero please come home soon or elese im going to kill ya"said piper.

chapter 20:the worst thing is my wife.
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after a nother month of trainning hero finally got home."man i'v been gone for two months.piper going to have my head."thought hero as he started to opean the door but he stoped half way."please tell me piper dosn't look like this."thought hero as he opean the door completely."piper im back."said hero."im in the kitchen."yelled piper."oh please dont let her be a fat cow and mad."thought hero.when hero walk into the kitchen he let out a small sigh of joy becaues piper only look like this."hero im so happy your back."said piper running up to hero giving him a huge hug."man I thought she kill me for sure."thought hero.hero look down to see piper was know crying."what wroung piper?"asked hero."im so fat."answerd piper walking back to the kitchen."no not at all."said hero.hero heard piper cry stop."Im fat and it all your fault!"yelled piper with great anger."oh boy"said hero.piper picked up a plate and threw it at hero but hero jumped out of the way."where do you think your going?"asked piper with a evil tone."any where but here."said hero running for his room.

hero douged knife,forks,and plates before getting to his room."man she hot pregnet but more dangers."said hero."you said it"said a vocie."i know that vocie any where."said hero turning around.there he saw the great kai!"kai what are you doning in my houes?"asked hero."well piper need a cook and well i thought."answerd kai."kai you wanted to sleep with piper dint you."said hero."maybe."said kai.hero then kicked kai out the window."and stay out!" yelled hero right before the door brock down."hero."said piper."oh man is this not going to end well."said hero right befor piper pulled him by the coller.

well this is the end of this chapter becaues one:what about to happen is not something you want to see.two:a big dog is chasing me! HELP!DONT JUST READ HELP ME!

Chapter 21:race

Well after Hero barly got out of Piper rage they went to the docter to see if the baby was a boy or girl."Piper why am i here again?"asked hero."becaues you are a great husband and if you din't I'd make listen to me conplain."answerd Piper."your cruel"said Hero."Piper your up."said a nures."okay let go Hero"said Piper trying to get up."still not use to the new weight."said Hero picking Piper up and caring her to the room."the docter will be in soon"said the nurse."thanks"said Piper.the opean door soon after and a female docter with short green hair."hi im docter Ino."said Ino.Hero din't trust Ino for some reson."hey doc can I talk to you outside?"asked hero."sure."said Ino leavin the room.When hero walk out he saw a hospital knife was coming at him.

Hero caught the knife with no problem."so I was right your not a real docter."said hero throwing down the knife."well sort of but to find out you'll have to come out side and fight."said Ino."okay then let go!"said Hero."okay but can you get out of here with out dieing!"said ino throwing knifes at hero."what the!"said hero running away from the knifes.Hero duck and rolled but the knifes followed.but when hero got infront of the stairs then he worried."what do i do"thought Hero.Hero look around to find a metal plate."this is going to be fun"thought hero picking up the plate.Hero then jump into the air put the plate under his feet and grinded down the rail.

when hero got outside he saw the Ino was already there."you lost the race Hero and if you lose the fight then Piper lose every thing."sid Ino

who is ino?,why is she attacking hero?,and is piper baby a boy or a girl?

all question answerd next time.