Title: Cloud X Aerith...ideas For A Comic I'm Making? Xd
Description: I'm making a new doujinshi!
Sakura-chan - March 18, 2005 12:03 AM (GMT)
Well, I've decided my next big project will be a Cloud X Aerith doujinshi!! :cleris: I already did a page, but I was wondering since you guys have such great ideas....I've read so much here...O_O I may include some in it!! Now, as for background...like if it is going to be humerous or what not..it's not :whistle: ..maybe in some parts...but for the most part it is going to be serious as I imagine it na. Soooo, yes, and it takes place after Meteor hit.
I would like to hear anything you have to say!! And yes, when I'm done, I'll post it in the fanart, doujinshi area and I will make it in english. ^^ :D
Anastar - March 18, 2005 12:37 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Sakura-chan @ Mar 18 2005, 12:03 AM) |
| but for the most part it is going to be serious as I imagine it na. Soooo, yes, and it takes place after Meteor hit. |
When you say that it takes place after Meteor hit, do you mean it takes place right after FFVII? I'm asking coz Meteor didn't actually hit.
It might be neat to start it right after the ending of FFVII on board the Highwind. Did Meteor explode? Was the Highwind hit by the impact of the explosion? Did they have to crash land someplace? How long did it take the Lifestream to recede? Were they caught in the wake of it? Where did they end up?
Once they landed, Barret would want to find Marlene, so they'd go to Kalm for her. Elmyra would be there, too, so it'd be neat to show a scene of Cloud talking with Elmyra about Aerith. I've always thought the idea of taking care of the orphans would happen with Elmyra. There were many children seen in the windows of Kalm as the Lifestream approached Meteor, and Elmyra seems a likely person to want to take care of the orphans now that her husband and Aerith are both gone.
Maybe I'll have more ideas later. :rolleyes:
Sakura-chan - March 18, 2005 01:18 AM (GMT)
Ooooh yes! I should of been more specific...gomen Anastar-san. Yes, the end of the game where it is being placed. I SO WILL do that Cloud explaining to Elmyra thing! I already have the dialogue in my head....basically yes! And that orphan thing does sound interesting. I was thinking of setting it up also!
As for anything else, I don't know...I would like to see Cloud meet up with Aerith somehow but not exactly so easy..like
Cloud:...i wish i could see her...
Aerith: *pops outta no where* HI CLOUD. :D
No no no..xDD You know what I'm saying? You've given me inspiration so far Anastar! I'd like to hear anything else you have!! :huggle:
Anastar - March 18, 2005 01:44 AM (GMT)
Perhaps Cloud would want to go back to the Northern Crater to get Jenova's head? It's been hinted at in the AC previews that Cloud has it, and that he's hidden it somewhere. If he went back to the Northern Crater to get Jenova's head, he could end up in the same place where the hand reach scene occurred in FFVII. Something could cause the crater walls to crack or something, so that Cloud falls into the Lifestream. Just as he's lapsing into unconsiousness, Aerith's spirit appears and reaches out to him again... but this time, he's able to take her hand.
Something like that? :rolleyes:
Sakura-chan - March 18, 2005 01:51 AM (GMT)
:o!! That....is...soo......interesting. xDD I'll see what I can do!!! xDDD Jenova's head...hmm.....how would I draw that....xD; *thinks* Arigatou! You've given me so much ideas!
SweetJanie - March 19, 2005 12:14 PM (GMT)
Will you draw Aeris? Like, when he's thinking about her? Everytime he thought about her it'd be cool if her ghost appeared behind him, but he didn't notice or couldn't see. A bit like CCS.
Sakura-chan - March 20, 2005 09:35 PM (GMT)
Oh yeah! I'll draw her a lot being that it's a Cloud X Aerith doujinshi. ^^
Aurora - April 7, 2005 01:28 AM (GMT)
Will you post the comic online when you're done? I would really like to see it!
Hey, it's your comic, so....why not get Tifa out of the picture. Just an idea. ^^ *cough she gets hit by meteor cough cough*
Materia Thief - April 7, 2005 01:37 AM (GMT)
The comic and all the ideas for it sound great! I can't wait to see it.
And Aurora, I don't think I've seen you post anywhere else before, so welcome to the C x A forums and have lots of fun! ^_^
Kusari Yarou - April 7, 2005 01:46 PM (GMT)
I just remembered that scene from Ruruoni Kenshin: Remembrance. After Tomoe dies, there's a scene with Kenshin shivering in the rain and shutting his eyes, while pulling her scarf around him. He falls asleep. Then without Kebshin realizing it, her ghost appears and puts her arms around him from behind, as if trying to keep him warm.
Well, if you're gonna put Aerith's ghost in your doujinshi, something like this might work. It resembles what SJ suggested :cleris:
Clerith-son - April 8, 2005 03:39 AM (GMT)
Honestly, I think that you should keep the story as it has been done. I think that you should start from the end of FFVII (but only as a flashback), and explain some stuff that you think that might have happened after the end of FFVII. Then put the story where FFVII:AC is being developed (2 years after the end of the game). I think that in your story you should give your own explanations of why Cloud is living a solitary life (explanations that should be very objective). Also I think that if you plan to revive Aerith, you should have a very, but a very good plot for it, if you plan a plot in wich she just pops up from nowhere, I recomend you not to revive her, and have Cloud dead at the end of your story if you want to have them toghether. Also try not to make a very happy or very sad story, always keep the story in a neutral mood, except when you think that some part of the plot needs some special mood (it's your call, in those parts). Well those are some points that I think that might be useful for you.
Tifa Lockheart - April 8, 2005 05:40 AM (GMT)
Something in the likes of a romantic-comedy doujin so that it wouldn't be so boring. Too much romance and seriousness can bore the audience.
Sakura-chan - April 10, 2005 04:54 PM (GMT)
Ahhhh! I've been a way so I haven't replied to you all! Gomen nasai~
Anyway, to
Aurora: Yes! I will post it online being it a web comic. ^^ I usually do anyway, then I'll let you all know it's done in the fanart section.
Materia Thief: Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint you! XD
Kusari: I know...Kenshin is so sad...I love that anime. D: Hmm...I may get some ideas for it...thanks!
Clerith-son: Oooh o.o Thanks for that! I'll try to keep that in mind...it's not a flashback that I know. Since I already have a couple pages done.
Tifa Lockheart: I'll try to squeeze in some comedy! What's a doujin without it? :3
Thankyou very much! If anyone else has any input, I'd love to hear it! Get's inspiring you know?
Aerith's_Man - April 11, 2005 02:08 PM (GMT)
ooo I know a good idea. Have tifa sacrifice herself for some weird reason that cloud made up because he does not like her :P
Okay sorry. I think it would be cool to put like a relationship with Barret and Tifa so it could be like a side thing while the main focuse is could and Aeith (Aeris)
eyes of a fighter - April 12, 2005 02:30 AM (GMT)
The Love story is great in all but you need to put a little action in there. mabey it's just a guy thing but cloud has to use his sword. and like Tifa is right there should be some funnie parts
A story of all kinds :D
Enima - April 12, 2005 07:14 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
The Love story is great in all but you need to put a little action in there. mabey it's just a guy thing but cloud has to use his sword. and like Tifa is right there should be some funnie parts
A story of all kinds biggrin.gif |
I agree with eyes of a fighter, and maybe add some comedy to it too as usually everyone enjoys a good laugh :D. Action and comedy along with romance makes a good mix if you ask me :P .
:cleris:
lenne - April 15, 2005 06:45 PM (GMT)
hmmm.......... :cleris: yup action/humor/romance are always a good mix :)
Anastar - April 23, 2005 06:27 PM (GMT)
Hey, Sakura-chan... we've added a Doujinshi section to our Third Contest. If you'd like to enter your doujinshi in it, that'd be great! :D The Contest is supposed to be about AC or the Compilation of FFVII, but since your doujinshi deals with events after FFVII, I think it still qualifies. :rolleyes:
Sakura-chan - April 27, 2005 08:03 PM (GMT)
Aww thanks so much for all of your input! I'm really happy! XD T___T Again..sorry for late replys...XD; It's hard keeping up with everything...
To:
Xavier: LOL! Poor Tifa! XD Hmmm, honestly, I'm not too fond of Tifa X Barret..<_<; I just----can't see it. o_o; XD Barret with anyone looks weird to me!! XD
Eyes of a Fighter: Of course! Without action, people would fall asleep. O_o;
Enima: I love to laugh and people tell me I'm funny so most likely comedy will be in there somewhere... :woot:
Flowerangel050: I agree 100% on that one. :lol:
Anastar: Oooh really?? O_O I'll be sure to check it out! Inking is such a long process...XD I'll try and see if I can enter! If you say I qualify, I'll take your word for it! :huggle: