I started this earlier today, so I really haven't gotten far on it, but I do want some opinions on it. I know that I can do A LOT better than this, so if anyone wants to put their advise in, feel free to do so.
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To wh-- it m-y co---rn,
If you are -eadi-g this, then I have died. This chi-d is the o-- person that can p--ve that I even ex---ed besides -y fri-nd C--ud S-rif-. But as I write this with bl--d stained ha-ds, I have to ---it, this child --s everyth--g to m-. Please take good care of her; I kno- that so--one else -an do a be---r job at it.
I took c-re of this child for ei--t years, and I -ever had the ----rt to tell her that I wa--’t even her real ----er. I knew him, and I’m gl-d that I got her away from him. He was a ho--ible man! But what I found strange about him is, h- was always a good father t- her; but I didn’t k--w how long that wo-ld last. So please, take good care of her, and pr----t her with your life. Never let Sep----- get his hands on her. I know w--t he wants her for.
I gue-- this is what I get. I wanted fr--dom, well maybe, just maybe, I can get freedo- along with redempt--- in the afterlife.
Than- Y--,
Z--k F-ir
“It’s no use; the rest is too illegible to read.” The fist-fighter of the group AVALANCHE explained as she held up a blood stained paper. “Where did you say you found her again Vincent?” Tifa then asked rubbing her head to try and get insight from something that couldn’t be seen.
“In the plains right our side.” The man donned in red simply replied as he stayed at his place against the wall on the other side of the room.
“Do you think Shelke can get more information on her?” Tifa then asked as she folded the worn paper carefully and put it in her front pocket.
The child in question was now upstairs sleeping on Marlene’s bed since she was out staying with a friend. Tifa remembered that Vincent had carried her to 7th Heaven on his back, and she only came with the clothes on her back and a small bear that was tattered beyond repair. She looked so frail compared to Vincent who had been tested on in a lab. But the child had a sense of warmness to her that Tifa couldn’t place. She looked so familiar to her, but where had she seen this child at before?
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If anyone is intrested in being a beta reader, please PM me. I really need your help for this one guys. I plan on going all the way with this one! It's mainly about the child that is brought up numerous times, but it has a hint of Clerith fluff. And yes, the child isn't normal :lol: Anyways, please reply with advise and opinoins.
Interesting way to start a story; it seems like a very unique idea. I am eager to see how this plays out.
Thanks. I'm still working on it as you've read. Do you think anything needs to be added or changed?