This is my first fic. I hope you´ll enjoy it. Tell me what you think...


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_ Hey Tifa.
_ Cloud! You came!
_ Of course I did. I couldn’t leave you alone.
He scratched his blond hair and laughed embarrassed.
“Wow, he really loves me!”
Tifa wakes up and shakes her head.
“Another dream. I have to face it. He will never return. He left after the final battle with the SHM; it’s been two years now. I miss him so much…But he loves Aerith, and I must face it. That’s the truth.”
Tifa was all alone in the 7th Heaven so she went for a walk. When she returned she noticed someone was inside her little Heaven.
“Barret”, she thought, but it was not Barret, it was Cloud! He saw her and smiled, a forced smile.
“He came! Probably he realized he loves me!”
She ran towards the 7th Heaven, hoping to hug Cloud. She tried, but he stepped aside. She saw the look on his face. His eyes were empty, screaming for Aerith, his light, his life…
_ What’s the matter?
_ Nothing, just don’t like to be hugged.
_ Oh, ok then…want to drink something?
_ A glass of water, please.
_ Sure.
She gave him the glass and started to talk to him. He couldn’t stop talking about her, about Aerith. He didn’t noticed Tifa was crying, getting desperate. She loved him so much! So she got up, picked his sword and trespassed his heart.
_ Go, go to her. I love you! I want to make you happy, and you can only be happy with her.
She took the sword out of his body and laid on the floor hugging Cloud’s body. Everything was covered with blood and the water from her tears. Then Barret and Vincent came.
_ WTF…what happened in here?! Vincent are you seeing this?
_ Now he’s happy, now he’s with her…I made it for him.
She was balancing back and forward, grabbing him tight against her chest.
_ You did this? Barret help me get her out of here.
They went to the street and she told them what she had just done. Barret went nuts and tried to kill her. Vincent stopped him.
_ Don’t Barret. Go call the others. I’ll stay with her.
_ I’ll go…and then we’re gonna kill that whore!
_ Go, then we’ll decide what to do.
Barret went running. Tifa was not herself, mumbling Cloud’s name.
_ You really loved him, didn’t you?
He grabbed her head gently making her look into his eyes. She became herself again and cried, nodding with her head.
_ I thought so. You loved him like I love you…
She stopped crying and said she would just die if someone were waiting for her. Tifa pretended she didn’t heard him.
_ Listen to me Tifa. I love you and I don’t want you to die. I want to be with you.
_ You mean it?
_ Of course I mean it! I love you! But we can’t stay here after what you have done. Come, lets get away.
_ You know I don’t love you…
_ You can learn if you want…will you come?
He stretched his hand and she took it.
_ Yes, I will. I know I’m gonna learn…and we’ll be happy together.
They ran away and Tifa did learn how to love Vincent. In the Promised Land Aerith and Cloud were forever thankful to her for what she did. She was considered a murderer by all, except by Vincent, Cloud and Aerith who considered her a freedom-giver. Thanks to her, they were now all happy. Forever happy.

Very nice! Although the format could have been better, the story is short and sweet!

Quite rushed and the format is confusing. You could have used the script form or you could've used quotation marks to indicate dialogue.
But overall, the concept of the story is nice, although more descriptions and elaborations could've been more significant in this. :)
But still I'm giving this 4 out of 5 stars.

Thanks ^_^ I promise next time I´ll try to do better!!!

She wrote in Portuguese format, that's why it might look a bit odd :)

Well, I don't know if Tifa could ever do that, but I love the idea. You have great imagination!! I like the TifaXVincent pairing...which is kinda new :blink: