Title: Dear Cloud....
Description: My 1st Fanfic
illwaitforever1 - May 22, 2007 01:56 PM (GMT)
Ok this is my 1st fanfic, so yeah, tell me your thoughts
It happens 4 years after FFVII
Aerith's letter to Cloud.....
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Dear Cloud,
Do you remember, four years ago? The reactor had just blew up.
I offered you a flower for one gil, not my normal price. You took the flower.
It was the start of a adventure.
A few days later, you fell through the roof of my church. I asked you to be my bodyguard, you accepted.
You took me out of Midgar, you showed me the sky, and the sunset, and many things I had never experinced before.
I didn't want you there when it happened. I knew it was going to happen ever since our date. I'll never forget that you know.
I was there, at the last battle. You felt my presence Cloud, I know you did.
You know I still live on, in your heart, and that we will meet again in the Promised Land.
What I want to say is, thank you Cloud. If you had never fell in my church that fateful day, I would have never seen the World. You let me live, before I died.
By your side forever,
Aerith Gainsborough Strife
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I put Gainsborough Strife because even though their apart in this life, when they meet again in the Lifestream, they'll be together.
Clorith88 - May 22, 2007 02:08 PM (GMT)
very nice :D
i wonder if cloud gets 2 read this letter
:cleris:
illwaitforever1 - May 22, 2007 02:11 PM (GMT)
:fangirl: Why thank yous, first fanfic as well :cleris:
aerislives - May 22, 2007 02:26 PM (GMT)
(You let me live, before I died ) I love that line :cleris: :huggle: keep up the good work it's a real good story :D :cloud:
illwaitforever1 - May 22, 2007 02:29 PM (GMT)
:huggle: Thank you thank you, positive feedback :huggle: :cleris:
Alantie - May 23, 2007 06:54 PM (GMT)
Ohh, so sweet!! This is a very good first fanfic!! Full of wonderful emotion and lots of love. I hope Cloud gets this letter. . . :D
illwaitforever1 - May 23, 2007 07:03 PM (GMT)
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| Ohh, so sweet!! This is a very good first fanfic!! Full of wonderful emotion and lots of love. I hope Cloud gets this letter. . |
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| i wonder if cloud gets 2 read this letter |
Oh Cloudy, letter for you addressed from a Miss Aerith Gainsborough Strife.
Thank you Alantie, your words fill me with hope for my next fanfic :huggle:
xx-Forever-Aerith-xx - June 3, 2007 06:32 PM (GMT)
Aaaw that was really beautiful :D
Well done keep writing :D
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illwaitforever1 - June 3, 2007 10:07 PM (GMT)
Thank you!!
I need to wait 3 days for my Fanfiction.net account to work *glares at it*
NekoDono - June 23, 2007 09:21 PM (GMT)
Very pretty. It's good although when I saw the topic title I was expecting a "Dear John" sort of thing. XD