I'm not a poet, and I would never pretend. But this Cleris poem popped into my head today during class. So, what the hell! I'll post it. :lol:

Memory
Lifestream shines and falls and flows
Your smile comforts, and my breathing slows
Surrounds, envelops: everything glows
I love you and the blade rings

The greatest crime I have commit
I stood so close yet couldn’t stop it
Listless eyes, once green, are now unlit
I lose you and my eyes sting

Since that day of my great blunder
When your silver life was torn asunder
Can I ever find you, hold you, I still wonder
I miss you and my love clings

LOL, I'll admit Saddie, poem's will pop into my head during class too. Its starting to turn into a habit..must... pay... attention in....class...

But, its adorable Saddie. You did the death scene part into beautiful poem form. :wub: And, you put Cloud's feelings into a cute cleris perspective. :cleris: