I have finally decided to actually go through with a fanfiction! It's a *very short chapters story which makes for easier reading xD*, with a prologue first. xD

Me and my stoopid 13-year-old self think I can actually compare to the writing of mature 18-year-olds. D:


http://www.fanfiction.net/u/873899/

It's up there! Currently complete! :D

Oh Lutearina, you shouldn't be so harsh on yourself, I think it is great that you write and show you work and I thought they were very cute. I think you have talent, just keep writing and you will continue to grow and improve. I am a very new writer myself, even though I am a lot older than you :blush: so I won't begin to pretend I know much about writing, but I love reading fanfiction so I don't mind commenting on whether I like a story or not :P
I really liked your Memories story, especially the ending, I thought it was precious. I look forward to watching your progression as a writer. Good Luck!

Awww, thanks so much! I'm glad you think so, I do believe I have started reading your story, but I need to finish it. xD Whatever, I'm printing it RIGHT NOW. D:

I'm glad you thought the ending was cute! I had to have it cute, because I was drowning in angst. So I was like, "Screw it! CUTE ENDING! MWAHAHA!"

I'm spontaneous like that. :D




Of course, Sadhana is my favorite writer. *bows to her sensei xD*

*bows back* You're too sweet. :lol:

First, I must mention that you should never be ashamed of sharing your writing!

Never be hard on yourself like that. Every writer starts at some point or another. Besides, age has nothing to do with talent. Talent is inborn. And no one would here looks through the fanfictions to judge and make comparisons to other people. That's just not the style here. ;)

Okay, now, onto your actual writing. :P Memories. Even though it's just a prolouge, I really like it. It's hard to comment beyond that since, well, it's pretty short as of yet (definitely not a bad thing). I'm assuming that because it's a prolouge, there will be more chapters? I tell people this all the time, but most just forget their fanfics after the first chapter: PLEASE CONTINUE. Don't forget to update us! It's so sad when people abandon a story after a chapter because I would never only read one chapter of a book I was enjoying. So please do continue.

The Beginnings One-Shot is very nice. I like Clerith fics that go back to when they first met, kind of like a reminder to us hopeless Clerith lovers to the fate that brought this perfect couple together. And your poem was simply adorable. Yay for Fack and Clerith! :dance:

I really like your writing. And like Sadhana has stated, dont be ashamed in sharing your writing! As time progresses, so will your writing!! not to say that it aint good, because it is!! keep it up.

I liked how your fic Memories ended! UBER CLERIS!!! lol :cleris:

It is only the begginning!!! lol, loved that line in the fic!

Sadhana: Awww, you think I'M sweet? Of all the people to consider sweet, I'm hardly worthy. :huggle: Thanks a bunch! xD And I would NEVAR abandon a fanfic! :o I actually finished Memories a while agooo, so it's ready for ya. xD

Afrononomous: Thank you sooo much! I just got inspired cause I saw something sorta like that somewhere...xD

Awwwww, Lutie, your fanfic was so loveable! You did a very good job for your first. Alot better than anything I've wrote.... :sweat: But, sweet job hun! :huggle:

*looks into her crystal ball* I see...I seeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... A GREAT COMPLIMENT IN YER FUTURE! Great job! Like the others have said don't be so hard on yerself. I was earlier on, and that made it hard to write. Things like this come naturally, so just let it flow, yo... lol Good job for yer first try. Keep it up!

Awww...More hugs n love for you ALL! Y'all never cease to amaze me. :lol:

Sorreh I haven't updated my other story, I kinda lost it, so I gotta find it...

And my Windows Movie Maker ain't working, so I hafta wait for that to be fixed...D:

*was in the middle of an AMV, HER BEST AMV*