" On that fateful day,
The one I call my death,
My love held me with regret,
Never to forget.
Even though my spirt wept,
My heart simply laughed.
To know that he was there,
To know that he came,
And witnessed my final end.
To show that it was up to him,
To start or end his story.
He didn't want me to leave,
He wanted my guidance.
To hope that he could find himself,
Or dwell within his tormenting strife.
But I have already revealed the answer,
It rests within his hands,
He must find it in himself,
And set his heart free of all his misery."


"I Pray"

"I pray you will find hope,
I pray you won't give up,
I pray for you to fight,
I pray for all your might.
I pray that you will see,
That you are always with me,
I prayed for just one chance,
I prayed for one last time."

Ok, i wrote both these poems. I do hope their alright. Their not nearly as good as most of the other people's poems here, but what the heck. :lol:

Please leave love for goddess! :huggle:

Yay for poetry from goddess. I like how you come from Aeris' point of view and I thought you did a good job with capturing it. Does the first one not have a title?

The only thing for me is the second one seemed to end ubruptly. But that is just from my point of view, I would never pretend to know the first thing about poetry, I only know when I like it :lol:

Thank you for sharing those, I enjoyed them very much :huggle:

The first one doesn't have a title. LOL, i didn't think of one.... :sweat:

Yeah, i kinda was a bit lost at words on the second one... :sweat: I wasn't quite sure how to end it... sorry. I'll do better next time. :)

Thanks so much for commenting! :huggle:

Awww! I think they are so sweet!
The first one is my favorite :fangirl:

That is so beautiful and Clerith!! :cleris:

I think you are just as good as everyone else! so I won't let you say that you are not anymore :D
:huggle:

Awwwww, your too kind! :blush: :huggle: Thanks so much for viewing! :huggle: I really appreciate it!

:blush: I rubbed my cheeks (a T_S sign of being personally touched in heart XD) when I read both of your beautiful poems, Goddess. :sad: Amazing job; your writing talent flows and is so powerful to the reader, I hope you know. I enjoyed them. <3 (And very Clerissy, YAY!!) ^_^ I hope you write more, whenever you're inspired. (; Also, thank you for sharing such lovely works of art. <3

I think they're beautiful, Goddess! I like the second one! Very pretty. The last line kind of gave me chills O_O Now, I have no poetry writing skills whatsoever, but far as I can see, these are pretty good! Keep it up!

Oh goddess I forgot to comment but these lines: Are amazing, it is may favorite part!
My love held me with regret,
Never to forget.

I look forward to seeing more of your work! :fangirl:

OMG, thanks soooo much T_S and I_G!! :huggle: You guys are just sooo wonderful!! :huggle: But, i'll try and get more poems up in the future. I just need a good inspiration. :) LOl, and to work I go! :lol:

Wow, those were really good! It sounds like youve been doing it for years, it does.

Thanks so much! But, please i'm not even a beginner. :sweat: I do hope I'll get better thought. Rhyming meaningful, expressive words is hard....especially when you want a emotional poem... :unsure:

They're both very nice. ^_^ I like the second one the most because it's not trying to say to much, and I think poetry tries to hard to be profound sometimes. That one was touching yet simple.

If I could offer any advice, it would be to focus in more with the first one. It just seems a little scattered.

Anyway, I hope to see more of your poetry, goddess. :wub:

Awww, tinkies of commenting loves! :huggle: I appreciate it very much! :huggle: :wub:I'll try to do better next time! ^_^