Hey I just finished my newist piece of works they are set around the idea of Cloud and Aeris being Lovers I lke a few coments about my Art works Please with.
Out further ado here are the drawings.

Ok... I hope you were asking for constructice criticism....
Aerith is too small. her body should be bigger or she looks like a kid on his lap which is just... wrong. You seem to have a good sense of body porpotions, so everythings ok in that aspect, I think.
Cloud's hair seems to be always different in every pic. I know It's hard to draw him, but try to do it in the same way so we can recognize him. And why is Aerith's hair so short? Did she cut it? At least tell us so to avoid unnecessary questions.
I can't really comment on anything else, the picture is too small.
Hope that's what you wanted. I didn't mean to offend or bash, just being honest and precise. :3
:o well i agree with sweet janie her body its very small and i think she said everithing just keep practicing .. :) :lol: