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Title: I Come Bearing A Few Fanfics
Description: Please read? I'd like some feedback...


BlackWind - July 23, 2006 03:53 AM (GMT)
My fanfics, there are 6 of them.

My first ever fanfic I wrote, a Cloud/Aerith oneshot. Set in Kingdom Hearts 1.
Come Back

The second one I ever wrote, another Cloud/Aerith, but people say its predictable. I don't like it much because I know its been done many times before, but here.
Aeris' Death

A short Riku/Zexion.
I'll Remember

Unfinished, five chapters so far. Demyx/Zexion
It Started Out Simple

One-shot Zexion/Demyx.
Am I Predictable Now?

And my newest, Demyx/Zexion.
Dreams Do Come True

Feedback please..

xClarexStrife - July 23, 2006 04:03 PM (GMT)
Ahhh! The first two were so sad! i shed a tear at the second CloudxAerith one. But thts because i cry at most CxA fingys <_< :D i loved them! there totally wicked B)

i didn't bother reading the others because i didn't no hu they were, apart from riku but i bet they were rly gd xx :lol:

BlackWind - July 23, 2006 06:32 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (xClarexStrife @ Jul 23 2006, 04:03 PM)
Ahhh! The first two were so sad! i shed a tear at the second CloudxAerith one. But thts because i cry at most CxA fingys <_< :D i loved them! there totally wicked B)

o.o Really? Wow. Thanks! I never thought that the second one was very good... :sweat:

Sadhana - July 23, 2006 06:49 PM (GMT)
I never played KH, so I only read the first two since I didn't know the characters in the other ones.

The first one was sweet. A nice little reunion between Cloud and Aerith with a romantic kiss in the rain. :cleris:

You shouldn't dislike the second one just because it's been done before. I fanfic-ized Cloud's reaction to Aerith's death as well, and I was pretty proud of how it came out. Every writer brings a different flavor to what they're writing, so the same premise (i.e. Cloud's reaction to the death of Aerith) can come out completely unique among a dozen authors. I liked what you did with it. Short but poignant. And there's nothing wrong with that. I hope to read more by you in the future. :)

BlackWind - July 24, 2006 11:09 PM (GMT)
:) Thankies! If anything I feel more confident about how I write now. -laughs- I need to write more Clorith..I never write it anymore... :(




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