Title: Ok, Hope This Is Alright....
Description: Please tell me what ya think!
goddess_in_pink07 - July 9, 2006 09:24 PM (GMT)
M K, what do you all think of this poem. I hope its alright.... its a CXA one... (gee, big surprise <_< ) lol, but anyways, please and thank you! :huggle: :wub: :gift:
"Please do not forget me,
for I am very cold,
for I may fight, and not do right,
so please guide my ways.
Your always on my mind,
and i wish i could rewind...
All the sinful things i've done,
to deserve such as this."
The poem's in Cloud point of view.
OK, i know its not very good, but i like to write poems about my fav couple...( :cleris: )
I wrote it last year actually. I tried writing some more, but i was completely blank. :ermm:
Leave love for goddess! :heart:
Tenshi_Aerith - July 9, 2006 09:32 PM (GMT)
Goddess that was beautiful! I liked it alot!! ^^ it's alot better then most of mine :sweat:
goddess_in_pink07 - July 9, 2006 09:48 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Tenshi_Aerith @ Jul 9 2006, 09:32 PM) |
| Goddess that was beautiful! I liked it alot!! ^^ it's alot better then most of mine :sweat: |
OMG, really? You think so? Thankies! OMG, ten ten i'm gonna bare your children! :huggle: :huggle: LOl, i love you! :huggle: :heart:
Tenshi_Aerith - July 9, 2006 10:21 PM (GMT)
really??!?!! YAY!!! Goddess will bare my children!!! ^^
LadyNelZelpher - July 9, 2006 10:24 PM (GMT)
Awwwwwww!! I love it! :fangirl:
It's so sweet goddess!!
Cloud would be so proud of you :P
"please guide my ways" Love that!! The answer is in the wind :cleris:
goddess_in_pink07 - July 9, 2006 10:27 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (LadyNelZelpher @ Jul 9 2006, 10:24 PM) |
Awwwwwww!! I love it! :fangirl:
It's so sweet goddess!!
Cloud would be so proud of you :P
"please guide my ways" Love that!! The answer is in the wind :cleris: |
Aww, tinkies Nel Nel! I appreciate it so much! :huggle: :huggle: :huggle:
Imaginary__girl - July 9, 2006 10:27 PM (GMT)
Aw! I <3 it Goddess! I can't write poetry to save my life...but yours is very good! I think you captured Cloud's point of view very well!
NekoDono - July 9, 2006 10:27 PM (GMT)
Uber shpiffy G_I_P! ^^ (I'm gonna call you the gipper now! lol) Really pretty. :heart:
ladystrife - July 9, 2006 10:29 PM (GMT)
AWWWWWWWWWWWW omg that was sooooooo beautiful :cray: i loved it soo much :huggle:
goddess_in_pink07 - July 9, 2006 11:29 PM (GMT)
Awww, thank so much guys! You've made me so happy! :huggle: :wub:
Sadhana - July 9, 2006 11:34 PM (GMT)
GIP, you have suddenly made me jealous of the fact that I can't write poetry. :cray: It was very sweet. Of course, its clerithyness was just crazy adorable. We all know that Cloud totally loves her. Good job. I think I've been inspired to try my hand at a poem for once.
Demos Maus - July 9, 2006 11:35 PM (GMT)
Awwwwwww...it was beautiful! I like it a lot, and I think it would fit Cloud most likey. ^^
goddess_in_pink07 - July 9, 2006 11:38 PM (GMT)
AWW, MAS, i'm sure if you tried, you'd make some damn good poetry! Your fan fics are superior, so i'm sure you'd do wonderful writing poetry. :huggle: :huggle:
And, thanks my witto teddy! :huggle: :huggle: Your comments are all appreciated! :huggle: