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Title: Fight


The_Lover_of_Aeris - March 15, 2006 12:58 PM (GMT)
hey I want a freindly battel with some one I can take anyone :cleris:

Materia Thief - March 16, 2006 01:13 AM (GMT)
I don't mean to be rude or offend when I say this, but I really think you should practice and test your RP skills before you go around saying "I can take anyone." Maybe I'm taking your words incorrectly, maybe not, but I think it'd be better if you perhaps tried a little harder with your RP battling. After all, in your last battle, your first line was, and I quote:

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I step onto the battel field I drop my red cloak onto the ground THIS IS WAR


There's no punctuation, numerous spelling errors, and it's dull at that. Try adding description and really giving your writing your all!

Have you read this thread before? It may offer some helpful tips. ^_^

I'll battle you perhaps some other time, after you improve, okay? :)

And I really think you should stop using that Cleris smilie when challenging people to a fight, it's a rather interesting choice.

Lynn - March 16, 2006 06:33 AM (GMT)
TLoA, you already have a battle thread here, so I don't think you'll be needing another one for the moment.

It would also be a very good idea to take MT's words to heart. If you've read the posts in the other RP threads, you'll notice that the members here tend to prefer entries with more substance than "I step onto the battel field I drop my red cloak onto the ground THIS IS WAR".

Even in a battle RP, description and details are important. If you improve in those aspects, then perhaps someone will answer your request for a fight. :)

*closes*




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