Title: A New Fan Fiction Clorith Fan Fic
Description: I wrote this and I am rather embarrased.
NekoDono - February 26, 2006 04:33 PM (GMT)
I just finished chapter 2 of a :cleris: fan fiction. It's drama/angst but the ending warms up. Tifa is not a negative character and Iflana is fairly important character. The summary on the site is... CloudxAerith Even after defeating Kadaj, Cloud still can't get over not saving Aerith. Ifalna is here to show him the truth. T for later violence, complicated situations, and language. Please take it easy on me. ^^ I'm not too good at this yet.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2818626/1/ 012607 - February 26, 2006 05:30 PM (GMT)
You might want to get that beta'd. For example, you're ignoring some basic language rules like a new paragraph each time a different person speaks.
Meggie - March 24, 2006 06:06 PM (GMT)
The first two Chapters are very good... :lmao:
Please continue you story :fangirl:
Cetra_Aerith - March 26, 2006 07:52 PM (GMT)
D: Oh my goodness I regret not reading this sooner!! :huggle: you left me open mouthed! it surely was an unexpected twist!
Please update soon!
oh and I left you a review and all but heh in case I got the lines right I just want you to keep going as intended just make it a happy cleris ending and ummmm..... maybe a baby Sora XD
but that's only if you want :) it's going amazingly so far and I dun wanna ruin it D:
again... can't wait for the update ^_^
ladystrife - April 11, 2006 10:54 PM (GMT)
OMG!! update seriously it is amazing i was soo in to it need to read more
please Wow! write more :huggle: :cleris:
Dark Angel - April 11, 2006 11:07 PM (GMT)
amazing stuff right there. and i know amazing cuz i love to write myslef. keep updating :)
goddess_in_pink07 - April 12, 2006 06:47 PM (GMT)
Very good. I got a little tear-eyed toward the end, but..... snif.... i'm ok!
Please do wrote more.
I love writing fanfics like yours. I just love making my own happy or sad endings. :D
NekoDono - April 14, 2006 02:21 AM (GMT)
Thanks to all of you for being so kind to me about it. And ya, I did mess up a bit in grammar. lol ^^ Hey, you live and you learn! Still, thanks a lot to you all! I think I may write another :cleris: fan fic!
[EDIT: Oh! I added a sub chapter and epilogue! ^^]
aerisbolt - August 26, 2006 05:55 PM (GMT)
Neko I didn't know you wrote a fanfic. It was very good! I really enjoyed it and I loved how you styled the epilogue in a letter from Reeve. I hope you will write more. :huggle:
Trisse - September 4, 2006 09:54 AM (GMT)
OHHH i like your fic!! i also like the 'what if' aspect of the story, it really draws you in!!! i like it!!!
I hope you update soon!!! i am curious to see who this girl cloud met at the station is?!?! lol very interesting!!