Well, I decided to start this topic. I just want you to read this. This plot came from nowhere (maybe after watching AC again and again :whistle: ) and it contains one little spoiler. But it seems everyone know where Cloud lived before the film. So, enjoy :D


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Slowly and quietly I come in. I’m a ghost after all. This place hasn’t changed: still sacred with its great columns, altar and with this patch of flowers, of course. They are still blossoming as if watered every day, as I used to do. So innocent and pure… My heart melts each time I see them or just think about them.

I make my way to the patch and kneel near it. I can feel their happiness at seeing me again. They almost stretch their stems in my direction. A smile escapes from my lips as I take in the scent of these beautiful flowers. White and yellow: my favorite ones. I used to run from my house just to watch them when I was little.

But now everything is so different. This one moment that I could come here, was allowed to me not to care about flowers.

Not about flowers.

My knees shake a bit as I come closer to a figure near the patch. He lies here, covered by a thin blanket, his hand under his head. I can’t hold back my smile, watching him sleeping. His living here was a sort of mystery for me. Until now. I can see one of my flowers pressed between his palms. I try not to giggle, but it’s very hard for me. I’m happy seeing him here, in my place, where we were introduced.

But it’s not only my place anymore. I can see his stuff here. Not too much, but enough for his way of living. He can swiftly pack his things and move somewhere when he has to. But for a certain reason, he lives here. And after this, I can call this church our place, because I know he can feel me here more than anywhere else.

This place means much to both of us. I have no doubts about this. It warms my ghost heart, knowing we have something special: this place to visit.

Suddenly he moves. I can feel my hands shivering, but I can’t stand up and disappear. I can’t take my gaze away from him. But he doesn’t open his beautiful blue eyes. He just rests his left palm on the wooden floor, uncovered by the sheet.

I sigh, soundless.

That scared me a lot. I can’t let him see me now. I need this moment: to just sit near him, to be able to touch him with my ghost hands.

But I can’t give him this feeling now. It would be cruel.

I desperately try to fight this temptation in my heart, in my mind. It's all I can do, to avoid touching his skin. I also rest my hand on the floor, only a few inches away from his. A small shiver runs through my ghost body.

I can feel this warmth from his body; feel his pain and despair, guilt and unwillingness to live. I can hear his soul screaming. I can touch these wounds in his heart.

But now I can’t do anything. And it would kill me if I wasn’t already … dead.

His next move really frightens me. He tries to reach for my hand as if it were real. As if he could feel me here. As if I was alive. But I quickly take my hand away and rest it on my chest. He frowns but doesn’t wake up. It cheers me. It means I have the whole night to watch him. Until the sun starts to rise. Until he starts to open his eyes.
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Special thanks to Lynn, my first (beta) reader :huggle: .

Maybe I'll add more stories. If I write them, of course :P

It's good :cheer:

That's freaking amazing,and you say you're not good at english,PLEASE! you sound like a famous author,I could visualize everything :cleris:

::sniffles:: That was beautiful! Great job!

It was like I could feel Aerith's pain... :sad:

Beautiful work!

OMG!! we need more writers like you :sad: like FFFx3 said ... I couls see and visualize everything... Cloud's expression, her movements the church :cry:

and like Amy-chan said I could feel Cloud and Aerith's pain... :sad: so close yet so far apart :cry:

*sigh* I'm a sucker for tragedies XD

please write more!! :cheer: :bow:

Wow, guys :o ! I love you all :D
I'm glad you like it, really glad :fangirl:

*goes away to catch her muse*
Yeah... Thank you :huggle:

:cleris: forever!

Yes we did love it. Please do more soon. :sad: :cheer:

Great job! :sad: It made me tear up.

^_^ :cleris:

I loved it!

Did I tell I love ya all?:cleris:

Actually, now I'm working on my second attempt, but I should correct a lot. But I think I'll post it in some days.