Actually, I wrote one little story and now I even want to publish it at this forum, but I think I'm too shy for that <_< . So I want somebody read it first and write me if it can be shown to people, in what I'm not sure.
Can I ask for that? :whistle:

*very very VERY weird me :( :( :( *

:lmao: It's not weird at all, Lynx! What you're asking for is a beta-reader, a third view to catch any mistakes/unsuitable content you might have missed-- plenty of fanfic writers do this, and it's actually recommended you beta your fic at least once before publishing it online.

So you're on the right track. ;)

I can read the piece for you, if you want. If so, what would you like me to look out for? Plot/characterisation? Or just limit it to spelling/grammar errors?

Oh, huge thanks :lol: . I think it's because I'm not sure in my English <_< . So that's what I would like to ask you about. Check it please. And, of course, some thoughts about this weird plot :gift:
I'll send you PM in a few minutes