This is my first time. I never wrote any Cloud/Aerith before
My grammer is bad :blush: Please don't be mad about it and it's
Very short one shot and Cloud is ill (AC)



Take me away

By: Dark and Light

A figure lay in the wide field. A field with green grass and beautiful flowers.
The figure that lay in the grass was a young man. “Aerith….” The man said.
“Aerith strife” He said fondly using his surname. He wanted to know how his surname fitted for her. It fitted perfectly “How I wished you where there next to me” The man said. “Cloud…” A feminine voice said. Only Cloud could hear it. Her voice was tormenting his mind. But he was only thinking. Thinking about her delicate face. Thinking about her playful green eyes full of life. Thinking of her
gentle smile…hearing her giggle in the old day’s. It was over all over. “How I wish to meet you” He said whispering in the open sky. No reply, only the whispers of the wind. Cloud yearned for her, he wanted to touch her soft hands. He wanted to touch her lips. But he was to late. “I was to late…” Cloud said trembling. “My eyes…they sting…I feel like I’m about to break” He said thinking about her. “Why did they have to take her away…form me” Cloud said staring at the clouds high in the sky. “I want to embrace you so badly…to feel your warmth…but I never got the chance” Cloud looked next to him. He saw a lonely flower. “Do you feel lonely” He asked staring softly at the flower. The flower swayed softly with the wind. “You look so fragile” Cloud said talking to the flower like it was human. “Your fragile and lonely just like me” Cloud mumbled. “I think I can’t hold this any longer” There was a long pause. “I want to be with her for my sake and hers. I promised I would meet her there…” Cloud trailed off looking at the deep blue sky dotted with soft clouds. “The promised land…” He closed his eyes feeling the soft wind toying with his golden hair. His eyes opened again showing his deep blue eyes with crushed emotions. He never moved from his lying position. “I’m afraid I will fail…” Cloud said trembling. “No!” Cloud said angrily. He felt like he fell in a pit full of despair. “Aerith…I want to be forgiven…no…I want more than that” Cloud said clutching the grass. “I want to die no matter what. As long as I’m with you I’m happy” Cloud whispered. He closed his eyes again. His mind was having fantasy’s. He could hear her sing softly. He loved her sweet voice. “Cloud, Cloud, Cloud” Her voice echoed in his mind. He opened his eyes and smiled. “Aerith” He yelled in the field sounding like a young happy child. “Aerith…you won’t have to wait any longer” His smile was fading a bit “I will meet you soon!” Cloud said his happy voice turning into a desperate one. “I…I…” Cloud stopped. He touched the pick ribbon wrapped around his arm. “Memories…I need more than that” Cloud said his hand not leaving the ribbing. “So warm” Cloud mumbled. “The ribbon feels so warm…and the scent of her hair…flowers” Cloud said smiling at his memory remembering her sweet scent of flowers. Cloud felt weak.
“You don’t have to wait anymore” Cloud whispered. He closed his eyes but tried to open them with all his might to see one last glace of the field. But he saw Aerith floating. Her long brown hair was not in a braid. Her green eyes sparkling. A gentle smile on her delicate face. She looked so childish but yet beautiful. She extended her hand. Cloud stared ad her and smiled. He grabbed her hand. “Let’s go Cloud” She said smiling. Clouds arm fell limply on the grass.

“You beat me to it…You met me first…I’m happy to see your smile and I can feel your warmth….I’m all yours and you are all mine”

“Take me away to the promised land”

Owari


Why did I post it...eek! Oh well....
Good/bad? Please be gentle
And uh...Me and my bad grammer <_<

Oh! I loved it! Write more!! And it was very good ^-^ :cleris:

It's good! ^_^ But you should try leaving more spaces... it's easier to read :)

Keep on writting, you'll see you'll get better in no time! :D

OMG!! beautifull!! im loving it :D

PS: your siggy with link x marron?? me fan to lol! *gives thumbs up to dark n light*

Very beautiful. ^_^
Your not the only one who can't speak english very good. :blush:

Very sweet and cute. <3

That was a touching story, Dark & Light! You should write more stories. I bet I will shed more tears after reading more of your beautiful works. ^_^

Good and Bad,its not my opinion that he should die.Aerith should be brought back,but it was good.